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Reviewer: SkyWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2015 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 21: Tip #3: Take her on a surprise trip PT.1

That was totally fun Michael. I liked that chapter a lot. Loose, fun, Michael and Janelle is awesome. She is a great friend. If my bestfriend did that to me I'd crack her in the face, but would be secretly glad she said it.

Harry sounds like a creep lol. Obviously cos Im gunning for Michael and Julia!



Author's Response:

lmao poor Harry...;) ;)

Reviewer: SkyWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 20, 2015 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 20: Tip #2: Call her just to say you're thinking of her

"I'm scribbling this from 10,000 feet inside my jet. I was in New York for the past two days being stupid busy. And you know why I'm so busy? Because I'ved worked really, really incredibly hard for 20 years to get to the point where I'm at. So stop whining that you feel down after one measly week of job hunting! You're better than that."

I loved that michael was real with her. that made me laugh because Id been thinking about her whining after one week and no bites. 

I really hate that he is trying so hard with Diana when she clearly doesnt give one single monkey fuck about him in return. I hope he doesnt have to learn the hard way. 

Also, I dont like the way Julia is toying with Harry, but maybe she hasnt quite realised the gravity of her feelings for Michael yet, or maybe she is avoiding accepting her feelings toward Michael....

Either way, I loved this chapter :)

Reviewer: Lovely One Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2015 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

Ohmygoodness I am literally losing my shit right now. This story is pure gold. Is it night?..September?.. Is this Earth...?

Already struggling to keep it together until your next update, no pressure!!

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 19, 2015 08:08 am Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

Oh my effin GOD! I looooved this chapter! Freaking amazing! I loved the drunk Julia. I loved the honesty, and can I just say...Michael is being an asshole!



Author's Response:

Hahaha! Everyone's so split on who the asshole is! I love it!!! Thank you so much for reading <3 <3 

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

Good lord!! I'm almost glad it wasn't Michael on the other end because that was seriously like the worst drunken tantrum I've ever seen lol. It probably would have made him even more hesistant to commit to her because she just exposed her 9 burlap bags of crazy!

Now onto Michael. The way he tried to avoid the conversation with Julia...*SLAP!* For a functioning relationship to work with Julia's character, he's going to have to start being more straightforward. Or I can just see her getting really frustrated and CRAZY more often.

AND he just needs to lay it all on the table for her like 'Look if you're my girl then this, this, and this is probably going to happen to you and this and that will change blah blah blah, and let her make her own choice. 

 



Author's Response:

They're both the worst. They need to be shaken or something! And you're totally right-- there's something of a personality clash between the two of them. They'll need to talk that out big time. They're both their own styles of crazy, that's for sure..Poor Julia. Everyone hates her as of late. I've made a horribly unlikable character, I think! She'll redeem herself soon, I think (I hope???)

thanks for reading and reviewing :) :) :) :)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

This was the most epic drunk dial EVER. 



Author's Response:

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooool. Can you imagine being on the receiving end of that tirade? Like no...

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

BTW I have to add, I love this story! Definitely one of the best written ones on here. I don't usually read until they get to a certain length, been meaning to check this one out for awhile. Once I started I could not put it down. You've got me hooked!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! That just made my evening :D

Reviewer: jazii Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

Damn, that was a lot Jules. I don't know if I like her a lot in this chapter. She's being a little petty cause she ought to know what she's getting into. But, also, Michael is being shifty as hell. He knows that he has both money and power. If he wants to make things happen with Julia he has the strings in his own hands. It's just a matter of making sacrifices. But then how much does he really care about Julia?

And as to Julia, I go back and forth with her personality. I like it in this story but I know I may not try to be friends with her in real life. I'm forgiving her behavior tonight because she was wasted, but that was a lot.

Lol, thanks girl - update soon!

Author's Response:

lmao yeah it was a lot. She wants way too much way too soon. She's definitely the bad guy this time around. Which I think is okay--she shouldn't be the victim all the time, you know? She fucked up here. Plus, given her tendency to just get snappy when she doesn't get her way...she's definitely been being a bitch. Her worries about stalkers, etc, are certainly valid, but I agree with you that she's being petty and she ought to know what's up. And either way, Michael literally just got out of a long term, horrible relationship! She's being crazy, that's for sure.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 10:33 am Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

Omg I so hope that was Katherine. Cause Julia told her that Michael "threw her on the bed" lmao! Awkward! 



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¯_(ツ)_/¯

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 10:32 am Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

Omg I so hope that was Katherine. Cause Julia told her that Michael "threw her on the bed" lmao! Awkward! 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 09:31 am Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

How does Julia even know that's Diana's voice on the phone?! Usually you need to talk to someone a few times to recognize their voice that fast and she only met her in person once, and very briefly. I  think she may be jumping to conclusions she's so drunk it could be any female lol. I would laugh my ass off if it is Katherine. Cause Michael still lives at home right?

That girl is a mess. She keeps trying to force Michael to commit but she fails to realize its too soon for him! He has feelings but is confused, I can understand him. He was very honest with her in that regard. And Julia, how the hell are you going to ask if you're his girlfriend when he hasn't taken you on a real date or given you a sincere sober kiss yet? Calm the fuck down. 

That being said he shouldn't be making any songs for Diana or letting her still use him professionally or sexually. He's not going to be able to move on if he doesn't just tell her to fuck off once and for all. He needs to come to the realization that she is a slag who isn't and was never worth his time in the first place. Unfortunately he needs to make this realization on his own. 

I say that if he doesn't want to take his relationship with Julia to the next step, right now, that's OK. Julia needs to make it clear to him that she won't be waiting around like a lost puppy for him to make up his mind. Stay friends but she should go and date other guys for fun. Seeing her with another guy will be sure to put a fire under his ass if his feelings are true, which I think they are. 

Bottom line, Julia needs to approach this like a mature adult who has self-respect. The way she's acting is just juvenile and clingy. 



Author's Response:

Okay, so, I love this review on so many levels. FINALLY someone sees that Julia's kinda being the crazy one here! I can't say much, but all I'll say is yes, yes, yes, yes, yes!

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 18, 2015 08:03 am Title: Chapter 32: Eaten Alive

OH NO! why did Diana answer the phone whaaat. Loved this chapter, update soon pleaaaase! :)))))) 

P.s- sorry for never rlly reviewing, I'm never bothered to sign into my account but just know that I always read whenever you update!



Author's Response:

 

loooooooooooooooooool diana

it's alright! i just loving hearing back from people, if only it's a word or two :) thanks for reading!!!!!

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2015 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 31: Sink or Swim PT. 2

Hey, I've missed you. Michael can be such a hopeless romantic, hahaha!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! And yes, yes he can.. or maybe over compensation of some sort?

Reviewer: 2DreamFire Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2015 09:33 pm Title: Not a chapter

You are the most important! Focus on yourself and on getting better. *sending lots of support your way* You'll still have me as a reader whenever you're able to update again <3

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2015 09:28 pm Title: Not a chapter

get well soon!! just so you know your story always makes my day. take care of yourself first <3

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