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Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2015 03:47 am Title: Father vs Stepfather II

great chapter



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thanks

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2015 10:00 pm Title: Father vs Stepfather II

Well, in his defense, those visits need to be regulated until proven otherwise. It's not healthy for a kid to hear a parental figure badmouthed constantly and given what Marcus has been saying to the media....

Still, they need to discuss that. Like by having Jisela accompany them or something. If Marcus is traveling on Michael's (ultimately) dime, then he needs to abide by Michael's rules. Nina also needs to be more forthcoming ahead of time, so that she can mitigate Michael's crazy better. Backing someone into a corner never turns out well in the long run.

Great update!



Author's Response:

They need like a third person to come in and regulate the visits until things settle down. Michael's NOT going to get along with Marcus at this point. Period. So Nina's hopes of having this civil circle of parenthood is down the drain and Marcus is not going to be able to come around Nina without crossing his boundaries. Poor little Maddox... The confusion is only beginning for him.

Nina knows if she tries to tell Michael something that has to do with Marcus, his answer will be no so she strategically lays it on him last minute when there's no way TO say no, which is like you said never going to turn out well in the long run.

Thanks for sticking with me through my period of super slow updates. I know I'm slacking majorly. I worry the quality is getting poorer and poorer.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2015 04:00 pm Title: Father vs Stepfather II

I'm really disliking Nina right now. I really am. I'm at the point where I feel like she deserves Marcus. She needs to just leave and be with his ass. They work out some custody thing where Michael has them when he's not touring/working and she has them when he is. Take Marucus and ride off into the damn sunset. 

I'm feeling like that is what she wants deep down. 

Even her reprimanding him about eating the omlet. I mean it's not like he was In There acting high and mighty. He was humble so if he wasn't feeling the omlet how would that be a reflection on ole girls cooking?  Nina infuriates me. Smdh. 

Back to Marcus. If he's there for his son then he shouldn't mind being with just him. Why would Nina need to be there at all? She needs to get a grip and fast. If she wants to regulate the visits then do that but talk don't need to be discussing anything that has nothing to do with Mad. 

Why can't she see what the hell it is she's doing?  

You got me in my damn feels!!! Lol. More soon <333



Author's Response:

LOL Nina's on your shit list! She has been so reluctant to fully let go of Marcus that it seems as if she wants him back, but she has a new love that has grown for Michael (and three of his kids) There shouldn't be enough there to motivate her to go that route, but we'll see!

He wasn't eating the omlete because he was stressed out. He doesn't eat very much when he's under stress and that bothers her (even though it's HER that's causing all his stress atm)

She'll realize here soon enough! Major drama is on the way!

<3

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2015 03:48 pm Title: Father vs Stepfather II

- I understand Michael but damn be can't do that shit , it's not like Marcus is a dead beat he wants to spend time with his son and be there but the way Michael is going about it is all wrong , if it was the other way around he wouldn't like that and yea Marcus needs to accept the fact that Nina moved on but he's hurt it will take time 



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Both Marcus and Michael are in the wrong. This situation could have been handled way more maturely on both of their ends, but you're right, Marcus is hurt... Michael's just insanely jealous.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2015 03:17 pm Title: Father vs Stepfather II

That Markus has some no good plans coming up. He needs to go back to prison not jail prison.



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Lol, yeah Marcus is up to no good, but in his mind he's doing what he feels is right.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2015 05:10 pm Title: April Fools

Chile...Nina is playing dumb on purpose. She knows damn well, that Michael is right about Marcus all the way. It's not her job to force that fool to be a father. That should be a GIVEN from him!

And, she wants Michael to be the bigger person! ? Hell, the man has swallowed his tongue and pride for months while Marcus ran around talking negative about him. At some point, Michael HAS to check him AND Nina, be damned if she gets mad.Screw that!

Nina's right about one thing:when Prince is born, some things will change. However, she forgets that Michael just may have the tea and the joke is on her. The man tries, only to be put down or shut down.

Just let Michael go ahead and fuck Marcus up. Some people don't learn until you thrash their ass, give them the what for, or stomp a mud hole in their ass, in that order!

Author's Response:

You are absolutely right about it's not her job to force him to be a father. This applies to all the women out here with POS baby daddies. Let. them. go! 

And right, Michael had been forced to hold his tongue for much too long now. It's time that he sets everyone straight. If that means whoopin Marcus's ass then so be it.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2015 01:38 am Title: April Fools

First off it's not Nina's job to make an effort for Marcus to be in Maddox's life. That should be up to Marcus and Marcus alone. Mad has a really great step dad so really and truly if his real dad ain't making the effort without being prodded then That's an issue. Smh. Nina exhausts me with her thought process most times.

When he asked her not to do anything to hurt him cause he was in his feels...Awwwwwwe. *Hugs him tightly!

Lmao. What I wouldn't give to see Michael's face when Chris came out in that mask. Lmaooooooooo.  

After all the slander Michael should not have to conceded being the bigger man when talking one on one with his wife. It's not like he called him that to his face. 

Drama is coming. Man Bring it!!! 

More Soon! <333

PS I hope to god you find your chapters. I would be soooooo salty if that happened.  Creepy internet hugs for comfort!!!



Author's Response:

I did not find my chapters and I'm super salty about it... 

Nina's pretty stubborn. Her thought process is crazy, and it could just be that internally she's the one that just can't let Marcus go because of her guilt for leaving him. Maddox loves Michael to death and he's a great step dad. That should be good enough for her.

Michael was all up in his feels too... You'd never see Nina that deep in her feels, if she has any lol

Drama is on the way... and so is the baby!!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2015 03:47 pm Title: April Fools

Did you check your trash? That's where my auto saves go. That's on a Mac though, if you haven't already, I'd Google about "find autosaves on a _______" (mac or pc). I've found many a files that way.

 

That prank was evil. Seriously. Still....Nina is asking for it with all of her stubbornness. She expects him to do a lot and complains when he doesn't, but she can't even pretend to see things from his perspective when it comes to Marcus. Marriage = compromise...or at least something that looks like compromise.



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I was all over Google. I've checked trash. I've done an index search for anything with a .asd or whatever the extension is and one for all the .docx. I managed to recover a 400 word version for one of the others and that's it. They HAVE to be somewhere though... I've had them sitting in word for literally like 4 days there had to be more autosaves... But my PC is really screwy lately I need to just buy a new one. 

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2015 12:20 pm Title: April Fools

- Michael really needs to understand that , that is Maddox father no if ands or buts he was there before Michael and he can't be just shoved away because Michael doesnt like him

Reviewer: islandgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2015 04:04 am Title: Father vs Stepfather I

I don't normally comment but I have to on this one...Nina gets on my fucking nerve, all she heard was Michael brought a bike for Maddox and surprise surprise Marcus is now coming to town like seriously...Nina is stupid as fuck, she don't ever think of Michael feeling when it come to that jackass...Nina should have talk to Michael first before buying Marcus ticket and booking hotel room for him...Nina just give Marcus more thing to run to the media with then again she don't care as long as he spend time with his son which am all for but what he doing to Michael I can't get pass but Nina sure can...I hate that when Michael show up unanounce it's going to make him look like an crazy jealous husband instead of a man trying to protect what's his 

update soon 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2015 04:07 pm Title: Father vs Stepfather I

Nina should not be making plans and reservations with her ex without at least telling Michael about it first. She doesnt need his permission but its just courtesy when you are in a relationship. She also needs to start treating all her kids plus Michael as a family unit. She shouldn't single Maddox out so much he is going to resent it when he gets older. 

I would also argue that Marcus should be taking much more initiative to spend time with his son than he does. Nina shouldnt have to go through so much effort. Leave the ball in his court for a change. If he doesnt care then honestly it's Marcus' loss. Maddox has an excellent father figure in Michael. And a much better example of a human being. Nobody's perfect but Marcus is a convicted felon and has already spread all their business to the media. As far as I'm concerned good riddance. 

I think Nina still feels guilty on some level for ditching Marcus for Michael while he is in prison. She needs to come to the realization that she owes him nothing. He failed both her and their son long before Michael was in the picture and continues to be a shit father. 

Grrr she makes me so angry.

I hope Michael keeps Maddox in his mind when he talks with Marcus though. A huge showdown and conflict won't help anyone at this point. 



Author's Response:

Right, she should have asked Michael long before paying for anything. That is common courtesy. Marcus is too blinded by his jealous and rage right now to realize his mistakes when it comes to stepping up to the plate with Maddox. He thinks that he has to get his family back first in order to then focus on being a dad. But he obviously has it all backwards. Nina does feel guilty for leaving when she promised to stay with him, but she does need to let it go and move on if she's going to move on.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2015 10:02 am Title: Father vs Stepfather I

These two -_-. Their communication sucks. I love that Michael first had some moments with his kids. Despite everything that is going on, he has his priorities.

Nina trying to lie like that? That was dirty....she's lied in the past so if she's really true about wanting a real relationship with Michael, she needs to stop lying. Marcus has made it clear that his priorities aren't to have a close relationship with his son, or else he wouldn't be running a smear campaign on herself and Michael. He's too vengeful right now and that mainly hurts his son. Let Michael teach the kid how to bike; Marcus should have enough money from interviews to fly his own self to Santa Monica.



Author's Response:

Michael does have his priorities in order when it comes to the children, that's for sure. He'd put them before any drama any day.

Nina's little white lie was low... It would have been even lower if the money had directly come out of Michael's pocket. Her consistent efforts in trying to include Marcus in their family are proving more and more futile because he really isn't showing that his intentions are to play a civil part in this family. Maybe if he saw the things he is missing out on like teaching his son how to ride a bike, it would shock him into reality. Large sums of money given to people who usually have none burn holes in their pockets quick!

Reviewer: Briannasamuels Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 02, 2015 04:46 am Title: Father vs Stepfather I

Michael isn't being nice that's her sons father Maddox needs his dad and Michael doesn't seem to get that and he's hurt that she left him smh they need to be a little bit more sensitive 



Author's Response:

Michael is always rude when it comes to Marcus, but Marcus hasn't shown Michael any respect either.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2015 11:17 pm Title: Father vs Stepfather I

Lawwwwdd they can be too cute when they want to be. And then...

Michael buying Mad the bike was a cute gift. He's being a father figure. That in No way nullifies Marcus' being a father to his son. At this time i'm very skeptical that he has any intention of bonding with Maddox. His whole goal right now is to get Nina back. This weekend is going to show and prove that. 

Why did she have to lie about the arrangements in the first place? It just makes things look more suspicious.

I Would be mad about Michael saying "he paid" any other time but this time? Nope. Why is Nina the one putting out for Marcus honoring his responsibility?  I bet he's soaking it up that he's living on Michael's dime SMFH. Probably thinkin Nina is using Michael for his money and he's getting in on it.

When Michael shows up in Santa Monica shit will hit the fan. 

Sigh

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

Marcus's intentions are shady though there is a glimmer of hope that he does really want to be a good father to his son. Nina lying about the arrangments was dumb on her part it did make Michael's suspicions grow.

And hell yeah it would be rude for Michael to say 'he paid' ANY other time lol because it's not like he'd approve if Nina suddenly decided she wanted to work.

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 01, 2015 10:51 pm Title: Father vs Stepfather I

Ding,ding,ding! Let's get ready to rumble!!! Michael like:when you see me in the streets Marcus,remember you'n know me! Lol.

Nina, Nina, Nina! Lord, she exhausts me sometimes with all of her decisions without even talking to her husband about it first. She just, BAM, I'm going/doing x, y, z, what you think after the fact though.

Author's Response:

LOL!! 

Nina was wrong for not talking to Michael first before just ordering a plane ticket like she did... smh

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