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Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 11:08 pm Title: Case of the Ex II

Yes, Michael you need that anger management class baby. Like, foreal. I thought my mood swings were terrible but they ain't got nothing on Mike's, lol. Anyway, I understand how Chivonn feels about it and that she gets afraid from time to time because all she seems to think about is Tatiana's face and what michael done to her. 

Now, to keisha trifling, dirty, spank, messing around with Bryan having face ass know she wrong. The good side to this is that she told Mike the actual truth about the baby but damn did you have to really thot that low. Like come on girl they are best fucking friends. Who does that??!!?? I guess, keisha, huh. Smdh. Jesus needs to come through now cause Kenosha gone need him after what she just said. Cause Mike is gonna set it off now and Bryan is gone get his too. 



Author's Response:

Yes! He needs that anger management class like tomorrow lol He's going to end up single if he keeps flippin' his switch on Chivonn. 

Keisha is trifling... too low. 

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 10:54 pm Title: Case of the Ex II

Okay... It took me a good 30 minutes to soak this on because I simply needed a minute to process this ratchet ghetto mess... Wait ... What? Keisha fucked Bryan and he was the baby daddy of her spawn? That is some nasty shit going on there... I know Michael is about to go off in that car... Jesus  fix it quick !!!! Michael really needs to regulate his mood swings. He has got more mood swings than a bitch on her period.. Anyway, I give him props for admitting to his PO that needs help in controlling his anger.. I give him some points.. But now chivonn is getting nightmares over his past transgressions with Tatiana...Looks like she is going to need counseling and medication..sigh...This is pure madness!!!! 



Author's Response:

Chivonn's got the right to be scared, but she also needs to trust him if she's even going to try at all. But hopefully with the weight of that abortion off his shoulders and this anger management he'll be a better person. 

Keisha and Bryan are about to feel the wrath of Michael.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 10:35 pm Title: Case of the Ex II

Bryan!? Can that man please learn how to put on a condom. Hint: the twins don't go in there as well.

I'm eager to hear what happens next



Author's Response:

LMAO. It'll be very believable how it happened with Keisha. Michael's kind of to blame, however they were both still very wrong to do that behind his back.

Reviewer: TenderLovingCare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 10:17 pm Title: Case of the Ex II

Hahaha you seriously know how to freaking tease us with these cliff hangers! I give michael permission to be violent only ONE time and that should be used by him slapping the stupidity out of Keisha! Girl is crazy for messing with his 'best friend' and Bryan is crazy too! That dude is gonna be half a million dollars in child support debt by the time he hits 30! 



Author's Response:

LOL sorry! Bryan's in the wrong too for sure. And smh yes he will be!

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 09:53 pm Title: Case of the Ex II

I'm glad Michael brought up the anger management with his PO.  Step 2 taken care of. I'm proud of you too Michael!!

Its so sad to see that Chiv is developing or more like manifesting the fear she has of Michael's past actions. She hasn't quite let go of it yet and he's noticing more and more. That's not helping him and she did promise to help him. Both their actions having the opposite needed effect to fix the issue. That could cause all kinds of mess.

Speeking of MESS!!!!

"Father...(back up choir sings...) Can you hear me noooooooowwwwww." Lawhamercy. What in the actual f@$&& Bryan?!?!?!?!?! If that's the truth that's some foul shit. I wonder if he was scared when he heard Michael was going to see Kiesha? That's some type a mess. 

I guess Michael's gonna be looking for a new place to live. Just don't do no stupid shit Mike!!!!

Queen of the Cliff hangers I swear. It gives me the crackhead itch cause I want more now. Lmao. Soon!<333



Author's Response:

LMAO!! Bryan can't keep his D to himself and he doesn't wrap it obviously LOL. There's going to be a reasonable story behind it (reasonable but not reasonable), but best believe Michael will not take it lightly. and Chivonn will have to pick sides.

With Chivonn its like she's finding she's bitten off maybe more than she can chew. Like she never really recognized his possessive behavior until after finding out about Tatiana. Cause now its like really evident and getting worse. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 09:20 pm Title: Case of the Ex II

Chile if this ain't a mess!!!! So Keisha's baby daddy woulda been Chivonn's brother? LMFAOOOO GTFO. I can't lawd. Dis too much. Lol smh. Trifling as hell, no other words for it. Bryan was just slinging dick to hood rats like that? Wait Til Chevy hears this mess lmao whoo lawd. And as for Michael, he needs to learn to control them funky ass mood swings before he ends up single. Bad enough he can't last longer than a few minutes in bed, but then have the nerve to have a fucked up attitude too? Chile cheese! He needs to get his shit all the way together and keep it together. 



Author's Response:

Yep! You'll find out how in the next chapter. It's wont' be surprising. lol Wait til Chevy hears it? What about Michael! His best friend slept with his (at the time) main chick.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 01:15 am Title: I got a Problem with Anger

Lmao this is a hilarious mess! Michael needs to get his damn life. Check them raggedy hoes before worrying about Sean and other niggas being in Chevy face. She's banging with a gorgeous body, of course men are gonna want her. She needs to tell his jealous ass that he needs to make sure he's doing what he needs to do and not worry about other niggas. That's the damn problem. He's being a shitty boyfriend so far. Done lost his damn mind. Got a lotta damn nerve to be pressed over Sean but getting a ride to work from a thirsty ho. Chevy needs to cuss his ass out. 



Author's Response:

LOL I'm glad you can see the humor in it. That's kind of the point of the story lol I should rename the story My  brother's best friend : The boyfriend from hell. 

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 12:04 am Title: I got a Problem with Anger

Well, these two are cute. Even though Mike still needs to tame his Cobra and make some music between the sheets. Boy is sprung, but that's no excuse for just being able to keep it together for quickies. And I surely hope Keisha isn't pulling any stunt. Or if she does, Michael better keep his hands and other parts of his body to himself...



Author's Response:

LOL tame his Cobra, yes he does. Of course Keisha is going to want to pull a stunt... 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 10:40 pm Title: I got a Problem with Anger

Ugh! Michael probably doesn't want anything to do with Keisha..but hoes--girls like that don't care if a man is tied down. Well let's see if she will do it. Michael need to suck up his damn pride. No anger management...? We'll see. He needs somebody to talk to if he wants their relationship to work. He needs to work on his anger and emotions with anything really 



Author's Response:

Right, Keisha will sure be doing all she can anytime he gives her a minute of his time. He needs at least a one on one with a counselor. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 10:24 pm Title: I got a Problem with Anger

What? Why can't Bryan do it? And how did Michael manage to sneak into her bed and get some in the morning without Chivonn at least saying a peep? And now he gets to call up any chick....if only he trusted Chivonn as much as she trusts him. After all, he could call one of his brothers.



Author's Response:

Bryan works an hour after Chivonn leaves. There wouldn't be enough time for him to drive 20 minutes out of the way wait for however long this meeting takes and then drive another twenty minutes back to drop Michael off and then to his job. 

Chivonn will get him later. Before work isn't really a good time to talk about your problems. 

You're right! He could have called any of his brothers, but he chose to call Keisha...

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 09:48 pm Title: I got a Problem with Anger

Kiesha is not the best choice to drive him but he does need to have some kind of conversation with her. In the car on the way to an appointment is not the appropriate time though and he shouldn't be using her like that. But he never even found out if she actually aborted his baby or not, just assumed the rumor was true. She was pathetically dumb enough to keep going back to him all those years so i doubt she aborted his kid if anything she would have used it as a way to keep him. Now she keeps trying to talk to him since he got out, he needs to shut her down for good and give her some kind of closure. Cause based on what he said, it sounds like he treated her like shit for years so he owes her that. But that's it, afterwards tell her bye bye and delete her number from his phone and never see her again. Stop using her for crap, he has done more than enough of that. He had better not screw this up and those pants had better remain closed.

And yes to anger management! He needs it. His jealousy is ridiculous and he goes from calm to enraged in a flash. 

And Risa was foul for not telling Chivonn she dated Michael. Even if it was for a week, it was relevant information because he basically started sleeping with her sister when she wouldn't put out. Funny how it never came up....gotta wonder now if she can be trusted. I was giving her the benefit of the doubt but her behavior doesn't sit right with me.



Author's Response:

Yes! I agree Michael needs to find out the baby was not his, but he needs to stop relyin' on people just cause he knows he can.

Anger management will be a must! because his behavior is about to cost him alot possibly more trouble and maybe even Chivonn. 

Reviewer: TenderLovingCare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 08:51 pm Title: I got a Problem with Anger

The first step is admitting your have a problem. The second is doing something about it. And the third is recovery. I'm just glad michael got done with one out of three steps. He better get his behind on those anger management classes cause I can tell Chivonn's getting reaaaaalllll tired of his attitude. 

For some reason I still feel bad for Sean. Even though he did beat the mush out of Michael. I just wanna know whether he has something mischievous up his sleeve or if he truly is hurting in a way cause chivonn didn't choose him. 

As for Risa... No comment. I like that she's looking out for her best friend. But the way she is doing it just seems so... Sneaky.

As for Keisha taking michael to see that manager guy... All I can say is, he better keep it in his pants. those hands to himself. And His lips sealed. Cause Sean will probably jump at the moment he fucks up with Chivonn. Lol please don't keep me waiting long girl! This is one of my favorite stories and I wanna see what will happen during this ride with Keisha! 

PS atleast she will get the chance to tell him whatever she keeps saying she has to say that way she can finally stop blowing up his cellphone xD



Author's Response:

I feel bad for Sean too, I mean Michael threw the first punch AND pulled a blade so he kind of had every right to give him a beat down. Whether or not his motives are pure... stay tuned.

Risa is sneaky and she may or may not have Chivonn's best interests in mind.

And Keisha... I can say no more.

Michael does need to know that the baby was not his though. That could take a huge weight off his shoulders.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 08:05 pm Title: I got a Problem with Anger

I have to give Michael some props for at least admitting to himself he has anger issues. That's the first step so I hope he goes through with telling his PO he needs the help. Who cares what she says as long as he's bettering himself and for the sake of his relationship. All that jealousy anger is for the birds and he needs to get it in check. I mean trust Chiv. If he wants her trust where is his? 

Nah Chiv your girl Risa is still foul. If she admires to trying to break things up with Micharl and her own flesh and blood you got to think hey would she do me the same or worse? Best friend or not? That whole night Michael was trying to hold his tongue and she kept pushing shit. There's a reason for that. 

Shade...please take that puppy dog shit on elsewhere. 

Kiesha?...shit bout to go down and Michael better not slip up over foolishness. I will beat his ass my damn self. Troubles on the horizon I can feel it and tell *MJ voice. 

On pins and needles girl. More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

Yes, Michael finally realizes that he has a problem that he needs to get help with. Hopefully he decides to take action to correct it before Chev gets too fed up with his craziness.

In Risa's case, her sister Andrea was wrong for taking her man so she kinda had a reason for being vengeful and trying to break them up. It's still a little shady. Will Risa end up being one of those fake friends? I don't know.

Poor Sean... he's just so hated on, but is he really a bad guy?! LOL 

 

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2015 07:44 pm Title: I got a Problem with Anger

Really Michael???? You asked Ratchet Keisha to drive you to that appointment? I can't deal with Michael right now... However he is coming to terms with  anger management issues and making somewhat of conscious effort to seek help managing his anger.. As for the sex... No comment ... I suppose in due time he will get it together in that department.. He got a big dick but he has to know to make love.. Oh well... Please continue....



Author's Response:

He is just TOO into Chivonn he can't keep it together in bed. lol. 

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 14, 2015 10:58 am Title: The File

Oh wow... If it was me I would walk away from him and never EVER come back! I could never be with a man who had done that. NOT EVER!

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