[Report This]Date: Feb 03, 2015 06:12 pm Title: Shutting Down the Gossip Girl
I see it too giiiirrrrllll OmGGGGGGGG!!!!! but michael fucked up tho by saying that
Date: Jan 27, 2015 06:47 pm Title: Seeing Red Again
Bryan F'ed up! :/ all that time, he let Michael believe that his child had been aborted!? smh.. Least he could do now is apologies! Chivonn better set her brother straight cuz he tryna act like he did nothing wrong..
Author's Response:
Right! hopefully in the next chapter Chivonn will set him straight and not be upset with him.
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2015 07:46 am Title: Seeing Red Again
Mike's reaction was surprisingly appropriate given the circumstances.
I can't believe Bryan KNEW all along the baby was his and said nothing while Michael cried over it. That IMO is the unforgivable part. And then to act like the whole thing is not a big deal and Michael needs to get over it. Pfft please. Bryan you know you are trifling as hell. The sleeping with Keisha part is not why Mike is so angry, cause who hasn't really? Nope Bryan you deserved that punch and then some. Too bad Mike didn't kick him in the balls, he would have been doing the human race a favor.
I hope Chivonn chews his ass out too cause he needs a reality check. She should be kicking him out to go live with one of his many baby mammas and Michael should stay. She had damn well better not be mad at Michael in this case. He does plenty of things wrong but this is not one of them.
Author's Response:
Right, Michael doesn't care who slept with Keisha, it was more the principle of the whole thing. And him feeling like Bryan's been suddenly oh so helpful to him just out of pity and not genuine care.
And right, she can't be mad at Michael for that...
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2015 07:25 am Title: Seeing Red Again
"Peace out punk...Love you though!" Gawd I can't stand him. DEAD. LMAO!! Nah I'm lyin I love his corny ass when he's not being belligerent and jealous. Him and Chiv are so cute when every thing is peaceful.
I do hope Chiv gets another job and Shade can kiss both her and Michael's asses. Mope someplace else with your shady ass (You know I can't stand him. Lmaooooo)
He should definitely talk to Tony. I doubt if he's his friend he would want to hold Michael back for the sake of his own pride. I'm sure there's a wave in Michael's success that he can ride too. Honestly Michael needs to have this in his life right now. Being up in Walmart is not going to help him with wanting to really hash out his issues. He needs this motivation. I say he talks to Tony and takes the deal. I'm just hoping that it's a legit operation.
Bryan...Bryan... Bryan. Shit if I say his name one more time. Dude is a fucking MESS!!! Thank god Chiv is his sister cause Lawd who knows he might have snuck in and impregnated her too behind Michael's back. That shit is fucked up. So what if it didn't end up being Michael's baby? Nigga that was your baby. What the fuck is wrong with this cat yo. Making babies and throwing them out with the bath water. SMFH!!! He doesn't even realize how foul what he did was and that is disturbing enough.
I knew Michael was going to bounce. I'm glad Chiv was enough to calm him down. Lawd I did laugh picturing his little arms flailing and trying to hit Bryan in his back. Lmao. I hope he gets stuff together. This is mainly why I hope this think with the music is legit so he can set a life up for himself.
More soon bb!! Crackhead fienin...<333
Author's Response:
I love the rude, but sweet at the same time kind of guys. I can't stand them but I love them lol
Michael's finally getting a chance at his goal in life, so Chivonn should start looking for her chance. That secretary job is a dead end. LOL but what if SEAN is a good guy?!
I can't even speak on Bryan cause I know I made him do wrong and look bad.
and LOL Michael really has no business takin' on dudes bigger than him... lol he's lucky he didn't get his face messed up again.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2015 10:38 pm Title: Seeing Red Again
Lawd, Bryan, really homie??? Really? You would stoop that low and do some shit like that behind Mike's back. Whatever happened to being best friends? I guess that was thrown out the window a long as time ago. I'm happy Mike punched his ass. He deserved it. And for Chivonn was to say that her and Mike would have some problems if he did anything. Like, the dafuck!?!?!? What if Risa did some shit like that to you tho? Hopefully, Mike would calm down and talk to her. But Bryan dude. Smfh.
Date: Jan 26, 2015 10:33 pm Title: Seeing Red Again
Wow.. For once, Michael's anger is justified. Bryan is real nonchalant about it which makes it even more fucked up. He don't even care. I hope Mike won't shut Chivonn out. Just cool off a bit then talk to her. He clearly can't live with Bryan anymore. That is some foul shit chile. Keisha is trifling as hell smh and Bryan ain't shit. He don't even care about Mike feelings or even apologize. Wow.
Author's Response:
Right, for once! lol Bryan may not be as heartless as he appeared in this chapter. Remember he's under a pile of shit of his own and now Michael's bringing this past crap up? He just didn't handle it the right way.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2015 09:51 pm Title: Seeing Red Again
Bryan is a mess.
Keisha is a hoe
Michael is very emotional (and volatile)
Chivonn (thusfar) is the most put together character.
I sorta want to see Chivonn fall from grace. However, even more than that, I want to see her and Michael have a chapter of happiness.
Author's Response:
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And you're right Chivonn hasn't had a moment of her own where her weaknesses are really exposed. And actually the next chapter is going to be a sort of happy one. Michael gets his first paycheck and he takes Chivonn out on that date.
Date: Jan 26, 2015 09:43 pm Title: Seeing Red Again
Ummm.. That escalated quickly!!! That wasn't cool Bryan!!! Wow!!!! So Michael is going to sing Thriller huh?? Sounds like this record deal seems legit.. Let's see!!! Michael just has to remain focused... He does not need the negative energy right in his life... Sigh...
Author's Response:
Lol it's going to be weird thinking of a Bad Era Michael in the Thriller zombie get up.
Date: Jan 26, 2015 09:40 pm Title: Seeing Red Again
😳😳😰😰 He's moving out? Well I kind of seen that fight comming and since he's staying with a family member its for the best. Bryan sick as shit!
"And you ain't gettin' this dick later. Peace out, punk! Love you, though."<<he's too much! Lmaooo
and she's looking for a new job. I'm neutral about that. It's kool
"Super sperm, shootin' ass."<<that's what the hell is wrong with Bryan!! The truth!!
Author's Response:
Yep, he's out! Hopefully staying back home is for the best and not the worst. His brothers are still into his father's business.
And yeah, Bryan needs to get it together.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:53 am Title: Case of the Ex II
I also think Chivonn is a bit paranoid about Michael being obsessive. He has definite anger problems but I find it cute how vulnerable he can get with her. His clinginess is sweet.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 07:50 am Title: Case of the Ex II
Roflmao sorry I should not be laughing but could it get anymore ratchet? Bryan knocking up Michael's hood rat ex gf. I don't doubt that serious amounts of alcohol were involved on his part but still there is no excuse. Michael is going to go nuclear but I don't think he will be mad at Keisha. He doesn't give two shits about her. Oh no, he will store it all up for Bryan and then try to fucking murder him. Put him in the hospital or something.
Bryan does deserve a slap or two for betraying his friend like that BUT we all know Michael isn't going to be able to stop. And he won't listen to any "explanations" or apologies. I hope he doesn't cause too much serious damage or wind up in jail over that hoe.
Bryan's penis must be half rotten and ready to fall off. Cause he obviously sticks it in any old hole and never wraps it up. Gross.
Author's Response:
Bryan's got it coming. But how far can Michael really take it before he gets kicked out of their home or hurting Chivonn. Bryan still is her brother whether he betrayed Michael or not.
Michael ran around a lot on Keisha so he shouldn't be surprised that she was doing it to him too. A guy's best friend is usually the best revenge target.
Date: Jan 24, 2015 03:24 am Title: Case of the Ex II
Geesh. Is there anyone byan didn't get pregnant except his sister
poor michael is trying so hard to change.
Author's Response:
LOL right and Risa. He hasn't touched her.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2015 02:26 am Title: Case of the Ex II
Now why ain't I surprised? Bryan has the talent of getting pregnant everything he touches. He should get a vasectomy or something. Else he'll end up prostituting his ass to pay child support in all directions. Just hope Michael get serious about his anger management counselling. He has a good thing with Chivonn, he better not ruin it.
Author's Response:
Yes! he does! he needs a vasectomy. Or maybe he needs to start donating his super sperm to sperm banks. lol
Date: Jan 23, 2015 11:32 pm Title: Case of the Ex II
Dafuq!? Is Keisha being forreal!? Omg Bryan -.- I'm Praying that Michael keeps his cool, but that's really messed up!!
N I feel bad for Chivonn :( she seems to be more frightened than happy to be Michael's gf
Author's Response:
Yeah... it is scary not knowing if he's really capable of doing her like he did his ex. Michael's about to go in on Keisha and Bryan.
Date: Jan 23, 2015 11:21 pm Title: Case of the Ex II
Omg my eyes popped out my head! Damn how many damn babies Bryan gunna have! Aborted or not, all hell about to brake lose! Michael really needs to do something with his damn anger. He goes to 0 to 100 quick! Obsessiveness she says..concerned about that too. I mean his clinginess is kind of cute! I like my space but I rather have my man up on me and not on some other hoe. I know michael is gunna go crazy in that car, hope not
Author's Response:
His clinginess is cute, but I don't think Chivonn is ready and she's just misunderstanding it.