Date: Feb 11, 2015 03:21 am Title: On the Wrong Side of Town
That's a complicated mess. Then again so is michael
Author's Response:
LOL he really is a mess.
Date: Feb 10, 2015 09:46 pm Title: On the Wrong Side of Town
SMH!!! I don't know if I should smoke a cigarette,( and I don't even smoke,) drink a glass of wine, cry , or laugh. This is a mess. Michael is a mess. Why would his PO show up on a Sunday ? Is that how it works ? Cause I don't know. Do they normally show up at one's residence at random ? Michael needs to hold on his Walmart job just a little longer till he get his music career started.. I know he signed a deal and everything, but I think he should just hold on a little bit just a little bit but who am I kidding ? We are talking about Michael? Michael need to stay out of that gangsta mob hit plan.. Of course he doesn't think... He is not thinking.. He is forgetting about his music career and possibility of going back to prison. Yep, I think I am going to smoke that cigarette and have a drink. My nerves are shot right about now... I am not even going to talk about the sex.. Side eye...
Author's Response:
BTW I read your comment on Redone's Tips for Writers. It made my day! The hopes (though I realize they are very small) of one day possibly getting to see Michael's sex tape. I better be invited to that viewing because I'm gonna need some wine and popcorn too. And someone to call 911 cause my heart WILL stop.
Yes, a PO can show up any day or time they want. They can ask your job to report to them if you no call no show (like Michael did here). They can do all kinds of invasive shit.
Michael's got one thing on his mind right now and its the Jackson Pride. Which is the last thing he really needs to be worrying or caring about... He needs to do what Chivonn says and take it to the police and let them handle it. Death threats are usually taken pretty seriously.
The sex... LOL and we just had the talk about sex scenes. At least I didn't use the word FLOWER. I thought about it.
Date: Feb 10, 2015 09:42 pm Title: On the Wrong Side of Town
Ahh shit, michael doin that dumb shit again and got Chivonn in the middle of it. Fuck up again Michael so u be in jail actin out with foolish stuff
O and that part he licked her armpit...cryiiiiiiiiin
Author's Response:
lol!
Smh he's asking to spend the next couple of years in jail... Maybe that's what he needs.
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2015 09:40 pm Title: On the Wrong Side of Town
That was a memorable sex scene. Now if only he got some control. You definitely captured the difference between "perfect" and "reality".
I hope she sends her to Michael's mom's place. Lying will just end up in more trouble. Lie to a PO and they'll never have your back. He needs it if he wants to leave the area and pursue a record deal.
Author's Response:
Thanks! That's usually how sex goes for me if the guy makes it 7 minutes I'm lucky.
and right! He's already looking bad not resporting his residence change... Nobody's going to give him a record deal in jail.
Date: Feb 10, 2015 09:33 pm Title: On the Wrong Side of Town
Lawd I am so done at MICHAEL!!! This fool licked her armpits?! I died. I can't deal with him! Lmao. And I knew he was gon fuck her in his mama house, ol nasty ass. Lmao I just wish he would last longer than 2-3 minutes. Sigh. Anyway, I really hope he's not gon get himself involved in no mess. Especially not while he's still on paper. That's just asking to get locked back up. And now his PO is asking where he stay. Lawwdddd, what will Chivonn's response be? Chile this is tricky lol smh
Author's Response:
LOL!! One day he'll put it down like a bos... one day. He's already messed up not reporting his change of residence... he's digging an even deeper grave getting involved in a fight.
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2015 09:58 am Title: Love me Harder
I love tho couple lol d84; you're an amazing writer, please keep these chapters coming
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I will be updating hopefully tonight
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 03:15 pm Title: Love me Harder
Michael is so cute here doting on his mother and being all lovey dove with Chivonn. He can be incredibly sweet when he wants to be. And lmao @ "perfection takes time" his goofy ass is too much!
Bryan really does seem to be struggling, hopefully Michael sees that and softens up a bit. It's like their roles have reversed!
Bryan still owes him an apology though. I just hope that Michael can forgive!
Author's Response:
He can be really sweet and Chivonn needed to be reminded of that before she let her worries about his past get the best of her.
And yeah now that Michael's got himself closer to being on track, Bryan has fallen completely off the track.
Date: Feb 06, 2015 02:22 pm Title: Love me Harder
Mike ain't playing!!!! Oh well, Bryan brought it on himself. He shouldn't be such a damn ho. Him and Mike aren't friends anymore and it's not Mike's fault this time. Anyway, Chev is right in with Mama Katherine, that's good. And I can't Michael ratchet ass just saying everything in front of his mama lmao he know he a mess. Now I'm wondering if him and Chev gon get it in while they in her house. Lol smh
Author's Response:
Bryan did bring it on himself and he's going to have to fix it himself. No way Michael is going to try to amend things. Michael and his mom are close like that lol He can be raw with her and she just accepts it.
And you know as soon as he gets Chivonn under his covers he's gonna be tryin' to hit it. For 2 minutes.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 09:41 am Title: Love me Harder
"Baby...Perfection takes time." Boy if you don't get!!! Lmaoooooo I can't stand him!!! He know he look good too with his big Applehead!!!
I think in time him and Bryan will become friends again like Mama Kat said. With his anger therapy he'll learn to forgive.
"I miss you too come back." Awwwwww I can imagine how dull things are around the crib with him not there with his Tom foolery. Lol. The ring!! He finally got it I hope it means so much more to come.
Now that he accepted the deal it will be interesting to see how things go from here on out. It could bring a lot of great things into his life but there's also some dangers lurking in there too. Can't wait to see how that all pans out.
More soon!!<333
Author's Response:
lol!!!! he is too full of himself! Even with anger therapy, what Bryan did will be a hard crime to forgive. Yeah, the house is probably too quiet but hella clean without Michael there lol
And trust me, now that he's accepted the deal... danger will be lurking.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 05:44 am Title: Love me Harder
Michael is definitely growing up...slowly. He now seems to be trying harder with Chivonn (though he still can't be on time).
Appointments to a pizza joint? lol.
I want to see Chivonn have to interact with Michael's family more. So far they've largely been in their own bubbles of time together + ratchet chicks + Sean. They were't even very couple-like around Bryan. As this gets more serious, they are definitely going to have to spend more time with each other's parents.
Author's Response:
Slowly but surely and hopefully steadily. But yeah punctuality is not his thing. Hey there's some fancy and pricey pizzerias out there! lol You're right now that they are on the next level its time for the families to get closer again. Luckily they both have a head start because both Chivonn's and Michael's parents knew them both as kids. And with Bryan they're trying not to rub it in his face because they know that ultimately he's not thrilled about them together. Won't Chivonn's mom be surprised though.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 04:48 am Title: Love me Harder
LOL at the Lady and the Tramp reference..and the cat looking evilly reminds me of the cat from the Han's Christian Andersen Little Mermaid saying "You miserable little wretch..you won't be so lucky next time" to Marina..
surprised Katherine didn't scold Michael for cussing
Author's Response:
LOL cats are just evil in general. Every time new people come around my cat glares them down. Katherine is used to it by now... she's married to a drug lord and most of her sons are drug dealers lol.
Date: Feb 06, 2015 04:17 am Title: Love me Harder
They are such a great couple. She is so good for him. Thanks for updating
Author's Response:
She is really good for Michael. He's come so far.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 01:52 am Title: Love me Harder
Michael is surely cleaning up his act. He is understandably upset with Bryan...but I think he will get over it later on. He needs to settle in more with Chivonn and learn to be a better person. Ince he can do what he really likes music, he will be in a better life situation and will be more forgiving.
Author's Response:
Yes he is! Hopefully for good! And yeah, its going to take time if he forgives Bryan.
Date: Feb 06, 2015 12:09 am Title: Love me Harder
All I have got yo say is ..... Awwwww.... Lol...
Author's Response:
Awww!!!!
Date: Feb 05, 2015 11:26 pm Title: Love me Harder
Ok first off their lil date..adorable! Michael was killin Ariana and the weekend!! Lmaooo he's so silly! Mama kat will always be the best. And he gave Chivonn a ring?! Soooo sweet
I liked this chapter <333
Author's Response:
Michael is too silly! And yeah! he gave her a ring but he made it clear it wasn't a proposal or nothing lol Finally they got their happy chapter!