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Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Men...

BTW.. Please keep  this story going :)



Author's Response:

I will. I intended, I just thought maybe it would be better to start a new thread since its about to change course here soon. 

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 06:01 pm Title: Men...

BTW.. Please keep  this story going :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 07:51 am Title: Men...

Michael Michael Michael.......smh. You can't blame Chivonn for your own stupidity so I wish you wouldn't even try.

I hope that anger management counseling helps. And as for the end of this chapter, he needs to keep on walking away from these situations with his brothers. It isn't worth it. Look at them....high all the time and banging ratchet gutter chicks. If he doesn't watch it he will end up right back there. Chivonn will not put up with that level of bullshit.

I want to smack his thick skull. 



Author's Response:

Right! Chivonn will never roll over and take that kind of BS either. Poor Michael, so many people want to smack him right now. lol lol

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 07:43 am Title: Can he stay for a couple days... maybe a week?

Keep it ongoing, please!

It doesn't take long. Hotboxing will have pretty fast effects. Think of it this way: If a parent smokes weed in his/her jacket (especially if the weed was smoked in a contained location) then wears the jacket in a closed car with his/her child while taking the child to school....the child is likely to get a contact high. Even if it's a day later. Then that kid will have problems in school....it's a slippery- and very real- slope. It's also not uncommon :/

 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 04:05 am Title: Men...

Michael,Michael, Michael..*shakes my head*

seriously he is making things harder than they have to be when he knows how everyone rolls..hope this anger management helps because although his heart is in the right place the cops won't care about that. 



Author's Response:

That's true. The cops don't care if he's trying to save his brother or not all they see is violence.

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 04:00 am Title: Men...

Ohh michael get your head out of your ass.   Can't you see the light at the end of the tunnel by staying on the right path?  Isn't it good enough for you?



Author's Response:

LOL apparently its no. Hopefully he learns fast.

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2015 02:16 am Title: Men...

Shit! Michael is handling this issue really, really badly! I can see at least 10 scenarios when everything goes wrong and Michael is the fall guy.



Author's Response:

Right too bad he only sees one scenario in his head and that's him being the 'hero'

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 09:50 pm Title: Men...

"Yo trick..." I can't stand him. Lmao. 

"For my lover..." I really can't stand his ass. Lollllll Awwwwwweeee he can be such a dick wad then a little sweetheart afterwards. I hope these therapy sessions finna work for him because his narrow ass be gong from 0-1,000,000 real quick. He needs to work on taking responsibility for the consequences of his actions and stop blaming people. I'm glad he apologized tho. 

I want to knock some sense into that thick skull of his. Why can't he just leave that shit to his other brothers. Lying to Chiv is going to get serious with the quickness. He needs to think about Chiv too getting caught up with wild ass dudes can put her in the middle of shit she don't need to be in. Come on Mike. Do better boo!

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

LOL too bad he's just sweetening her up so that he can go fuck up! 

Thank you<3

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 09:23 pm Title: Men...

Lmaoooo @ Tito!! Michael is finally going to anger management!! Too happy!! His crazy ass callin Chivonn like a hundred times. Chivonn is not havin it if michael do that dumb shit. She knows somethin is up mhm



Author's Response:

YAY time to tame that temper! He's about to lose Chivonn or do something stupid. Puttin' holes in Mama Kat's walls... Michael better watch out cause Chevy is not dumb. 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 08:58 pm Title: Men...

7 minutes?! Damn, you have some bad luck in guys. They need some education and training on how to handle themselves.

I'm glad he has that appointment. His anger was out of control. I'm surprised she even answered the phone at all. I like that she is still looking for a new position. She needs out of that place just as bad as Michael needs to work his hours. I'm super curious as to if he'll go through with this battle or his conscience will come into play. He can't lie to her forever, and if she finds out he went through with this....his ass will be stuck with either some ratchet chick or his own hand.  Then again, maybe then he'll last longer?

Oh, and Michael had better step away from Tito, b/c hotboxing will show up in one's drug tests.



Author's Response:

I do... It's the sad sad truth. 

Can you imagine if she never did answer the call? He's be over there setting the complex on fire. LOL We'll see what happens... the end is near. I'm not sure whether I want to just tack a PART TWO to this story and keep it ongoing or start a new thread, new title, ect. 

It's time to change direction and focus more on Michael's development and exposing more of Chivonn as well. 

Yikes! Well its a good thing he only stopped by for one beer. I wonder how much you have to inhale for it to show up? I know it doesn't take much to get contact high...

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 08:33 pm Title: Men...

Michael need to correct his funky ass attitude!!!!! Chile Chivonn is a good one cuz I would be getting his narrow ass together. He needs to stay outta trouble and like she said, if he get involved in some bullshit, he better be ready to cry cuz Chiv WILL leave him. 



Author's Response:

LOL Chivonn's just used to it by now, but if he strays from the clean path he's been stumbling along, she WILL leave him.

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2015 08:24 pm Title: Men...

Yeah Michael you really need to go that anger management session and pronto!!! He needs to stop plotting and get his life together.. You have fucking career to think about Michael.. Why am I wasting my breath here? Sigh.. I can't...

 



Author's Response:

He's gonna get that session and he's got some big decisions to make when it comes to starting his career in music.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 01:21 pm Title: On the Wrong Side of Town

Lmao. What possessed his ass to lick her underarm?!? He is such a freak!! Lol. 

Good grief Michael why can't you stay out of the mix. Things where falling into place. Now his PO is looking for him this won't be pleasant. Kim is no joke. 

Keep that nose clean boo you are not free and clear. 

More soon!! <333



Author's Response:

LMAO! he just wanted to tickle her and gross her out. LOL!!! This is why his ass needed to stay at Bryan and Chivonn's. His brother's are always going to be gettin' themselves and him into bad mixes. 

Kim is ON him!

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 05:34 am Title: On the Wrong Side of Town

Lord Michael is a trip. I died at him lickin her armpits, like why??? Your writng is really good girl, btw. I hope Chev tells the truth, she doesn't need any more problems but then again shes with Michael... so i guess problems are just gonna always be around? Lol i love this! Update soon! Sorry I've been MIA btw but I swear from here on out I'll be a consistent reviewer.



Author's Response:

LOL!! He did it to tickle her cause she threatened to take off her ring. It wasn't supposed to be freaky. lol lol THANKS!!! I've been slacking on my reviews too, girl so don't worry about it! Thank you!!!!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2015 03:44 am Title: On the Wrong Side of Town

heh..Michael is too much..someone tell him to keep that tongue to certain areas..and I hope he doesn't do anything too rash or else he'll be back to square 1



Author's Response:

Exactly. He might have protected his brother but his ass is going to be back in jail.

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