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Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2015 11:08 am Title: Dodging Bullets

First of all, I am becoming a little agitated with Bryan always relying on Chivonn to baby sit his children. It is a bit much and he needs to take care of his responsibilty. They are his children not Chivonn's  It is getting on my last nerve.

Secondly, Michael needs to thank his lucky stars that Kim give him a second chance, because that situation could have gone downhill and his ass would have been back in prison. He needs to heed his mother's advice and stay away from his trifling brothers. He certainly does not need to get involved with whatever crazy plan they are hatching.

 I truly wish he could he could have gotten his own apartment, instead of going back to Chivonn's and Bryan's apartment. Michael needs to have his own place and space.  But I supposed in due time he will get his own, if he continues to choose the right path.

As for Sean, he need to stay in his lane.  He is a bit much. Some one needs to pull his fucking files..



Author's Response:

Bryan does need to learn how to be a dad for real. And Michael did get lucky AGAIN. He needs to stay out of trouble from now on! Until he gets a steady cash flow, an apartment of his own isn't really an option for him. 

Sean... I can say no more.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2015 09:23 am Title: Dodging Bullets

Sean's creepy. Saying that he's been watching her the last few minutes? That's not cool.

Pamela needs to take a seat and look at herself.

I like how Michael's mother is supporting his attempt to remove himself from their reality, rather than holding it against him (e.g. saying that he is abandoning his brothers). I'm glad that he's making to move back in with Chivonn and Bryan. Bryan had better not put up a fuss, as he's now facing a potential 3rd free babysitter. He should apologize, keep his tail between his legs, and make good. Ah hell, what am I saying? Bryan's got another kid on the way...that tail is rarely between his legs.

And I'm proud of Chivonn for coming forward in defense of Michael to her mother. She did it in a way that expressed quiet love for and confidence in him, rather than simply the defensiveness her mother was pulling for.



Author's Response:

Watching her for a few minutes... I wouldn't say it's THAT creepy. I mean if he had been watching her for hours from his office then that would have been crazy. He could really just be looking out for her. 

And right, Bryan has no reason to stay mad at Michael if Michael wants to come forward and talk. He was in the wrong and he needs the extra help right now. AND a friend. and LMAO @the tail between his legs....

Pamela... she's lucky Chivonn turned out to be the woman she is with her lack of effort in raising her kids. Bryan may have gotten that idea that he needs to be up in a woman all of the time by watching his mom always having to be up on some man. 

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 14, 2015 05:42 am Title: Dodging Bullets

Finally Mike gets a break from someone.  Hopefully he won't blow it.



Author's Response:

Hopefully! Because that's his last break with Kim. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2015 10:14 pm Title: Dodging Bullets

I'm very impressed with Michael! Holding his tongue??? Wooooow! He's getting a little better! Sean needs to mind his own damn business 



Author's Response:

LOL right! because he could have gone off on Pam. It might have helped that he had little Darrius in his lap too. 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2015 09:56 pm Title: Dodging Bullets

Thank Gawd Kim didn't bust his ass!! Phew...

Now on to Shade... Girl do not tell me this dude could be a 'good guy'. He may be a big lawyer but that dude is nefarious as fuck!!! HOLD YO GOT DAMN ASS Shade!!! Take that shit on some where else. He's a damn idiot if he thinks he's going to get Chiv whether Her and Michael win lose or draw. He's going to try some shit I know it and I hope he ends up being Big Lou's bitch in jail when he fails and has to watch Michael WIN!

Michael is such a sweetheart when he's not being Cookie Monster. I love how he takes care of his Mama.  

Hmmmm that interaction with Pam was interesting. I don't know how to feel about it just yet. 

Girl I'm on it!!! More Soon!! <333



Author's Response:

LOL it's totally possible he could be a good guy. Could be! lol and LMAO that's so harsh for poor Sean. Pam is quite the opposite of Katherine in many ways. Michael doesn't know how to feel about it just yet either lol

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 13, 2015 09:26 pm Title: Dodging Bullets

tee-hee, funny and cute when Michael was singing..and boy did he get lucky with what Kim decide to do..he had better not screw up in that manner again or else. 



Author's Response:

He did get lucky and trust me that's his last lucky break. His luck streak is about to run out.

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 10:05 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

Ahem!!!! More compelling evidence!!! Gold pants...http://38.media.tumblr.com/803f9e382d8d8d2e4a67b37ddad5bf51/tumblr_nkiv79rXDv1s689mdo2_250.gif



Author's Response:

omg!!! God bless those Gold Pants

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 09:07 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

awwww it was so sweet when Michael  was reading..he'll be an awesome father once this anger managenent has changed him.

and uh oh at the end..hope things work out despite that..



Author's Response:

Yes, he'd make a fun dad once he gets all his other issues in check.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 08:12 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

Oh man just when things are looking up for Michael...

If he got that positive test from second hand smoke that's really fucked up. Totally possible but how likely is it really? He must have been hanging out in some pretty smoky places with some chronic users....the same effect as hotboxing. Poor Mike if this is the case cause he didnt actually use. Though I suppose in the ling run it may be a good thing as it will teach him to keep better company.

I know nothing about what a PO does but I'm assuming if it was done in her office, it was some kind of rapid urine dipstick test for THC? How accurate are those? 

He was sooooo damn cute with those kids I'm surprised Chivonn didn't flush her birth control right then and there. Lol.



Author's Response:

LMAO! at Chivonn flushing her BC right there... 

All of his brothers smoke in this story and he lives in his moms how where they smoke and he's been hanging out at Tito's apartment while he's smoking so yeah it's getting in his system daily. He just needs to make up with Bryan and move back in with Chivonn that would keep him away from all that gang war BS and drugs.

My ex was on parole and he would have to piss test occasionally. That office's tests checked the tempurature and everything else. It was pretty precise. But I don't know. He needed a scare. We'll see what becomes of it.

Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 07:47 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

"He wildin'" -- I just got flashbacks to when I'm at school. I hear it ALL day five days out of the week.

Lol anyway it was cute to see Chev and Michael and him thinking about having kids. That was an "awww" moment right there but it turned sour when we got to the text message. I honestly want Chev to believe his story... he seriously ain't do nothing wrong and I hope Ms. P.O. is lienient on him. I hate to see things go down hill when they were just now picking up.

Another great chapter!

P.s / I want babies for Chev and Michael now. Mivonn, is that a good ship name? I'm still thinking, lmao. Anyway update soon!



Author's Response:

LOL!! Mivonn! What about Chivael? lol lol 

Michael knew off the bat that bein at his mom's house wasn't a good place for him to stay clean and away from trouble... Hopefully Kim will be understanding although... he did just switch residences on her and quit his job without notice. He's lookin' kind of shady from her perspective. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 06:15 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

Lawwwwdd.. smh!!! This fool better not fuck around and get revocated! I can't deal smh. He's been tryna do better so I do hope his PO will be lenient with him. Michael has got to do better and stay better. I really hope she does not lock his ass back up cuz that would be a mess. 



Author's Response:

It would be a total mess. Especially since he's literally one day away from possibly make his music business dreams come true.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 06:00 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

His interactions with the kids were adorable. I'm glad he's starting to take this stuff seriously. He's been riding the easy road in a lot of ways, so he needs to walk the line unless he wants things to get crazy tough. Hell hath no fury like a PO who has been crossed. That person will definitely get pee tested while the PO squats and watches.  Now the question is, will she believe his story? Great update



Author's Response:

That is the question! It could screw up everything for him since his meeting with Mr. Watkins is tomorrow.

No matter how OOC I take Michael, I could never get rid of his fondness for children.

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 05:11 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

*siiiiiiiiiiiigh* just when Chivonn was believing in him!! Why michael why? Uggggghhhh

for some comic relief:  "I hope so... I miss how tight we used to be before Michael came into your life like a wrecking ball."<<<<< hilarious!!! 

Michael fuckin up again!!!!




Author's Response:

This was not the time for a screw up... *sigh*

and LOL I thought that was funny too. He did kind of come smashing into her apartment like a wrecking ball.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 04:48 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

I'm verclempt at the whole little family scene. *touches hand to heart* Michael will be such an awesome father. Awwwwwwwwe. I love moments like this with him and Chiv!!!

"Good Day..."  Lmaooooooo that's right Michael don't even give them hoes no opening at all. 

Still not feeling Risa. She's not Shade level but still not feeling her. Watch out for people who always trying to throw an 'I told you so' in your face. They're always looking for your downfall in my opinion. 

Oh no. I hope Kim doesn't chastise him. He should just let her know where he's staying people smoke there and it's from contact. Don't do this to me Michaela. He needs to get his chance!!!!!!!

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

Yes he will! If he can keep his act together well enough!

and yes! nice dodge. He could have opened the flood gates for the texting and FB commenting to start up once again.

Right, Risa is not happy because she can't find the right guy and Chivonn has what she couldn't have. So it would make her feel good if Michael fucked up.

and LOL I can say no more!

<3

Reviewer: michaelfan90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2015 04:21 pm Title: My Dog Has Behavioral Issues, but He Plays Well with Children...

I'm just gonna say that I love this story. I love the michael you created. He's broke, he's rude, he's an ex con......beautiful lol. I get an alert everytime you post and I'm never disappointed. I hope things can be good for him and chevy. Seeing him with kids is sooo cute, now I want chevy pregnant lol. Please update soon hun.



Author's Response:

LOL!!! Is that your definition of beautiful broke, rude, and ex con?! It's mine too. Lmao! jk jk. Thanks for following my story!! <3 <3

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