Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2015 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Neat so far... :) I like it. And I like how Michael trusted Scott Cane's daughter by being a good listener, too. Plus, from my perspective, she is a character I like, mostly because she is not at all like her family personality-wise, and is also someone who could help Michael out if he needs it, too.)

Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing... :)