Reviewer: Hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2014 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 7--Awkward

Daaamnnn, Mike's got it bad. I can't believe he bought her all of that art supplies. But what was he thinking asking her to spend the night with him?? Ok, most ppl would jump at the chance but this is Keisha we're talking about! She maybe a bit naive but she's rational. She seems to be the one that thinks things through before acting on it. She'll be a tough one to crack and I like that. I can't wait to see what Michael wlll do next.

Oh and btw, this ----> "Michael felt like an underdressed fool in his black and red military jacket, white v-neck, and dark pants, and he silently cursed his makeup artist Karen for not powdering his face enough, as he had begun to sweat already above his upper lip and sincerely hoped that his makeup wouldn’t run."

made me laugh. First of all, there is nothing underdressed with a military jacket. LMAO this man is too cute. And second, sometimes I really wish Karen wouldn't put so much make on him. Oftentimes, the rogue on his cheeks and lipstick would be too distracting or the powder looked a bit excessive but I digress. All that make up still can't take away the undeniable sexiness that this man possessed.

Sighh I really hate when a good chapter ends cause now I have to wait for the next one. Ahhh please update soon!

Reviewer: Dirty_diana89 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 24, 2014 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 7--Awkward

I like this story ! Please update more !

Author's Response:

Thanks! I certainly will!

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2014 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 7--Awkward

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!

They had to met again!!!!!!!!!Why dis she run away again ?

 

Michael, be smart, man!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Interesting how everyone is so #TeamMichael

 

I think it's because I haven't fully fleshed Taj out yet.  LOL. Brace yourselves, it's coming.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2014 07:29 am Title: Chapter 7--Awkward

Awwwwwwwwww poor Michael, he's already smitten it is absolutely adorable. I wish Keisha would get her head out of her ass and see it. 

I hope he doesn't give up. 

#TeamMichael all the way!

Reviewer: TifftayluvsMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2014 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 6--Remember The Time

Oh collard greens and Lima beans they done met again! This is fate. 

You are simply the best, miss lady, i love this a lil too much. Please continue! 

Reviewer: TifftayluvsMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 20, 2014 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 4--A Kiss To Build A Dream On

Well damn Michael, you just throwing chicks out your hotel rooms like that? I love this dark womanizing Michael. 

"Yes. I really want...it." <---Michael, you betta stop. 

"Oh, to be seventeen again...." <--- Why is it that everything he says is so hypnotizing? 

This dialogue is killin me. Keisha's  first kiss is undoubtedly one to remember. Great chapter!

Reviewer: Hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2014 12:24 am Title: Chapter 6--Remember The Time

Ahhh so they meet again! Now that she's in LA and LEGAL, I bet Michael won't let her off too easily this time.

Now what to do with this Taj situation... the fact she doesn't know that he's a Jackson calls for a messy situation. But I do like a good drama every now and then. Heh heh. Except please don't turn her into a lil slut sleeping/dating with both nephew and uncle. Agh too messy for my liking. :(

Can't wait for more!

 

Author's Response:

I'm going to try not to go that route but it'll be hard...LOL

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2014 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 5--The Beginning

Ahh so this is where the Family Values bit refers to lol. This will be interesting to see Taj vs MJ. Can't wait!