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Reviewer: downwitmike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2014 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

Thanks so much for updating and congrats on the teaching job .

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2014 09:59 am Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

Congrats on your teaching job! I'm sure you'll have those kiddos putting in work because you're an awesome writer :D

 

As far as the story goes, Michael got what he deserved. He needs to quit stalking this girl and let things happen naturally. I don't know why he's trying to force something to happen between them when he's still fucking other chicks on the side. It makes no sense smh. Who knows what he's going to do now that he knows she has another man in her life. Knowing him, he'll probably go sit outside her house and follow her to the date to see who the other guy is smh. And when he finds out I am SO HERE for the drama! :D



Author's Response:

I don't think it's stalking so much that Michael is a man who knows what he wants and goes through great lengths to get it.

 

That's the funny thing about having a lot of power. No one says no to you, and when they do you're shocked and thrown for a loop.  I think Michael in this story goes for the easy low hanging fruit, but with Keisha it's a whole different ballgame, and that (plus her age) keeps him anxious and curious.

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2014 09:26 am Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

cool youre a teacher! no wonder your story is so good. i love it! he is really going to have to change and work hard for her.  this is my fav story on here so far keep it up :)

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2014 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

Oh my gosh, he is too much! The things he would do for this girl! And he barely even knows her. I mean, the WARHOL painting?! The condo?? WHAT. All of this is too much! But I like it. LMAO

But I mean COME ON, how you just gonna be stealing kisses from Ki and groping her backside while you have another chick staying at your place?? He is definitely not looking right now but I really am still Team Michael. Hahaha

I think it's kind of cute that he loses a bit of his self control when he's around her. And him asking for the dude's name cracked me up... if he only knew..

If he's acting this crazy at the thought of her going on a date with another man, I can only imagine how he'll react once he finds out exactly who this guy is... ohhh the drama!

Please update soon! Just waiting for this chapter killed me! Oh and btw, congrats on the job especially since you're teaching kids how to write. Ya gotta teach them your ways, ya'know what I'm saying? <3

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2014 01:12 am Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2014 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

I prayed to God and asked for you to update once more before school started, and He answered my prayers! I love seeing all of this unfold !

 

Please update when ever you can!

Reviewer: GnRMJ Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2014 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

Your writing is VERY impressive, I'm completely hooked on this story. I love the way you describe things because you never fail to put a clear picture in my head of the scenery. Great job :) I am itching for an update lol

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2014 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

Well I hope this teaches Michael to keep it in his pants for longer than a minute, cause now Keisha isn't going to give him the time of day. He just pushed her right into another man's arms. Can't wait to see his reaction when he finds out its his nephew. Cause there is no way that whatever cheap sex he had with that blonde tramp was worth it. He really should feel ashamed of himself.

At the same time I want to hug him. The poor man just doesn't know what to do with himself. He's already so heard over heels for Keisha it's like a disease. He is lovesick and he doesn't even know what love is. 

Girl I'm going to be stalking this story now its getting so good. I know that Michael isn't giving up until she is his. So much potential drama I'm salivating. 

And the sexual tension between those two is insane! I don't see how Taj won't be able to pick up on it in the future. 

I'm still team Michael, hookers and all. 



Author's Response:

LOL "hookers and all" your comments crack me up SO damn much!

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2014 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings

Dang Mike is loving him so Keisha.

Reviewer: Hazel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2014 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

Ohhh lord! Ki's got him picking out a hooker that looks similar to her, got her changing her hair, and even having her talk like her. What has she done to him?? She's bewitched him!

And Mike's even using his charms on poor Zafir to get some info on Ki. Sighh ohh this obsession of his. Btw, this whole "needing to send something to her apartment" is probably another way to get closer to her. From what I can see, this man is relentless and he'll stop at nothing to get what he wants. Yikes.

As for Taj, him hiding who he is will totally backfire on him especially if he decides to invite Ki to any family outings. But I'm not so sure if Michael will even be attending any what with all the drama happening between him and his asshole of a brother atm.

But honestly so far, the chemistry between Keisha and Michael is so intense it puts Taj to shame. He's just so timid... like a boy whereas Michael is all man. Sighh But Taj is quite endearing, I suppose. He's got that Jackson charm afterall.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Dirty_diana89 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 04, 2014 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

So happy you updated!!! I've been waiting ! Lol Michael man smh lol ! Keep going with this awesome story !

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2014 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

Omg I can't believe Michael got a hooker that looks like Keisha so he can pretend it's her. The man is obsessed! It's cute and creepy at the same time...

I think Michael needs to lay off the sluts and take a lesson from Taj about how to properly romance a woman. Pretty sad considering Taj is just a boy.

I'm still TeamMichael though. Taj seems like a nice guy but Taj + Keisha= zero chemistry. 

 



Author's Response:

LOL at "lay off the sluts." That's hilarious to me.  As for Taj, he'll be more devloped, I promise. Having a few issues with his character, but I think that's the point. I want the choice to become progressively harder as things go on 

Reviewer: 4theloveofMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2014 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

Great chapter! I've been waiting on an update, this story is sooooo interesting! Taj should not have lied. DeeDee was right. "The way you start out will be the way you finish." I know MJ is not a saint in this story either! But still I'm #TeamMichael definitely!!!  Can't wait for Keisha to finally break as it pertains to Michael! 

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2014 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

I can't believe Michael just pulled a "Christian Grey" and hooked up a NDA chick. But it's kinda sweet that he's imagining that it's Kiesha he's sleeping with, I guess :/

 

Ugh!!  This is just so much, and we haven't even made it to chapter 10. I understand why Taj lied but it's gonna eventually blow up in his face. 

 

I know that this is MJ fiction but I still wonder who's gonna win Kiesha's heart : Michael or Taj ??

 

please update soon. I get really happy seeing that you did.



Author's Response:

You know I've never read that story? I think I read the first few paragraphs but the writing bugged me. LOL. UGH, I don't want Michael to become some creeper, but that's the way that it's shaping up, isn't it?  I think he's a guy who is heavily infatuated with a girl, but at the same time, also has his own demons to deal with.

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 03, 2014 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 8--Thinkin' About You

Hey!!!!!!!

I'm soooooooooo happy that you're back!!!!!!!

Keep going girl! Love it!

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