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Reviewer: mysonmjforever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2014 10:41 am Title: Chapter 26

omg Liyah lost her baby omg i really wanted to cry like i know how she would have felt losing her child , Michael need to be there for her cause they did lose there baby i know he upset about the abortion but damn Michael please just turn around and hold Aliyah 

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2014 10:11 am Title: Chapter 28

I knew it!!! Michael best get his shit together. Or imma do it for him.....

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lolgirl pleasedo it for him!!!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2014 09:23 am Title: Chapter 28

Real fucked up that Aliyah aborted a child that was for sure his, and this ho Kamille is carrying somebody else's baby. Karma is gonna come around and fuck him up real bad. Especially when Liyah ends up happy with someone else. He's gonna see how lonely it is at the top. Kamille is definitely carrying somebody else's child and Michael is an asshole of epic proportions for leaving Liyah in the hospital like that. Payback is a bitch. 



Author's Response:

giiiiiiiiirrrrlllllllyou dont even know smh its too much drama even for me lol thanks for the review love -muah-

Reviewer: smoothcriminal22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 28, 2014 06:44 am Title: Chapter 27

omg Michael is crazzzyyy i need more

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2014 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 27

oh heeelllllll nooooo Michael needs to take a damn chill pill what the hell how can you fuck tht thot she pregnant prolly was poking the baby head an shit 😂😂😂 Erica? idk i mean she was cool in this chapter but you held tht in for soooo long like wtf & Trey fuck you nuff said . omg omg i love this 👏👏😩😩

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 27, 2014 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 , 2 , 3 &4

Yesssssss I missed this story but nooooooo Michael fucked Kamille again. I could smack him right about now. And what's up with his temper these days 👀👀👀 shit, hes scaring me. He needs to calm his little self down....Aliyah...I'm not even going say it...yes I am. WHY is she friends with Erica again? And WHY is trey there? This fuckeryyyy, and I can sense more coming up when Michael is on tour.

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2014 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 27

No he did not just go back to Janell when 9 out of ten that probably ain't even his baby her little hoe that ass probably lied to him thinking he'll stay with her I hate when females do that stuff. Anyway even though Aliya was wrong for not telling Mike about the abortion but he didn't have to leave her like that then to go run in that hoes arms at that was wrong on so many levels did he forget that he's keeping a secret from her as well. Ugh these two.

Reviewer: Zendaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2014 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 27

OMG!!!! Michael, really? You go back and fuck Kamille? But still he have no fucking right to be mad when his lying ass still haven't told Aliyah about ol' girl's pregnancy. Calling himself getting mad at somebody. Nigga plz. And I'm glad liyah forgave Erica but she still a lil ho tho. And as for Trey he ain't no better himself.

Great chapter girl. I been missing ya lol. 

Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2014 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 26

She needs tah move on and when the time is right they will find their way back to each other. She just needs to get out of the state and do her get a new job or something and start new. That's all I gots tah say girl.



Author's Response:

I agree Aliyah does need to start fresh cause this much pain is too much on a person , thanks so much for the review lovveee stay tuned

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2014 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 26

He better not be!! Michael is turning his back on everyone, he's kind of making me mad.



Author's Response:

Michael is being soooo stubborn right now like a bull , stay tuned love 

Reviewer: smoothcriminal22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2014 05:42 am Title: Chapter 26

omg like what is wrong wih him i mean i really cant blame him if i was him i would know how i would feel but gahlee come on Mike not right now like she lost yall child just got back in there an hold her you got a whole child on the way by kamille so its time for Aliyah to diss you like you dissed her im so upset right now

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 22, 2014 12:39 am Title: Chapter 26

I understand Mike was pissed about the abortion, but he gone say some shit like that to Aliyah about being done with her after everything they've been through. Yall just lost yall baby for God sakes, and you gon up and leave her in that state? Mike is truly messed up!!!

He just burned a bridge with the one person that stuck with him though everything except Chris, and he probably gonna run off to that hoe Kamille. It seems like he's always pushin' the good people in his life away or causing them some sort of pain. SMDH. Mike needs to get his shit together.

Awesome chapter.!!!



Author's Response:

Exactly lol girl I was really waiting for your review like I know she gonna flip out on this chapter you be hitting it right on the nose omg. Michael is pissed as he should be but you just cant go and turn your back on her she just lost yall child too come on Mike. Girll stay tuned -muah-

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 26

Michael has some nerve getting mad at Liyah after all the bullshit he's pulled. Sure what she did was wrong but she did it because she was thinking of him and his career first. Unlike that skanky ass Kamille who is doing everything in her power to trap him with a baby that is likely to not even be his. And that Michael STILL hasn't told Liyah about.

That man needs to realize how lucky he is that Liyah is still even willing to be with him, pull himself together, get over his childish ego and march back into that room. Liyah just had a miscarriage and is suffering and needs him. If he truly loves her, he'll do it. 

This story is good but I really hate this version of Michael. He just sucks and is a peice of shit person. 



Author's Response:

lol yesss this is exactly what I was thinking, thank you sooo much , Yeah Michael is a bit of an asshole but he has his reasons in this story that you will soon find out about stay tuned love -muah-

Reviewer: iloveyoumj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 26

omg this chapter turned bipolar soooo fast omg. How they go from omg liyah i love you and kissing on eachother too im erasing you out my heart. I was like damn like my facial expression changed as I was reading girl like I had something to say about everything when I was reading like Michael you wanted to take your blackass back in that room why didnt you? you know you love that girl and you just leave her after when yall just lost yall baby. omg like this chapter was intense as hell omg like omg. I didnt know he was going to find out like this I dont want them to go back to square one omg

Reviewer: Susie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 21, 2014 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 1 , 2 , 3 &4

AWWWWW SHITTTT! Nigga NO you're not done! I understand why he's mad but noooo. I knew the truth would come out but not like this! I had a feeling it was a miscarriage but dang, they found out about the abortion too! Michael is pissed he's definitely about to go back to Kamille now and try to play daddy 😩😩😩😩 I dont even know what to say LORDY you want to give me a heartattack !!



Author's Response:

lmmfaooo I am DEADD!!!! Im not trying to give you a heart atteck promise , stay tuned love -mauh-

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