Date: Oct 23, 2014 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 32:Working My Way Back To You
Mike is sly, I'll give him that. Looking forward to see where you will go from here.
Author's Response: You can say that again. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Oct 10, 2014 07:03 am Title: Chapter 31:Going To Take Some Time
I get the feeling that Brooke knew from the beginning that Erin and Michael liked each other I mean if they've been friends for that long I think
It would had been pretty obvious. Erin and Michael were wrong for sleeping with each other but Brooke is also wrong for dating and marrying Michael knowing that her sister liked him first and I'm pretty sure she knew Michael did as well so she really set herself up to get hurt.
Author's Response: You bring up a pretty good point! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Oct 05, 2014 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 30: Who Do You Think You Are?
Done reading, time to review.
Can not believe Harry left. I really don't know what to think about that situation. I mean Jake and Erin really care for one another, and she deserves to be happy. But yet again Harry should be her first priority. That's a sticky situation.
Now Michael is just fudging up left and right. Lol. Man needs to learn how to bite his tongue. Looks like he's got his hands full with Eva too. Haha
Now Erin and Brooke. *sigh* I can see where Brooke is coming from. Yeah they might have been drunk but they still slept together while Michael was engaged. Call me old school, but I don't believe that it's okay to step out on someone and use the excuse that you're not married yet to justify your actions. If it looks like infidelity, and it sounds like infidelity, then guess what, it's infidelity.
With that said, I do believe in forgiving as well, and it's clear that Erin is sincere now. Also, no matter what, they'll always be sisters.
I'm interested to see where you go with all of this. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you got caught up! Yeah, I was torn when writing about Harry and Erin's situation. If I were Erin I think I'd be in between a rock and a hard place. Yes, Michael, Michael, Michael. I don't know when he'll get the big picture. And Eva is a lot to deal with. I totally agree with your logic. I'm old fashioned myself Brooke has every right to be angry. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you got caught up! Yeah, I was torn when writing about Harry and Erin's situation. If I were Erin I think I'd be in between a rock and a hard place. Yes, Michael, Michael, Michael. I don't know when he'll get the big picture. And Eva is a lot to deal with. I totally agree with your logic. I'm old fashioned myself Brooke has every right to be angry. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!!
Date: Oct 05, 2014 09:52 am Title: Chapter 30: Who Do You Think You Are?
Glad Erin got it off her chest. Hopefully it gives Michael something to think about. He needs to become a better person.
That Eva chick she is annoying as hell and a psycho. Finding out his address and just randomly showing up like that is scary. Taking her out to eat, even if it to get her the hell away from his kids, is only encouraging her stalker ass. Although the whole thing made me laugh my ass off he deserves it.
Author's Response: Maybe Erin going off on Michael will give him something to think about. Lol!! Yeah, I think Michael's doing a really good job of leading Eva on. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: Oct 04, 2014 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 30: Who Do You Think You Are?
I need to do some serious catching up. Read now, review later. 😁
Author's Response: Okay!
Date: Sep 28, 2014 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 29: No Reply
Maybe Brooke is ignoring her on purpose, maybe not. Erin could be jumping to conclusions. I think she needs to try a bit harder before giving up. Perhaps her mother could help?
I really hope those two are able to mend their relationship. It's sad to see them fall out over someone who didn't deserve either of them.
I hope that gonorrhoeae is ravaging Michael's penis in the interim.
And what kind of son doesn't go to his own mother's wedding? What a horrible little turd!
Author's Response: You're right, Brooke and Erin really shouldn't fall out because of Michael. I mean they're obviously both done with him. Lol!!! Gonorrhoeae? Is that spanish?? I've gotta put that in the translator. Lol!! Well, hopefully Harry can redeem himself in the eyes of his mother and the readers. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Sep 27, 2014 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 29: No Reply
I really hope Brooke gives her sister a chance and at least hear her. Thanks for updating I'very missed seeing this in the most recents BTW can you check out my story The Dare. 😊
Author's Response: You're welcome! And sure!
Date: Sep 19, 2014 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 28: Drunk
Lol poor Michael can't catch a break.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: Sep 19, 2014 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 28: Drunk
Wow Michael. Just wow. When I think he can't reach a new low he somehow manages to get there.
And the minute that psycho bitch said she went through his wallet is the minute he should have run out the door. Can you say stalker in training? I would laugh my ass off if he ends up needing a restraining order.
I hope he gets the clap and Erin finds out about it.
Author's Response: ROTF!!!!! You're review literally has me dying laughing!!! Lol!! Well, we can't say he didn't try to get away. Lol!!! "Hope he get's the clap"!! It's been a while since I've heard that one!!! Thanks for making me laugh and reading and reviewing!!!
Date: Sep 08, 2014 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 26: Speechless
Wow Michael, you think you can just treat Erin like shit and then drop out of her life when you are supposed to be her best friend, and that she is going to spend her time pining away for you? Erin has always been there for him at the expense of her own happiness, but the minute it starts being uncomfortable for him of course he couldn't be bothered. I am shocked Erin invited him to the wedding or was even polite to him. I would have told him to go fuck himself.
Michael is a SOCIOPATH in this story.
Author's Response: I was going to have Erin blow up on him but I figured what's the use? Why let Michael rain on her parade? OMG you are so right! Michael is a sociopath in this story. I hadn't even realized I'd made his character that way. I think this is the appropriate time to quote Beyonce: If he liked it he should have put a ring on it. Fifteen years ago!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Sep 07, 2014 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 26: Speechless
Ugh these two I can't wait to the time comes where they finally get together.. if that happens, I hope.
Author's Response: I know. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Sep 06, 2014 03:51 am Title: Chapter 25: Truly, Madly, Deeply
Awww this was so sweet. I can't wait for the wedding. Hopefully the wedding can be a chance for Brooke and Erin to reconcile. They should never end their relationship over a guy. Brooke needs a smack in the head she's acting like Erin slept with Michael recently. This was years ago and before they were married. The bitch needs to redirect her anger towards Michael, where it is warranted. Hopefully her mother can talk some sense into her.
As for Michael, the fact that he hasn't talked to Erin in 9 months doesn't surprise me at all. Just shows how little he cares for anyone but himself. I bet he's gone around putting his dick into anything that moves, too. He's a jerk. Cant believe I'm saying this but maybe you should kill off his character and make the rest of the story about Erin/Jake.
The absence of Harry's whiny ass is also much appreciated.
Author's Response: Yes, This engagement has definitely brought some joy to the story recently. Yes, Brooke and Erin really have some reconciling to do. Lol!! Oh boy, you're my only reader who has it out for Michael instead of Jake. Well, from this point on the story pretty much is Erin and Jacob but I have to keep Michael in it or it wouldn't be a Michael Jackson fanfiction. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: Sep 05, 2014 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 25: Truly, Madly, Deeply
When I was reading the last part, I imagined Michael running in and punching Jake so hard in the face that he knocked his brain loose. Idk why but it kinda made me feel better about the whole thing. Lol I'm just waiting for Jake to screw up and piss off Erin and when he does, my ass will be laughing because I hate Jake and I love seeing him in pain and misery. O_O lol jk I sound like a fuckin psycho. XD Please continue soon!!!!
Author's Response: Okay...Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: Aug 17, 2014 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 22: That's What Friends Are For
I'm sorry but Harry is a spoiled rotten little brat. It has to be said. Erin has done nothing but revolve her entire life around him, she has always been there for him, and just because she gets a boyfriend he throws a hissy fit and threatens to go live with his dad? The same man who abandoned him when he was a toddler and has done jack shit for him his entire life.....Well all I have to say is good riddance kid. Don't let the door hit your ass on the way out. And don't come back until you grow the fuck up and realize what a selfish little asshole you are.
If Michael really does love Erin (which I am still not sure I believe) he needs to hunt that kid down and slap him. Let that poor woman have her boyfriend and be happy for once.
Author's Response: Lol!! I just love your reviews. Yep, Harry sure has a lot of growing up to do. You're right is is definitely a spoiled brat. Going away wouldn't be such a terrible thing. I'd allow Erin and Jake some much needed alone time. Lol! If Harry were my kid, he definitely would have gotten slapped. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Date: Aug 16, 2014 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 22: That's What Friends Are For
She really needs to stop lying to herself.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!