[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2015 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
Super super chapter. I had tears in my eyes.
Please update soon
Author's Response:
I will. Promise!
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2015 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yeah!!!!
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2015 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, wow... I hope that Dr. Murray will get what is coming to him...
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing... :)
Author's Response:
Just wait on it, he will!
And thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2015 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
please dont let him die…
Author's Response:
:(
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2015 02:42 am Title: Chapter 8
This is getting better and better.
I love it,
Author's Response:
Ayeeee
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Jun 18, 2015 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. I think that Dani should have her woman's intuition moment in the next chapter & have her check on Michael. Her love for Michael is so real & deep, I wouldn't want her to feel that he's being ripped from her life.
Author's Response:
You always have to trust that intuition and I'm so glad Dani did. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There's so much more to come.
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2015 05:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Even though it's hard you should still continue the story.
Author's Response:
I will.
I'm gonna try not to make you all cry. I would never want anyone to live that day over again
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2015 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
Even though it's hard you should still continue the story.
Date: Jun 16, 2015 10:10 am Title: Chapter 8
I really love where you're taking this story. I think its very realistic. And even though no one wants Michael to die in this story, the impact would be diminished. I love Dani's character! Maybe you can include more moments between the two cause I really love them together. All i can say is that I don't want it to end anytime soon!
Author's Response:
It won't end anytime soon girlie, at least I don't think so.
Date: Jun 16, 2015 09:54 am Title: Chapter 7
Can he please NOT die?!?!!
Date: Jun 13, 2015 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Glad ur back to updating these stories! So Michael is in love, awww! I'm curious to know who he was sleeping with before.
Date: Jun 13, 2015 06:15 am Title: Prologue
Also!The whole time I'm reading this chapter, I'm like mentally yelling at Dani. Like don't leave! Don't fall asleep! Fuck your cousin shit is serious right now! Like omfg this is your last chance, go to him before its too late!!!!
Yeah, that's how wonderful your writing is.
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, thank you
Date: Jun 13, 2015 06:07 am Title: Chapter 7
I cannot describe how much I love/hate this story. I love Dani and Mike's relationship and I honestly wish/hope he had someone like that in his corner during those days. This story is eerie because there is so much foreshadowing and I'm not talking about the trial. I'm talking about just the conversation between Dani and Mike. There's words left unsaid and then he confesses to her. And I can't help but be filled with hope for these two. Despite knowing they will not get the happy ending they deserve..
Absolutely fantastic writing.
[Report This]Date: Jun 13, 2015 03:32 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh my god this so — for lack of a better word — interesting! I really wanna know what happens next...although I sorta know what happens next, but, you know... lol
please update again soon! xx
[Report This]Date: Jun 03, 2015 03:59 am Title: Chapter 7
I just read the whole story in one go and I really really love it!! It's very interesting to read and you're definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat! It's very well written and I can't wait for further updates. Keep 'em coming! ;)
xx
Author's Response:
Hey there! Glad you enjoyed this! I'll update soon!