Reviewer: LovelyoneMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes Simply Amazing Writing
I'm Excited to read more
Please update :)

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2014 03:19 pm Title: Prologue

Neat so far. Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. I like it. (Plus, I hope that the late, great actor Marlon Brando is in this story; after all, he did an awesome job as Vito "Godfather" Corleone in the 1972 film The Godfather, and his son Miko was a bodyguard and friend to Michael, too.)

Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you very much and I'll promise u he'll be added in one of the chapters ;)

Reviewer: Everlast Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2014 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1

AAAH!  And here I was excited to read!  :-(  Post soon!  :-D

Author's Response:

I will

Author's Response:

I will I'm actually writing the prologue now