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Reviewer: Mjlover378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 85. Daddy please come home

Wow, this was kinda intense. <3



Author's Response:

Michael has a history of some pretty intense temper tantrums.  Hopefully with continued treatment he can get over those. :). They do add some flair to the story though.

Reviewer: mjlover07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 85. Daddy please come home

What if Kara's brother really did come to see her...

Reviewer: mjlover07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2014 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 83 jokes go too far

Yay!!!!! family day!!!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2014 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 83 jokes go too far

Yay! Family day!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2014 07:12 am Title: Chapter 82

Poor Simone..seizure=bad news..hope it wasn't a grand mal one..

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2014 06:04 am Title: Chapter 82

Hehe peep show! Lol! Can't wait for mooorrreeee!!!!!!!

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 29, 2014 05:57 am Title: Chapter 82

I feel really bad for silent reading, especially since this story is one of my favourites right now. I hope you can forgive me, I really do!

This is going awesome. I love that relationship that Kara and Michael have, so sweet! I wonder if they'll stay in touch after they're out. I can't wait for the next chapter! <3 thank you so much for writing on. I love you. 

<33



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kind words and review

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 63.2

tht would be werid if kara really is his daughter.



Author's Response:

That's a very intriguing twist and would be interesting but Mike having a fling when he was 22 doesn't really fit into his character I've developed.  Cool thought though

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 63.2

You're my favourite person right now! 2 updates today (for me at least) and I love it!



Author's Response:

You're too kind..  Working on other story now

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 62.2

'Shut up Drew.' Haha! Shit stirrers. The kids are gonna love the dog!

Reviewer: mjlover07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 62.2

AWWW It's cute knowing Michael was afraid of dogs 

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 61.2

First I'd like to say what a floozy Ginger is..she needs to go find her own man because Michael is twice the person she will ever be!

And good riddance to Patrick he is a scumbag.

Michael is sure progressing well and I like Kara she is great..good that you introduced her so Michael could have someone to reach out to.

P.S. I like the cover pics you chose for this fic. ^^



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm trying to make the rehab interesting.  I appreciate your reviews.  Glad you liked the pics.  I've always liked that look on Michael and wanted Mandy to be beautiful but simple so when I saw that picture of the model I knew that was her.

Reviewer: ilovemichaeljackson34 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 27, 2014 07:55 am Title: Chapter 61.2

Amanda's portrayer is BEAUTIFUL!! :D

I'm so proud of Michael. He's just amazing.

Now I see a different side of Ginger Love, though she still creeps me out o_O

I just wish Patrick's spoiled ass could take his words and stick it where the sun don't shine! 

Kara is so shy and cute, for a minute you had me thinking she was one of those teenage girls who use drugs, not 21! :D

Amazing chapter! <33



Author's Response:

I had t make Kara old enough to be thrown in with a bunch of adults.  I didn't think it would go well if a teen was with adults.  Though it's only fiction I tried to out some thought into it.  Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.  I finally figured out how to put pictures up and tried to find what I though Mandy would look like.  She may be a little younger but oh well.  I wanted her to be pretty but simple.



Author's Response:

I had t make Kara old enough to be thrown in with a bunch of adults.  I didn't think it would go well if a teen was with adults.  Though it's only fiction I tried to put some thought into it.  Glad you liked it and thanks for the review.  I finally figured out how to put pictures up and tried to find what I though Mandy would look like.  She may be a little younger but oh well.  I wanted her to be pretty but simple.

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2014 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 61.2

Farts all night? My dad does that, but the dog is worse, with our dog, you have about a minute to get out or get filtered, else you're goin out! Anyways, I look forward to more!!!

Reviewer: mjlover07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2014 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 61.2

i'm glad Pat is gone ...update soon please

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