Reviewer: chelley Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 19, 2015 12:15 am Title: Chapter 2

Well at least we have one person who's nice to her. Great story by the way 😊😄

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow... I like it, especially this part:

"Have you ever wanted something so much, and then you think you have it, only to find out it belongs to someone else?"

To me, that speaks volumes right there... :)

 

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Neat start so far - I like it. :) And Jess - short for Jessica - sounds like a very neat character too. :)

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 06, 2014 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 5

Neat so far. :) I like it! Very awesome, as well as very well-written, too. :)

Keep it up with your super-neat, very phenomenal and creatively beautiful writing! :)

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2014 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

but i feel that it will finish soon

Reviewer: sydneylovesmike20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2014 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I really love this story, keep posting it!!!