[Report This]Date: May 04, 2017 06:01 am Title: Meeting
Seriously loving it :) can't wait for an update
[Report This]Date: May 04, 2017 06:00 am Title: Meeting
Seriously loving it :) can't wait for an update
[Report This]Date: Feb 23, 2014 11:53 am Title: More than Fun
>:( why? Who does that you better update soon you don't just end like that *pouty face*
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2014 07:05 am Title: Saved
Neat so far... :) I like it. And I can't wait to read the next chapter; it sounds awesome, as well as very inspiring too. :)
Keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing! :)
Date: Jan 30, 2014 05:03 am Title: Meeting
TO Sweet Yo! Michael is a player player under that smile though!
Author's Response:
Thanks but I think that your Raquel might be better than mine. You're Raquel is gettin all the damn goods for realz. I'm luvin' yo story so far. But, then again my Raquel is doing some rotten plotting in her head (evil) just like her mother obviously Robin Givens would be the reason she will now show her evil side that she didn't know she even had. *******JUST READ WHEN I UPDATE.*******
Date: Jan 30, 2014 05:00 am Title: Getting To Meet Face To Face
This shit just got real!
Date: Jan 30, 2014 04:59 am Title: Meeting
Lol! I like it..
That would be some stuff I would do. Hey everyone he went to the right instead of the left.
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2014 01:44 pm Title: Getting To Meet Face To Face
Neat so far. :) I wonder what will happen next. It sounds pretty awesome, as well as very suspenseful, too. (I hope that Raquel remembered to bring her wallet with enough money in it, of course.)
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and beautifully phenomenal writing! :)
Date: Jan 25, 2014 01:39 pm Title: Getting To Meet Face To Face
You should update soon it was just getting good.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2014 07:39 pm Title: Meeting
Neat so far. :) I like it. Very neat, as well as very well-written, too. :)
(This is how I imagine Michael to look in the story, but different.) And I can see Michael writing a passionate love letter to Raquel, as well as her reading it.
Keep up your super-neat, very creative and phenomenally intriguing writing! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much and I love to have very honest and happy readers and reviewers. That is special to me. I picture Michael too plus I have to change his age. But, anywho this story is based off of a dream I had (Only the begining). z-swag/ MJ 4 Life!
Date: Jan 23, 2014 04:53 pm Title: Meeting
Nice job can't wait for the next chapter
Date: Jan 23, 2014 05:57 am Title: Meeting
aaww that was sweet