Date: Feb 19, 2017 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Girl, where are you? It's been almost a month now! I'm going out of my mind with worry!!
Author's Response:
Aw don't worry! I'm still here, I promise. I've been working on something I'm trying to get published but this story is still in effect. I'm really flattered by how much you care. I'll try to have the next chapter up by next week.
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2017 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 81
Uh oh...lol
Author's Response:
Yup lol. Janet better hope Cherell can control Michael and his brothers. Thank you so much for reading.
Date: Jan 27, 2017 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww I know right away I was going to love this from just the summary alone! Adding to favorites, already an enchanting story!
Author's Response:
Hey new reader! So glad you dropped in. I hope to get more feedback from you as the story progresses. Thank you so much!
Date: Jan 26, 2017 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 81
Whelp, looks like Janet's cover is blown! Otherwise, your description of Motown 25 is spot-on. I'll have to watch the video on YouTube later. Love, love, love this story!
Author's Response: The cat is out of the bag...or should I say boyfriend lol. So glad you enjoyed it. I actually ended up ordering the DVD from Amazon and watching it a million times lol. BTW, still waiting on Making Faces. I need more little Judah in my life. Hope you can update soon.
Date: Jan 26, 2017 09:15 am Title: Chapter 81
Diana is so messy. Michael needs to stop being naive and wake up to the fact that the woman is a massive bitch.
Author's Response:
Lol Diana will always be the diva she is. But it would be nice if she got a reality check every once in a while.
Date: Jan 26, 2017 08:48 am Title: Chapter 81
Girl, I just love this story so much! I felt like I was watching Motown 25 as a VIP!! Your detailed writing is so freaking good! And I knew it was James Debarge!! Janet is becoming a woman so her brothers are too late to try to interfere lol Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thanks a million! Reviews like yours really make my day. And yes, Janet's boyfriend has been revealed. Let's hope Cherell and Dee Dee can keep her brothers at bay.
[Report This]Date: Jan 26, 2017 12:04 am Title: Chapter 81
I am debating starting this story from the beginning. I know I was readying a while back but idk where I stopped. I just know if I start reading i won't be able to stop and before I know it it's going to be 7 in the morning and I have a class at 10! but i hope i will be able to read soon because i like your writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I enjoy reading your stories as well. You're pretty famous on this site lol. Please take your time and read whenever you can. No rush at all. Just thrilled to have you as a reader. Hope to get more feedback from you soon. God Bless!
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2017 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the way you disbcribed Michael's feelings towards Diana in the story. As Cherell noted, it was mostly a celebrity crush. And I like that Cherell did not make too much fuss about Diana. She knew she is the one holding Michael's heart and that Diana was just acting like a bitch LoL. Go confident Cherell!
Author's Response:
Yeah I never found it to be nothing more than just a crush. It's still a little annoying though. But you're right, Cherell is the only woman who really holds his heart. She never has to worry about Michael's faithfulness. As always, love your reviews.
Date: Jan 24, 2017 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 81
Please put a stop to it. Janet and Joe are endgame, plus I dont like how the Debarge family is using Janets name now
Author's Response:
Janet's brothers are more than ready to put a stop to it. Her boyfriend is lucky Joe isn't around for this. Now we get to see how the Debarge family is going to be like.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 81
Once again, Michael and Cherell are the cutest people ever. I love them so much. I really hope Cherell gets pregnant again soon. I love when Michael is a daddy in Thriller era. You don't see that happen in stories too often. I'm sooo disappointed in Jackie. Like, why? I'm so proud of Cherell for sticking up for herself!!! And poor Michael. He honestly didn't know what he did wrong. Please continue soon!!! I love your stories so much!!!
Author's Response:
They seem to be ready to start a family again. But they're making sure not to pressure each other or force anything. Considering what happened, Cherell really needs to be as stress free as possible. But you're right, Thriller era MJ as a father is a cute sight. Let's keep our fingers crossed! And Jackie has a lot of nerve. He better hope his wife don't find out about this. And Michael is so blinded by his admiration for Diana that it leaves him oblivious to his behavior around her. Thank you so much your kind words and readership.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 81
Omg, I've been checking this story everyday. I am absolutely in love with Cherrell and Michael. You're an amazing writer, and you really know how to do your research because this seems so real. I love how Cherrell is out there supporting her husband. Will she go on the tour with Michael? I knew it was Debarge, I'm interested on how you're going to write their (troubled) relationship. I hope one day Michael opens his eyes and checks Diana. When the tour begins things will go crazy! Will Brooke Shields be apart of this story? Thank you for updating. I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're so engrossed in the story. You know Cherell got to be right by her man's side every step of the way. As far as her going on tour, that's a really good question. With Michael being so protective, this can really go either way. Guess we have to wait and see. And now we see who Janet is involved with. Like you, I also hope Michael gets a reality check concerning Diana too. This tour will definitely be one to remember. Oh and don't worry, I haven't forgotten about Brooke Shields 😜
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 81
amazing as aaaalways xx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 06:50 am Title: Chapter 81
OK, it's official; I hate Diana! I don't know what she's trying to accomplish by being such a bitch! I just hope Michael opens his eyes and really sees how Diana is treating his wife. I can't believe he didn't the first time. Now the secret is out who Janet is seeing! Sad thing about being the youngest child is that your elder siblings are protective of you, and she's got eight siblings! I hope this guy knows what he's getting into. I am so glad you updated! I really needed this after some hard time at work and this is all it took to make me feel better. Your writing always brightens my day. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Diana is just full of herself. And poor Michael is so starstruck. It would take something really dramatic for him to change his views of her. As for Janet, she now has to deal with six unhappy big brothers! Yikes! Poor girl lol. You're right. Being the youngest can really suck sometimes. Thank you. So glad this made you feel better. Your beautiful reviews always make me happy too! God Bless!
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 05:11 am Title: Chapter 81
Motown 25! Yes! I love the interaction between Michael and Cherell before Michael's performance. Although I personally believe Michael wore that glove to captivate the audience rather than hiding his vitiligo LoL. Michael's Motown 25 performance is so iconic, phenomenal, trend-setting, and then some. Oh I love his performance! The Diana scene is also hilarious! Michael was really clueless, or are all men in general clueless animals hahaha. How I wish in real life Michael also did not fall in love with Diana...
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! And you're right about Michael's glove mainly being for entertainment purposes. I just sort of added in the vitiligo situation lol. And Diana is so full of it. Michael can be really dense sometimes, especially when Diana is around. I wish he wasn't so in love with Diana too lol. Overall, I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks girl.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2017 04:31 am Title: Chapter 81
I kneeeew it! Didn't I tell you she was dating that debarge boy?! I told u soo! *cough* I had to get that out of system oh Janet she isn't doing the right thing and I don't blame the brothers wanting to lay it on him I'm surprised Joseph hasn't tried it yet. Hopefully mj won't be hard on him lol, fingers crossed she still gets with Joe later on in the story. Either way the performance was brilliant and that hoe housing her way in is going to cause trouble with Jackie and his wife. Cherell shouldn't even say a word let Jackie find his own trouble and focus on herself and mj. Brilliant chapter! <3
Author's Response:
Lol looks like you were right all along, Lorry. Janet has gotten involved with James Debarge and her brothers aren't having it. Wondering what Michael is going to do.