Date: Aug 10, 2014 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS
Aahh..do I smell a plot building with Emily!!??!!
Date: Jul 07, 2014 06:21 am Title: Chapter 128
nooooooooooooooooooo
i can't believe it's over
author i love this story so much ur AWESOME
Author's Response:
Thanks. Now you can read my other two stories. Who knows if I get inspired I might add a chapter every once in awhile
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2014 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 128
Awww! It's over already?! Pooh! It was amazingly awesomeness though!!!
Author's Response:
Already? There wasn't anywhere else to take it so I ended it..plus besides a few of you reviewers stopped existing. It gets old writing and ppl dont review. That's why i appreciate the ones like yourself that are loyal
Date: Jul 05, 2014 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 128
Your welcome cx and I can't wait because I love the other stories to
Date: Jul 05, 2014 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 128
OMG!!!! That was the best story ever it was full of love fluff drama and family moments and I loved it!!!! I congrat you on this story
Is your other story coming to an end to?
Author's Response:
Nope not immediately...eventually but the next one to end will evolve into another story. I already have it planned out but it won't happen for some time.
thank you for the kind words. It really means a lot to me. It was a lot of hard work to write and was my first try at writing.
Date: Jul 05, 2014 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 128
Beautiful chapter and ending loved this story hope you won't give up writing once all the stories are finished
Date: Jul 05, 2014 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 128
It was a bumpy ride for me in some parts, but has great potential..nice finish though..awesome work for doing so many chapters in the space of less than a year..could never accomplish anything like that.
Author's Response:
Thanks. It's not easy making every chapter excellent. It takes a lot of work and a lot of time and energy.
Date: Jul 01, 2014 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 127
Awwwww. I really don't want this to end! lol, you're very gifted :)
Date: Jul 01, 2014 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 127
Really enjoyed this story but ok its understandable there is end to every story hope you won't give up writing when all stories are finished
[Report This]Date: Jul 01, 2014 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 127
The story coming to a close? I was happy until you said that! :( sequel?
Author's Response:
Probably not. I might add a chapter once in a while but I've got to focus on my other two. Reviews have come to a screeching halt so I've said and done all I can do with the story. Thanks for your support though. There will be a few more chapters
Date: Jun 18, 2014 01:41 am Title: Chapter 126
Aww so beautiful and aww that's so wonderful wanting to adopt the child she deserves a home where she's loved
Date: Jun 17, 2014 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 126
Awww, I hope everything goes good for Cassie and Michael from now on...
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2014 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 125 diary of a sick woman
That woman was NUTS! So she plotted to get Michael from the start......and don't even talk about the videos. So creepy. Poor Michael, now he knows there are all these videos of his schlong in action, he knows they are in existence and he has no clue where to look. He needs to find that Emily bitch.
I would laugh at 'Michael's seed didn't take" if it wasn't so fucking sad. She's talking about him like she's talking about breeding horses or dogs or something. Smdh.
I guess in the end she got her karma.
Girl I love where you went with this. Full balls-to-the-wall crazy.
Author's Response:
Thanks..I was wondering if readers would think it was too far fetched....you read crazy ass stories of stalkers so I thought I would make up my own extreme. Was actually hard to write and try to make it even a tiny bit believable. Can you imagine a MJ sex tape out there..
Date: Jun 17, 2014 06:05 am Title: Chapter 125 diary of a sick woman
All I can say is what the heck? I am absolutely dumbfounded..
Valerie was soo conniving and not right in the head..*gets some brain bleach*
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing..I tried to go somewhere different
Date: Jun 17, 2014 05:06 am Title: Chapter 125 diary of a sick woman
Don't feel sorry for that psychotic bitch at all. She had cancer? Oh well. She was going to suffer long and hard and decided to take the easy way out be killing herself. Good riddance. Hope she's burning in the hottest of fires.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. I tried to spice it up and go on with a twist