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Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2014 02:18 am Title: Chapter 42 HAPPY BIRTHDAY MICHAEL

And that was a happy birthday, indeed! Best present in the world, a new baby!

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Date: Mar 11, 2014 12:48 am Title: Chapter 35 BLANKETS CRY

Aww, that was sweet! Cassie is good mommy material. And she'll get some practice because I have a feeling that she'gonna need it pretty soon.

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2014 12:37 am Title: Chapter 34 LOST

Sounds foolish only if you've never actually experienced getting lost in an unfamiliar city, with no means of communication. Happened to me once and was a scary experience. Plus, I think there's a little bun in the oven making Cassie over-sensitive about everything...

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2014 12:08 am Title: Chapter 33

I'm sorry I haven't commented before, i was too caught up in the story and couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. It's such a moving and realistic story, so powerful and full of love. You definitelty should have more reads and ratings. You're a wonderful writer.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. Not sure how far you've made it but hope you continue to enjoy the story. 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2014 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 81

Awwwww!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2014 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 81

Good to hear him actually be truthful with the doctor, and thank goodness she's actually a decent doctor. Not anything like that slut from before. I definitely don't think he needs to be too abrasive with Cassie right now. She still seems unhappy with him, so he may need to sit back for a minute. This shouldn't be a cake walk because they both have caused a lot of damage in a short amount of time. Plus I wanna see what's going to happen with her and Ryan. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 10, 2014 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 80

I hope the psychiatrist isn't a woman, otherwise he may end up fucking her too. Smh. Anyway, I'm glad Ryan is there with Cassie. He's such a good friend because the average man would not do what he's doing. Men tend to not get too involved in situations like these. Most women have girlfriends for this kind of stuff. But Ryan seems to be a decent fellow. I'm just waiting to see if/when Cassie is gonna let him tap that ass one time. 

Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

I would agree, two wrongs don't make a right. I hope Michael and Cassie move on now. She said she forgave him so now it's done. It's over. Forgivness means we are letting go. But If she sleeps with someone else, that just creates more problems in the marriage. You don't tell someone I forgive you one moment and then seek revenge(mind you revenge is never unintentional). Because that pretty much means you didn't forgive them. I would say Michael is taking his guilt too far, he made a mistake unintentionally and tried to make up for it. He's seeking help to deal with what's going on inside of him and that's good. 


Now that Forgivness has been given. Whatever people do after this, they should be held accountable for their actions. Pointing fingers is just an excuse. If Cassie cheats, it wont be unintentional(since it's revenge). If that occurs Michael should be forgiving as she was to him, but that doesn't mean he would be obligated to stay with her. 


I found it interesting how Janet and Katherine totally kidnapped him. But they were right he needed help and therefore he needs to get all he can before going back to Cassie. It probably wouldn't hurt for Cassie to try seeing a Therapist herself with all the drama she has had lately.


Thank you for the update and Great story. I'm really enjoying it. :) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind insight. I agree with you on all counts.  

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

I like the suggestion of her sleeping with Ryan. It's somebody she knows, not a random guy, and they actually have a good rapport. She should sleep with him once before going back to Michael. 

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

Honestly all this drama tho.

Michael made an honest mistake when he shagged the doctor. Two wrongs don't make a right for her to get with Ryan wwould not only demean them both, but it would ruin the marriage further. 

 

Stahp

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 79 Hope

Lmaoo I just can't. Michael is being a big ass baby and drama King and it's fucking insane. After all this Cassie damn deserves to fuck somebody else just to relieve herself of the fuckery and frustration. This is pure madness. Michael needs to keep his ass there and get his life together because this is absolutely crazy. All this acting out because he did wrong and is continuing to do wrong by not acting like a fucking man. All this pity partying, taking his anger out on others, etc instead of checking himself. And Cassie with all this nice shit is annoying too. She forces herself to repress all her anger and frustrations because no way in hell a real woman is just gonna magically be over her husband fucking another woman. Not to mention, taking his anger out on her like she's the one in the wrong. They're both on my damn nerves. 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

Well, no I'm pissed off at Michael for being such a bone-headed asshole that he'd do that, but I'm just really sad that things are going this way.

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 78 Going home

Okay, biting my cheeks didn't work this time. You made me cry :'(



Author's Response:

Sorry. At least you aren't angry like everyone else on here 

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

If you take suggestions can you have Cassie sleep with Ryan before taking Michael back? Like maybe she sleeps with Ryan, then realizes that nobody could ever replace Michael and goes back to him. Then they would be even. 



Author's Response:

I was leading towards that actually. :). Great minds ...

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 09:20 am Title: Chapter 78 Going home

Katherine has no right to take Michael from Cassie without going in person to the hospital to inform her. Or sending Janet to do so. He isnt that critically ill that they couldn't do that. Michael is Cassie's husband and the father of her kids and she has a right to know. You don't just leave a note. I'm sure she would support their decision if consulted but she has to be consulted. I'm sure she would have even wanted her son to go with them as well so Katherine can watch him. Why would they just leave him with Ryan? If those were my in-laws I would be furious at their complete lack of respect for me. Plus their interference without Cassie's inclusion is not going to help their marriage. Now she's going to think that he left her and abandoned their son. When Michael comes to his senses he is going to be furious as well and rightly so. 

As for Michael, he is an idiot. He has made this situation 1000x worse by being such a drama king. Him sleeping with Val while his fault was unintentional but not the end of the world, and Cassie was already forgiving him. People make mistakes and he was hardly 'having an affair.' He never even lied to her. They could have gotten past it. But how is he supposed to trust him now when he takes his anger out on her and then abandons her while she is sick in the hospital? When he got drunk and abandoned Cassie with her newborn twins that night he was basically molested by Dr. Val, he was only thinking of himself. And I see the pattern continues.  He is only thinking of himself and his own guilt by trying to commit suicide. I did not want Cassie to leave him at first but now I am less sure. He is not emotionally stable or mature enough for her. It is really sad because she is in poor health and can't care for herself nevermind her newborns, and her husband and his entire family is only thinking about his wellbeing. I say to hell with all of them.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your insight. I find it funny how emotionally vested people are with the story. People said that she was too passive and he was not sorry for what he did so I made him finally feeling ultimately sorry for everything he did and needing to be punished.   Now the fun is how to deal with it all.  As a writer it's called painting myself into a corner.   Gotta have drama.

 

thanks for reviewing and your thoughts.  I read them all and digest peoples suggestions. 

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