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Reviewer: lifeofamoonwalkermj7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2014 06:05 am Title: Chapter 122

oh god why did you stop

i'm guessing it's not michael's child

at least i hope so



Author's Response:

It was getting late and I hadn't fully decided if it was his kid or not so wanted to give you what I had.  

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2014 02:32 am Title: Chapter 122

Don't leave us hanging too long 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 122

I. Hate. You. Right now. Please make more soon!!!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 122

Poor Cassie. There's only so much bullshit and heartache a woman should have to deal with. I hope that baby is NOT his. 

Reviewer: lifeofamoonwalkermj7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2014 07:13 am Title: Chapter 121

love it so much 

michael did an awesome thing by burning those pictures

i know cassie will accept the child just like she accepted paris blancket and prince

she has tooo much of a big heart

but i can't wait for when the child is older and they have to tell the child this

TROUBLE

writer love your work



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words.  They mean a lot to me

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 121

You should have seen me cheering when he burnt those letters. Good job Michael! I'm so happy you made him do that lol. Now all he needs to do is burn those photos too. They shouldn't keep any pictures of that bitch around. 

When Michael was crying and scared that Cassie would leave him I just wanted to teleport into the story and give him a hug! She already decided to forgive him so she needs to let it go. Though I can understand why it would be hard. I think her response was completely reasonable and the best he can expect at this point. And I'm glad they are okay :)

It will only get better with time. Cassie has a big heart and I'm sure once she has time to bond with Michaela and watch her grow she won't have trouble loving her as her own. 

Now what I really want to know: is she Michael's bio kid?

 



Author's Response:

I did that for you :). I Figurred as a loyal fan your idea could be included. I get writers block and appreciate suggestions. 

You will have to wait and see. I'm working on my other two stories so it might be a week 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2014 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 121

Burning those letters actually that's a great idea 

Still curious about if she's Michaels or not 

Reviewer: Mjlover378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2014 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 121

Oh man! I feel like I know what's coming...

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 09:36 am Title: Chapter 120 Michael's letter

This is my opinion on how it should end, they should find out that the baby is not biologically Michael's but still adopt her anyways. Have Val lie about Michael being the only man she slept with. That way they will get another child who I'm sure they will be happy to have, the poor baby will grow up loved, and Cassie won't have to look at the proof of Michael's infidelity every day. I don't think she should hold it against him anymore, he loves her to death and made a mistake, but it's an extra betrayal for him to have made a child with that woman no matter how unintentional the whole thing was. So I'm keeping my fingers crossed that the paternity test comes back as that child not being Michael's bio kid. 



Author's Response:

That's one of the options I have floating around my head...thanks

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 09:09 am Title: Chapter 120 Michael's letter

I have mixed views..I understand having another woman's child would be hard but I agree that Michaela is innocent in all this and deserves to have a mother to love her..I mean if the cheating didn't happen but Valerie still passed it would have been nice if Michael and Cassie adopted her..so either way she should have a female figure in her life, being produced by indiscretion or no..



Author's Response:

I agree 100% with what you are saying??still not sure where I'm gonna take it?? Just left myself open to a few possibilities

Reviewer: Mjlover378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 08:56 am Title: Chapter 120 Michael's letter

Oh man! If that is his child, they would have another child in the household but it's not fair that it would be thrown up in Cassie's face everyday.



Author's Response:

I agree..it would be a tough thing but I wanted to leave myself with a few options when writing.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 08:25 am Title: Chapter 120 Michael's letter

Hopefully Cassie accepts the baby and will eventually see her as her own



Author's Response:

Still not sure where I'm going to take the story yet.   Leaving my options open at this point.  Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 08:17 am Title: Chapter 119 Cassie's letter

That's a beautiful letter

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 08:10 am Title: Chapter 120 Michael's letter

Wow I just caught up with this story and I can't believe you went there! So much drama OMG. Poor Cassie, I feel really bad for her losing the baby, then losing her uterus and being unable to have kids, and then finding out that bitchslut had Michael's baby on the same day! How much more pain is this woman going to have to go through? I'm so mad for her! I think the difficulty for her wouldn't be in forgiving Michael at this point, but in not taking hatred for the biological mother out on the child. It isn't the poor baby's fault her mother is a slut and if I was in Cassie's place I would be worried about being able to be a good mother to her, especially if she physically resembled Val as she got older. I think they should tell her that she was born to an unknown surrogate because Cassie couldn't have kids, and never ever tell her about Val. That letter if anything makes me feel kind of sorry for Michael and shows that Val is even more of a trifling slut then I thought. Michael's big mistake was in getting drunk instead of talking things out with his wife. But Val took complete advantage and should have called Cassie when she found Michael like that, if she was a man and Michael a woman everyone would be crying rape. But because it's the other way around she gets away with it. Smdh. And then she has the nerve to ask Cassie to tell her daughter about her! I can't believe that ho. I hope Cassie and Michael burn those letters and photos of Val, and that Michaela never knows she even existed. Fuck if Cassie is too soft which I suspect she will be, Michael should do it out of respect for his wife. Val deserves no less. That bitch doesn't deserve to be remembered by her child without the child knowing the FULL truth of what she did. Maybe they can tell Michaela the truth when she's an adult, like 30 years old or something, and able to handle it. But they need to tell her the whole truth then not sugarcoat it Val does not deserve that. And until then best for everyone involved to leave her in the past where she belongs. It's kind of a good thing that she died, as horrible as that is to say. Because if she was still around and Michael found out about the baby, that would be the end of his marriage and I wouldn't blame Cassie one bit a woman can only take so much. At least this way, Val is out of the picture, and they can move on.

I'm sure Cassie and Michael won't have trouble loving that little baby. She's innocent. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the excellent review.  I know it was all drama but I'm trying to end the story and needed to take it to a closing point..I had this planned from when she slept with Bal but couldn't just jump ahead...still trying to work out details and decide how much long I'll keep it going

 

thanks for the detailed review.mmits nice to read what people think about it all

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 04:47 am Title: Chapter 120 Michael's letter

Big, happy family? Please!



Author's Response:

Is that please as in yes?  Or please as in come on this is stupid?   I still don't know where I'm going to take it.

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