Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 30, 2014 05:35 am Title: Chapter 5: Surprise Surprise

Their plan, she is brilliant!! The trouble is being able to take his stuff and destroy it. I mean, he'll want to show it off(of course) but any evidence he has, he'll be more than cautious to let anybody touch it. XDXD That food fight was awesome. Great chapter! :-))) 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2014 12:19 am Title: Ch. 4: Close Calls and Terrible Research.

So how does it really work? O.o

Author's Response:

If you're wondering about how someone becomes a mermaid, I think I should tell you:

As mentioned in the story, if a mer-person kisses a human (on the lips) once or twice, the human is able to breathe and talk in the water, but the catch to it is that they can only breathe in the water if the mer-person is with them. The third kiss, the human then becomes a mer-person, but is able to get out of it if dry, and if they are wearing a special piece of clothing or jewellry, such as a belt (like Michael's) or a bracelet.

I also should say it can work on deceased people too, so if the mer-person kisses the passed away human three times on the lips, the human can come back to life with the mer-person conditions, and can live on dry land.

I hope this clears it up for you.

With L.O.V.E.

Sweetpanda14

Reviewer: MJFan232 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2014 06:59 pm Title: Ch. 4: Close Calls and Terrible Research.

Neat so far. :) And I can imagine Michael as a merman (sort of like the 1989 Disney film The Little Mermaid, but different). And I can see Michael using his voice to charm Alex, too (which would be kind of like what Ariel originally planned to do to Eric with her beautiful voice before Ursula, the Sea Witch, came along). Also, unlike Ariel in The Little Mermaid, it seems that Michael is able to change himself into a merman and back to human at will, which is something I find to be awesome.. :)

Keep up your super-neat, very intriguing and phenomenally inspiring writing! :)

Author's Response:

Actually the Merman form that Michael has is the type of mermaid from the 1989 Disney film. Also, Alex and Mike are just friends, though Maddy is starting to ship those two like FedEx XD

Thanks so much from the both of us! :D

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2013 06:48 am Title: Ch.3 The Mad Man

XDXDXD I love how Michael is completely okay with some strangers taking him in, seeing him outside his mermaid form, and making him sleep in their house all without his permission. XDXd As John Legend says "We Just Don't Care" lol that's how Michael is, just nonchantly living with a group of fangirls, what could possibly go wrong? Lol Guess we'll hace to wait and see. Nice chapter! 

Author's Response:

Hey hey, Mike needed to recover after that storm XD Anytime! ;)

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 19, 2013 03:53 am Title: Ch. 2: Hello There.

I don't like how they all kidnapped MJ. Some scientist is gonna like find him and steal him away then do creepy experiments on him.  Its one thing if they pulled him back on the beach then did some first aid, its a whole nother when they kidnap him. :/. Other than that, great chapter!

Author's Response:

Kaykay, they kids; they don't know what they're doin. Plus, it's Mchael Jackson. Who wouldn't want to save him? Lol, anyways, thanks a bunch for reading!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2013 05:51 pm Title: Ch. 1: One Interesting Catch.

Ooooooooooooooooh!!! 

Is that a mermaid Michael on the horizon?!?!? 

Super cool!!!

Great chapter, I've always wanted to see like a mermaid MJ story, and now there's one! Ya'll made my dreams come true! :-)))) Excellent chapter!

Author's Response:

Sweetpanda14 talking: amj *blushes* it was originally my idea, and it's flattering me terribly that I made your dreams come true. I'm so thankful it happened. can't wait for you to keep reading! :D

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2013 08:04 pm Title: Prolouge

I have only one complaint. It was way to short. I wanted it to keep going, lol. I like it, very interesting.

Author's Response:

Sorry, The next chapter should be longer. Thanks!!! <333