[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2014 04:03 pm Title: The Monsters and Ghosts Threaten Me
O_o. Cliffhanger ending!!!!!! Woaaaah!!! Everybody was a bit too comfy at leaving other people behind, but that is scary movie rule #5 Anyone who falls behind, is left behind. Wonder what Michael did. O_o Great little story!
Author's Response:
Thankies!!! Yeah, I think I would've gave them a little more emotion if I wasn't rushing. 
The world may never know.... o_O XD Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2014 03:55 pm Title: The House of Undesirables
Very oddxD Very very odd. This whole chapter reminds me of "The Haunted Mansiom" ride at DisneyXD in a great way of course. Not your best work? JU CRAZY?!?!? All your work is the best! On to the next part! :-)))
Author's Response:
Why, thank you XD Anything with Disney is great so,yay! Eh, it's okay, but not all of it is great. Thanks Kay!!!
<333 ~Sarah
Date: Feb 02, 2014 03:24 pm Title: The Middle
Continue please
Author's Response:
Okay! Should be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2014 11:09 pm Title: The Beginning
Ooh, now this is very intriguing... I like it.. :) And I can imagine Michael reading about Al Capone, the gangster of Chicago, too.
Good luck with the next chapter, my friend. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! =) Yeah, I did too.
Hopefully it'll be up soon. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2014 11:06 pm Title: 1 - Coming Soon!
This is really awesome so far. :) I like it a lot, and I find it to be very inspiring as well. :)
Author's Response:
Whoa, Inspiring??? THANK. YOU. That... that means a lot to me. Thank you... a lot. <33
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 09:58 pm Title: The Monsters and Ghosts Threaten Me
WOAH.
That was... Scary. Amazing, crazy well written and scary... I loved this chapter. Incredible, a new favorite! This just radiates this aura, nightmarish... I loved the way Threaghtened and Ghost and my favorite song in thr world, Is It Scary was woven into this... This is amazing!!!
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it and I hope you like the others as well!!! Once again, thanks! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 09:48 pm Title: The House of Undesirables
Not your best work? OH MY GOD I'd be scared to read your best work, how can this possibly get any better? x.x
I love this!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol, Thank you a lot!!!! <333
Date: Jan 11, 2014 03:43 pm Title: The Beginning
OOOOOOHHH YEEEEAAAAAAHHHH MICHAEL IS LIKE A BOSS!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks Maddy! Lol, ikr? Part 2 coming soon!
Date: Jan 11, 2014 03:24 pm Title: The Beginning
Oh Lord..... What's gonna happen?
Author's Response:
We'll have to find out in the next chapter... lol thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Dec 21, 2013 09:18 pm Title: The Monsters and Ghosts Threaten Me
oh my God this was SO good!!
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch! The next one will come out soon! <333
Date: Nov 27, 2013 07:58 pm Title: 1 - Coming Soon!
I loved this chapter Oh My God I think Im going to get nightmares lol
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! lol, Hope you won't!
<333
Date: Nov 27, 2013 01:19 pm Title: The Monsters and Ghosts Threaten Me
I'm shiver in fear
Author's Response:
Don't worry! All is fine, dear.
Hope you enjoyed this chapter. <333
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2013 09:33 pm Title: The House of Undesirables
The introduction was great. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 21, 2013 05:18 pm Title: The House of Undesirables
Whoa girl I actually love this, very different and interesting!
I can't wait for more. ^_^
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you like it! ^^
Date: Nov 20, 2013 02:19 pm Title: The House of Undesirables
I loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks! 