Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2014 06:58 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVIII - Love

This was such a sweet chapter but I feel like a shit storm is coming.. They are finally in love but Jean still isn't able to tell him who she really is. If he loves Jean, he will have to love Ava, and what's she's doing for him. Man man man.. I truly hope he won't be mad and understands. She's not one of those people who lied about who they were to come into his life to lie on him, the complete opposite actually. She believes in him and will be the one who's in his corner, helping him. Michael has to know that and understand it. He just has to. And she really does love him, so it's definitely not a joke or a lie. 

Author's Response:

Hey Kat :D Yes, that was sweet. Well, you read the first chapter so you know how Michael will react :/ They are in love so maybe Michael can get over it and forgive her! thank you for the review, the new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: Tigereyes Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 29, 2014 08:19 am Title: CHAPTER XLVII - Reality

Oh Jesus...

 

I think Ava should come clean, tell him everything, and if true love holds strong maybe he'll forgive her realising she had his best interests at heart. She doesn't need the job anyway, Michael would find her something different if she stayed with him. Shit...I'm going nuts here trying to figure out how they can get through this and stay together!! And it's not even my story!! Aaaarghhh...

Author's Response:

Hey Tiger :D Ava needs to tell Michael the truth now. It's still going to be bad so now or later, it won't change! The new chapter is online!! :)

Reviewer: GnRMJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 28, 2014 02:26 am Title: CHAPTER XLVII - Reality

When I first read this you had me hooked ! Then I stopped reading for a while just waiting till you kept updating and I began reading again till you had about 4-5 new chapters up because I liked having all the new updates to read so I wouldn't have to wait on a new chapter lol & Lord now I see I missed a lot from the times I stopped reading!you threw in the tapes, her marriage, & now the I love you part?! Ahhh! I can't wait to see what happens next! I truly enjoy this story great job :]

Author's Response:

Thank you !!! I'm glad you lke the story! Enjoy the new chapter :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2014 11:23 am Title: CHAPTER XLVII - Reality

She'd better tell him that she loves him back. It isn't a lie and he needs to hear it. Then she has to tell him the truth and I sure hope he forgives her........

I don't think I want to read the next chapter, it will be too painful. 

Author's Response:

Hey Camille! Her feelings are true, so you're right Michael needs to hear it. And I bet he will forgiven her if he knows she is in love too! Thank you or the review, the new chapter (if you wannaread it) is online

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2014 04:26 am Title: CHAPTER XLVII - Reality

noooooooooooooo :( He told her he loved her. No, just no :( Annie :((( poor baby Mikey :( This gives me a feeling that we're not gonna have a happy ending :(

Author's Response:

Hey girl! Well... you'll have to read the next chapter to know :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2014 10:13 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVII - Reality

And now my heart is about to start breaking. Michael finally has told Jean he loves her but I know she's gonna leave him soon. Lawd I can't watch anymore!! Smh. 

Author's Response:

Hey! :) Awww, I'm sorry. It's going to be hard for everybody but you have to be strong

Reviewer: kaybelike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2014 05:02 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III

Girl, there's only so much drama my ass can take! Rael is pure sex and I can't wait until Michael finds out about him! I was wondering though, what do you use to edit the three pictures of Rael, with the border and stuff? It looks really nice!

Author's Response:

HAHAHA! Hey new reader :D IKR, Rael is so damn handsome and Michael is going to be crazy once he finds out Ava was married to him lol! Thank you! For the pictures, I used PhotoFiltre :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 05:42 am Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III

That was beyond mess up to play a girl like that. That was so fucked up how he gone for get the condom and then act like having a baby is a bad thing. I'm with Ava I get him point but how he did it was fucked up. Hell naw.

 

Author's Response:

IKR! Michael has to be more careful!