Date: Feb 10, 2014 03:38 am Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
No no no continue please!!!
Author's Response:
The new chapter is online ! :)
Date: Feb 09, 2014 11:37 pm Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
AAAWWWWW!!!!! So it finally happened. I wish Michael would have listened to Ava, maybe would have been more understanding. But I get that he felt used and didn't want to listen. I hope Ava can fix this. You are doing great!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Neece! Yup, Michael knows the truth now! Let's see if Michael can forgive her
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2014 08:03 pm Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
Omg I hope she'll be OK. That whole chapter was so hard to read. I feel sad for both of them.
I'm guessing that he didn't actually read the article before flying off the handle. He has every right to be mad but he was being particularly hurtful as if he assumed she was out to fuck him over. The best thing she can do at this point is publish the article and quickly. She shouldn't give up hope. I'm sure once it's out Michael will have calmed down enough to read it and given some time to process everything realize that he shouldn't punish her for the actions of Reece (or Lisa for that matter). He at least owes it to her to listen to her explanation after everything she has done for him. If he still can't trust her after that then fair enough, but I hope they can get past it. They need each other.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! It was painful for the both of them but at least now Michael knows. I think I would have reacted like Michael. Maybe he needs some time to realize she did everything for him. Tank you for the review and the rate :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 09, 2014 07:00 pm Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
I'm glued. He had every right to be furious, and Ava/Jean was an idiot for telling him to make himself at home without first picking up her stuff. Especially since I imagine all of her stuff would say "Ava" on it. I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response:
Hey Redone :) Yes, Ava should have told Michael earlier! Thank you for the review and the rate :)
Date: Feb 09, 2014 06:57 pm Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
Very predictable. I knew that would happen like that the second he showed up. I can't.
Author's Response:
:( we knew it would be bad but not that bad... The new chapter is online :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2014 07:26 am Title: CHAPTER XLIX - Almost there
You are beyond evil to stop there!
I just want them to get the fight that I know is coming up over with.
Michael was acting kinda squirrely in the library, something is bugging him. I just hope he isn't too stubborn to listen to Ava's side of the story when she confesses. I can see him jumping to unfounded conclusions due to all the hurt he's been through in his life.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! LMAO! Sttaappphhh! You know I love cliffhangers haha! But don't worry, the next chapter is here :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2014 05:44 am Title: CHAPTER XLIX - Almost there
Update nowwww! This is too intense, oh snap Michael is gonna see the article. But like Ava said I feel like Michael must of known something or something was up with him.
Author's Response:
Yes!!!! sorry for the cliffhanger, but the new chapter is here
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2014 12:28 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIX - Almost there
Oh shit oh shit oh shit oh shit
Don't stop there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
NEW CHAPTER ONLINE !!!!!!!! :)
Date: Feb 05, 2014 11:27 am Title: CHAPTER XLIX - Almost there
tell him already! Omg continue
Author's Response:
new chapter online
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2014 08:36 am Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
Ava! If you don't tell that damn man! He is there at your house now go! Open your lips and tells him! Now! I will slap some act right into you girl. Listen to your mom. I know he will forgive you. Just tell him woman!
Author's Response:
LMAOO!She better tell him the truth! thank you for the review and the rate!
Date: Feb 04, 2014 07:13 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIX - Almost there
Time for the truth to come out! Tell him Ava, tell him NOW! Her mother is right. She is saving him and he won't hate her for that. He may be a little bit upset at first but he won't hate her when he realizes what she's done. Time to do some talking. And her mother is fabulous, Gina Torres! Lol wasn't expecting that, or for her name to be Avalon. I think Michael will like her real name too.
Author's Response:
Hey gilr :) Yup, time to tell everything! Let's hope Michael understands! YEESS, Gina Torres is so flawless! I wanted someone fabulous for Ava's mother. And yes her real name is Avalon :) the new chapter is online :D
Date: Feb 04, 2014 03:20 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVIII - Love
NOOOOOOOOOOOO I CANT HANDLE THE SUSPENSE. Gah Ava you stupid moron just tell him!
Author's Response:
LMAOOO @ the pic! Sorry for the suspense, but the new chapter is here :DD
Date: Feb 01, 2014 06:21 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
This is how I feel right now. YOU DOIN WRONG ANNIE. Why you playin me like that, I thought Ava was gonna tell him in the next chapter. You got me on my toes girl. At least Ava said she loves him too. OOOOOHHH....Gurl you are amzing. But she seriously needs to tell him quick before something bad happens. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
HAHAHA! Because I'm bad, you know it! ;)
One step at the time, she tells him she loves him and then... she tells him the truth! You'll have to read the next chapter to see what happens! Thank you for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2014 01:12 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVIII - Love
This story is so good that the chapters just can't come fast enough.
Author's Response:
Hey new reader :D. Aww :) thank you very much for the lovely review and the rate! Enjoy the new chapter :D
Date: Jan 31, 2014 07:12 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVIII - Love
This is getting annoying she needs to tell him,now
Author's Response:
She has to.