[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 10:17 am Title: CHAPTER LI - Aftermath
Wow how in the hell did the press find out about her "affair with Michael" so damn fast? Though it is naive of Ava to not realize that would come out eventually enough people knew about it that someone was bound to blab for a payday. Poor Ava she has just given up her entire life for Michael and he won't even talk to her. I understand his reaction I would be furious too in his position. Especially given his trust issues. But he has got to realize how much she loves him. Actions speak louder than words and everything she has done was for him. I hope he isn't too stubborn about forgiving her or at least hearing her explanation. It is her fault for lying but I think he would have reacted that way no matter when he found out, hopefully he will remember that she tried to tell him in the library and he wouldn't hear it.
And holy hell, Ava and Rael are not divorced? Michael has already hit the roof, he is set to blast into outerspace when he finds out. I felt bad for Rael in this chapter Ava was pretty mean to him and he oesn't seem to deserve it. All he is trying to do is help and be there for her. I think she owes Rael the truth about what happened and how she feels so he can move on with his life. Maybe they can stay friends? Though I have a feeling Real still loves Ava enough to go punch Michael in the face when he finds out what he said to her and that their fight was the reason she overdosed.
I can't see where Ava can go now where she won't be harassed. Except Neverland....but I doubt Michael would let her past the front gate :(
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :)! You're right, Ava sould have expected that! She is making an article about Michael Jackson so of course people are wondering how she got that close to the man! Michael must be upset but like you said, his stubborness is getting in the way. Ava honestly wanted to help! Rael is trying to help Ava, but she doesn't think she needs him right now. She might, in the future... ^^ And let's hope Michael never finds out about Rael or he might never talk to her again!
Thank you for the review, the nex chapter is here :DD
Date: Feb 16, 2014 07:06 am Title: CHAPTER LI - Aftermath
Re iam_music's comment - I think if this was real life then yes, Michael would have had a hairy fit, screamed blue murder and stormed out. we all know Ava's side of things because we've been reading the story from her point of view...we know why she did what she did and what she was hoping the end result would be.
Michael knows nothing, only that the woman he's fallen head over heels in love with is somebody he doesn't know at all. Someone who's lied to him from the start, written an article about him without his knowledge, and he feels betrayed. Quite rightly so. Even her name was a lie.
I think he's justified in leaving her, even though I'm desperate to see if they can get back together. If someone did that to me in RL, I'd dump their ass too. Hopefully because this is fiction and we know all the whys and hows, they'll be able to sort things out.
Author's Response:
If I were Michael, I think I would be upset too. But he really needs to read the article and understand it was for him! :)
Date: Feb 16, 2014 04:58 am Title: CHAPTER LI - Aftermath
NO CONTINUE!!! it took u forever to continue
Author's Response:
excuse me but I have other things going on besides MJF
Date: Feb 16, 2014 12:57 am Title: CHAPTER LI - Aftermath
excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm not sure that I can wait for the next part!!!!!!!!
Michael, where are you ? Don't you see what is happening ?!
Please, come back soon!
Author's Response:
Hello Nellan :) Thank you! The new chapter is here :D
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2014 12:35 am Title: CHAPTER LI - Aftermath
Girl, you are killing me with the cliffhangers! The Rael thing, I could do without (forget to divorce? IF* MJ forgives her for the story, it's going to be drama over that major detail), but you make up for it by choosing the perfect father for her. Once I saw that pic, my brain could easily fill in the details of that character.
*He'd better forgive her.
Author's Response:
Hey!! HAHA! Rael is my new addition to the story and he'll be back! Maybe Ava will finally get a divorce :) Thank you so much, I want my readers to be able to see what I see :) Thank you for the review, the nex chapter is here :)
Date: Feb 16, 2014 12:11 am Title: CHAPTER LI - Aftermath
This is ridiculous. You would think she made an article with Diane Diamond and Tom Sneddon or something! This is a good article, not negative and not salacious! She basically put herself out there in order to ensure Michael's good name and reputation. This shit is outta hand now. And yes, I knew Michael would react like that, I knew it would be that bad. It was fairly predictable. The only thing I'm surprised about at this point is Rael showing up. And Ava needs to stop throwing herself these pity parties. Overdosing? Not cool at all. She better get her shit together and keep it together. She's in the big leagues now. Stop all this damn crying and put your big girl panties on. She did an article on the most famous person on the planet, this kinda shit comes with the territory. Enough of this garbage damsel in distress shit. She's supposed to be so tough and strong, yet she's being fuckin weak. And I also didn't like how she's treating Rael. He's one of the few people in her corner right now, and I don't think it's a good idea to push him away. He could be a good companion for her right now instead of crying and whining over Michael's stubborn ass. He's gonna have to come around on his own. Leave him be, and she needs to move on. Rael should stick around for a bit. Ava needs to get it together. Stop all the damn crying and strategize. Get smart!
Author's Response:
Hey Kat :) LOOOOL! I guess it's what happen when you write an article about Michael and you're a woman. Now Ava needs to get it together because if she doesn't she'll stay til the end of time in her bathroom!
Rael is so sweet. He still loves Ava and I bet he'll do anything to save her. Maybe she should call him because she needs some help and Michael is not here!
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2014 11:57 pm Title: CHAPTER LI - Aftermath
Wow, this has exploded for Ava. I don't think she knew just how much impact her story would have. Now she's virtually a prisoner in her own home, unable to connect with the one person who can help her hide away until it all goes away.
I missed Michael in this chapter Annie - I really missed him. Tell me he's coming back soon :'(
Author's Response:
Hey Tiger! You're right! Ava wanted to clear Michael's reputation but the only thing people remember was how close she was to Michael and they started with rumors.
Don't worry, Michael will be bck in the next chapter :)
Date: Feb 15, 2014 09:06 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
I'm not really a new reader, so much as a new commentor. And an impatient one at that. Hint hint.
I'm obviously known for my subtlety ;)
Author's Response:
Hello again Redone! The new chapter is online! Enjoy your reading :D
Date: Feb 15, 2014 10:56 am Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
I have been reading since the beginning and finally he finds out!! Omg I knew once Ava sat the article on the table and when Michael knocked on the door he was going to find out that way! And I think he didn't read the whole article, if he did, he would have been a bit more understanding, but Michael deserves to be upset at Ava for keeping the truth from him and oh lord, I hope Ava will be alright! You are amazing!! Please let it not be the end of story already!! d84;a039;
Author's Response:
Hello new reader :) Yes, that was an eventful story and Michael finally knows the truth about Ava. Well, not everything since he got mad. Ava is persuaded Michael didn't read the article! The new chapter is online :)
Date: Feb 14, 2014 10:40 pm Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
Pleeeeeeease update I need my daily dose of my all time favorite story! You just gained yourself a new viewer love love LOVE this story
Author's Response:
Your all tme favorite story?
Thank you! The new chapter is online :D
Date: Feb 14, 2014 03:25 pm Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
WHERE ARE YOU WOMANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN??? WE NEED AN UPDATEEEEEE!!!
Some of us are dying here...!
Author's Response:
I'M BAAAAAACKKKKKK! I had a busy week but the next chapter is finally here, enjoy :)!
Date: Feb 11, 2014 06:57 am Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
I had a feeling that this would'nt go over smoothly :/ I really hope Michael and Ava work it out. I loved seeing them together :(
Author's Response:
I hope too! Thank you for the review !
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2014 11:50 am Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
Oh no she's overdosed oh Jesus...update! Update! Update!!! I can't hold on for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Tiger! Ava made a big mistake. She just wanted to sleep and forget about her problems but this is not the solution! Thank you for the review and the rate :)
Date: Feb 10, 2014 11:18 am Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
You're back!!!!!!!!!! wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want Michael to come back and help her, pleaaaaaase!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, I'm back :)) Michael needs to come back, yes!!
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2014 10:35 am Title: CHAPTER L - Mistake
Omg! She just overdosed! Oh noo ava. Michael was really harsh but she didn't have to go and try to kill herself. I can't wait for the next chapter Annie :) I'm excited
Author's Response:
Michael was too upset to think about Ava's feelings, and I understand him. let's hope he can forgive her! :(