Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2013 06:48 am Title: CHAPTER VI - One night pt. I

"We will be just good friends!" 

Famous. last. words.

Michael sure is cranking up the thirst. And threatening Shawn to stop him from driving her? LMAO somebody's jealous!

I can't wait to see what Michael does during this 'sleep-over'

Something tells me she's going to wake up in his bed whether she likes it or not..........he'll probably wait until she falls asleep and carry her over there. And of course she doesn't have pjamas with her so she'll have to sleep naked.

Author's Response:

Hey Giiirrrlll :D

LMAO! Ava thinks she can handle a friendship with Michael without mixing feelings. Maybe it can works... But it won't! Who knows ^^. The second part of the sleepover is online :D Let's see if Michael succeeded to slip the Force in her panties lmao

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2013 07:56 pm Title: CHAPTER VI - One night pt. I

That smile from in the closet is so fucking sexy!!!! I don't see how she's not jumping that man's bones. Chile I would be jumping his bones right now, humping all on him and the Force. Lol Ana is a gorgeous girl!! She's gotta get a piece of that. He's damn near throwing it at her. At least make out with him a bit. He soooo did that on purpose. I actually think it's cute. He wants her to stay there and made sure it happened. Ol sneaky ass. He wants to introduce her to the Force honey!! He so likes her. It's obvious. All the flirting and naughty smirking. He ain't slick. He wants some of her good stuff. 

Author's Response:

Hey Kat :)) I'm happy you're still reading this story :D HAHA! Ava/Jean doesn't want a relationship to alter the quality of her article! At this point, she thinks Evan is a liar and she just need a little more proofs :) But nothing is saying they can't get any more closer.... And Michael is doind everything for her to be closer to her! I think it'll happen sooner or later ;-)

Thank you for reviewing :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2013 07:23 am Title: CHAPTER V - Friends

Is Jean seriously thinking she has the dirty mind? There's no other way to interpret that comment. And you know that Michael has probably already played out the whole fantasy of being in her bed down to what lingerie she is wearing and the color of the sheets. Next he'll call her late at night breathing heavily into the phone and asking if he can f-tuck her in. He's that subtle. LMAO. 

I'm beginning the countdown until his penis and her vagina are united now. I give it three months, tops.

Author's Response:

Hey Camille! Yes LMAO! Jean/Ava thinks Michael is innocent but he has a dirty mind!

"And you know that Michael has probably already played out the whole fantasy of being in her bed down to what lingerie she is wearing and the color of the sheets. Next he'll call her late at night breathing heavily into the phone and asking if he can f-tuck her in. He's that subtle. LMAO. "

LMAOOOO!! Daddy Michael tease!

Let's see if they give up before or after 3 months... ;)) Thank you for the review and the rate :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2013 12:56 pm Title: CHAPTER IV - Closer

Bahahahahaha it's exactly as I predicted! Michael is cute so far in this one......though I don't really like Jean yet because she's lying to him. But I have a feeling she'll redeem herself eventually.

I want to kick June in the face.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the idea BTW! Michael thinks he's slick lol! He is a gentleman in this story but like you said, Jean doesn't deserves it. She is trying to persuade herself is for a good cause but I think that sooner or later; she won't be able to lie anymore.

Hate June too.

Thank you for the review and the rate girl! :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2013 09:04 am Title: CHAPTER III - Teamed

So June is a bitch. Big shocker there. And I bet Carla is the supreme bitch leader.

As for Michael, he ain't slick with his little 'casual' conversations. I'm just waiting for him to bring up her boyfriend and then act all shocked when he finds out she doesn't have one lmao.

Author's Response:

Hey Camille ;D LMAO! I think every story needs their cold hearted bitch lol! HAHAHA! I thought about it while writing the chapter! Thank you for the ideas, the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: Livelifewithlove Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 10, 2013 04:27 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition

Awwwww!!!! She's lying to Michael....but I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!!!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminalThrills1234 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2013 03:12 pm Title: CHAPTER II - Beginning

Ana is quite the character...wonder how she will pan out later in the story. I really like how detailed this story is and the writing style is wonderful!!!

Author's Response:

I can't wait to write more about Ana. We'll see how close Michael and her are :) omg, thank you so much. I try my best ;) Thank you for the review and the rate :D