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Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2013 10:07 pm Title: CHAPTER XI - Competition

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! does he want to make her jalous ?!!!!!!!!

Is he upset because she doesn't beep him during the tour.....

Please, I know, I'm addicted but comme back!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hello Nellan! Maybe he wants to make Ava jealous or maybe he doesn't care :/

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2013 09:07 pm Title: CHAPTER XI - Competition

That's fucked up. I thought he actually liked our girl. Now I see why she acted the way she did. But he could be doing this to get under her skin too, to see what her reaction is. Michael is a troll like that. But damn all these bitches got pagers and he ain't even text her ONCE?! That's fucked up. I say she doesn't even give him the satisfaction of how she really feels. In fact, she should pay his ass dust and ignore him. Flirt with other male employees. Michael is being an ass and I don't like it one bit. This bitch seems dense as hell and childish, Sadie is it? Like a little child. Whatever. Ana/Jean whatever her name is doesn't even need to deal with that. She should be completely oblivious to Michael and his bullshit. He done pissed me off now. I actually thought she was special and that he liked her. Smh trifling ass. But Jean is gorgeous so I know men will be all over her. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, we all thought Michael liked her and wanted her to be more than his friend. But we were wrong! Michael is already one to the next one! Ava was right to be careful with Michael. He is proving her he didn't deserve her... :/ LMAO! Sadie is younnngggg and naive :)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2013 01:18 pm Title: CHAPTER X - Revelation

Please, continue!!!! i'm dying here for the next part!



Author's Response:

Hello Nellan! The next part is hereeeeeeeeeeee! Enjoy :D

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2013 12:21 pm Title: CHAPTER X - Revelation

Ohhh hek naw!! So 1) Michael leaves and doesn't say goodbye? I mean its understandable cuz in reality they are nothing. I get that so I'll let that one slide. 2) WTF he made her think she was special and that he only gave a pager to her. He said he had a gift for her. But actually gave a pager to all his maids. >_> Well then so much for a gift! 3) Come at me again?! So its a thing that Michael does, whore around with his maids? Because now its clear that Reece was with Michael and that she was his girl. So Ava is just another one to his collection. HELL NAWWWW. Man, Ava Hurt him like hell. He is just fooling around with you anyways. Something spacial? Yea right!

Author's Response:

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Yes 3 times because you GOT everything. Omg, let me love youuu!!!!!!!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2013 12:29 am Title: CHAPTER X - Revelation

Ok Imma need for her to cut the shit. She's not fooling anybody with this fake ass heartless and cold act. She likes Michael and she misses him. She needs to tell him that when she talks to him again. Enough of that childish crap. That's so damn 1st grade, be mean to the boy cuz you're too cowardly to admit you like him. She is a grown woman, leave those bs games to children. Anyway, I'm glad she's getting more evidence for that bastard Evan. Fucking loser ass. I can't wait til he's exposed. I'm sick of hearing about his trifling ass and that creepy ass family already. But Imma need for her to stop acting like she doesn't like Michael when it's damn obvious she does. Her ass is pressed as hell that he hasn't contacted her yet. Girl bye. 



Author's Response:

Hello Kat! Haha You know Ava doesn't want to be easy! And it's just the beginning. She admits she misses him and maybe her heartless act won't last once she sees Michael again :) and YAS! Time to drag Evan! New chapter here :)

Reviewer: AnnieIsNOTOkayMJ89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2013 07:23 am Title: CHAPTER IX - Attraction

I really thought they were about to freaky lol. Damn @ Carla!!! And that date in the bed was cute...I'm calling it a date lol...great couple of chapters!!!! Update soon:)



Author's Response:

HAHA! It was close lol :) But not that ;)) Thank you for the review and the rate. The new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2013 03:23 am Title: CHAPTER IX - Attraction

I'm gonna die right now!!!!!!!!!!!!! So good!!! Please, continue!!!!

This is really great!!!!!!!!

If she's worried she could make an article but A GOOD ONE about Michael!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She has to tell him the truth!!!!!!!!She likes him! She like the nasty little boy......

 

Please, come back!



Author's Response:

Hey Nellan :DD I love reading you reviews ;)!! I try my best to come out with a chapter! I hope you will like this one :D Once again, thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2013 12:03 am Title: CHAPTER IX - Attraction

Yes!!!!! They were very close! She needs to stop acting like she doesn't want that man. Michael has to know it's an act. It makes me sad when he gets sad that she doesn't reciprocate his feelings, like when he says he misses her or tries to bring up something intimate and she brushes it off! Like bitch stop hurting his feelings!! Smh lol. Anyway, that could've lead to a very intense moment in that library. Now he's about to leave. Smh dammit! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! Yes, the almost hit the last base LOL! Like you said in your other review, Ava doesn't want to be that girl and easy. And if Michael really wants her, he will wait! And if she doesn't want him to get ver her, she needs to tell her how she feels too! Michael needs to her it!

The next chapter is here! Don't worry, I won't make too many chapters without Michael in it :)

Reviewer: jaydj Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2013 09:23 pm Title: CHAPTER VIII - One night pt. III

Just had to say, this Is by far my favorite story. Keep it up. Very well written. Absolutely in love. :]

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so muchhhhhh! The new chapter is online :)

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2013 06:35 am Title: CHAPTER VIII - One night pt. III

Update please!!!



Author's Response:

The new chapter is here !! :)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 23, 2013 12:18 am Title: CHAPTER VIII - One night pt. III

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! This story is sooooogood, girl!!!!!!

She knows that Evan is an a scum...

Please, he likes her... he's gonna be mad... she has to quit and leave with him on tour!!

 

That 's it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Please...come back, I'm dying here for more!!!!!!



Author's Response:

OMG, thank you so much!

I think it'll take more for Ava to give up on the article... But let's see how it ends :)

New chapter online :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2013 07:36 pm Title: CHAPTER VIII - One night pt. III

Mannnnnn Ava needs to get some of that before he goes back on tour! The flirting is just too cute. And he had the nerve to be faking shy when she brought up In The Closet. You ain't slick Michael! He can play coy all he likes but we know the truth. I think it's cute that he likes Ava. She's tryna play hard to get like she don't want him too. Girl please, I know you wanna have his trust and friendship but she needs to ride that peen at least once. The Force must be experienced! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :D

LMAO! I know you want Ava to jump on Michael! She wants him but but you know she doesn't want to be easy... Michael is so cute, flirting with her and all! I think he'll wait for her to be ready :) Let's see how long it takes!

Thank you for the review, the new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: AnnieIsNOTOkayMJ89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2013 08:01 am Title: CHAPTER VII - One night pt. II

Aw shit! Michael is being sneaky man lol...and oh goodness! What is about pop off during the watch of some freaknasty movie lol? Need to know now!! Update soon luv:)



Author's Response:

Hey you :D It's going to be a fun night! The next part is online! Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2013 07:13 am Title: CHAPTER VII - One night pt. II

The awkwardness level in this chapter was off the charts. Especially with Michael trying to ogle her through the bathrobe. Wouldn't be surprised if he owned the patent on X-ray vision......

And LMAO @ "Sharon Stone's kitty kat" soon it will be Ava/Jean's that Michael will be looking at. 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Camille! LMAO! Oh Michael wish he could own a pair of these to see what Ava is trying hard to hide underneath this robe! I think it'll think much more time for Michael to see her kitty kat lol! Probably not as long as it took with Michael and Kalli, just to reassure you lol!

Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 19, 2013 10:02 pm Title: CHAPTER VII - One night pt. II

come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!:) can't wait foor the third part!



Author's Response:

The third part is online !!!!!!!!!!!!

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