Date: Nov 29, 2013 12:03 pm Title: CHAPTER XIV - New strategy
I'm addicted girl, please continue. I need another fix!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Nellan!New chapter online :D
Date: Nov 28, 2013 07:23 pm Title: CHAPTER XIV - New strategy
Michael thinks he's slick huh? He buys Jean a gift to try to get back on her good side but still didn't bother to page her? Smh whatever. I hope Sadie isn't stupid. I really don't want her to sleep with him but something tells me she won't. I think she's a friend to Michael. Her character seems very childish, child like and young, and I think that's what attracts her to Michael as a friend. Somebody he feels he can be silly with that won't judge him. Jean should still warn her anyways though. But I'm glad she's still keeping her game face on. He's not out of the woods. Jean is gorgeous and smart, and all woman. Michael still wants her but he knows it would require him to really work for it. As far as Evan, ugh. I hope he's exposed ASAP! He's disgusting. And Reece? I'm not surprised that she didn't sleep with Michael, but I totally think he's using this women emotionally, which is way worse than physically. Sad smh.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat :) lmaoooooooo! Nobody wants to believe Michael has a good excuse for ignoring Ava. I guess you'll have to wait lmao! I agree with you on Sadie. I don't think she is sexually attracted to Michael. But I can't guarantee it's the case for Michael... Thank you for the review :)
Date: Nov 27, 2013 09:31 pm Title: CHAPTER XIII - Game on
Please update. This story is like my new addiction.lol
Author's Response:
Thank you! Well, the new chapter is here so I hope you're ready for your fix :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2013 09:03 am Title: CHAPTER XIII - Game on
Boo fucking hoo Michael cry me a river and then go drown yourself in it. Ava is now officially my hero.
I sure hope Sadie doesn't sleep with him, he doesn't deserve her innocence. She needs to save that shit for someone that actually cares. I always get so upset when I see guys using naive little girls like that it happens far too often. If I were Jean I don't think I could live with myself if I didn't at least warn her that Michael is a slimebucket who tries this little routine with all the maids. Sure she may tattle to him but who cares. Maybe he needs to hear it.
Author's Response:
LOOOL! Michael deserves what's happening to him. He deserves Ava's coldness :/ And you're right, as annoying as Sadie can be, Ava needs to make sure Michael doesn't take advantage of her :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2013 01:17 am Title: CHAPTER XIII - Game on
Yesss girl, WAY TO GO! Hurt him.
Lol I'm so mean.
Author's Response:
LOOl, no! Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2013 12:33 am Title: CHAPTER XI - Competition
Girl I.LOVE.YOUUUUU!!!!!! ♥
Ugh, of course but of course the new girl was going to be cute! Look at this treffa=Michael "until Michael Jackson himself stood up and told me I got the job!”
I'm sure he did >_> uff.. Yupp my girl Ava notice the pattern too, good!
“He gave me a pager! " “We exchanged texts every nights while he was on tour” “Michael said he wanted us to be friends so it won’t be too awkward once I start working here”
Sayyy whaaaaat? Hell to the mofo NAW!!! Oh My Gosh. I swear I can't stand Michael.
He befriends her, has a makeout/sex session with her, gives her fake a gift, doesn't page her at all, and now he DARES ignore her????
TREFFA!
Author's Response:
Hey you :D I died @ TREFFA lmaoo!
Date: Nov 26, 2013 10:04 pm Title: CHAPTER XIII - Game on
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh, god!!!!!
Love this one, girl, please continue!
She has to STAY, the game could be more interesting!!!!.... no?
Author's Response:
Hello Nellan! The next chapter is here! Enjoy :D
Date: Nov 26, 2013 08:12 pm Title: CHAPTER XIII - Game on
Oh the fuck well! I don't feel sorry for Michael. He brought this shit on himself! You don't play with women's feelings and put them back on the shelf when you feel like it. That shit ain't cool at all so fuck no I don't feel sorry for him. If he was honest with his intentions from the start, maybe I would feel remotely interested in his feelings. But fuck him. He's too busy up Sadie's childish, goofy ass. I hope that girl doesn't sleep with him. Michael thinks Jean is supposed to be this disposable play thing who's gonna be at his every beck and call, he is sadly wrong! If he wants Jean, his narrow ass will need to work for it and right now he's losing. He's not loyal at all so like I said fuck his feelings. And fuck that childish ass nickname he gave her too. He did Jean wrong so now she's hurt his feelings and I hope he sees how it feels. Like I said before, he's clearly not meant to be a player because look how quickly he gets hurt. Jean is much better at this than he is so he may as well stop while he's ahead. He played with Jean's feelings and I just can't accept or respect that. So now Jean needs to continue to treat him like he doesn't matter and he'll be longing after her like a sad ass puppy. The ball is back in your court Jean!
Author's Response:
Hey Kat :D Michael is wrong for what he did. Ava is right for giving him the cold shoulder. But she also needs to remember why she came here for; the article. If she continue,s it won't help her. She's mad but she has to get over it if at the end she wants to show the world Michael is innocent. And about Sadie, you're right, I hope she doesn't sleep with him! Thank you for the review :)
Date: Nov 26, 2013 03:34 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
I second that! Sean may not be relationship material, but you don't have to be in a relationship to get the cobwebs off that cooch! Jean needs to show that she IS the game, to hell with playing it. I want her to pay Michael's ass dust. It'll make his apple shaped head explode. She should be strictly professional with him and give NOTHING away. No flirting, no real smiles, nothing. Save it all for Sean. She should fuck him for good measure. After all, that's what players do. To hell with Michael and these childish ass games and lame ass excuses
Author's Response:
LMAO!! Of course y'all want Ava to sex Sean up haha! Let's see if she does! Nobody said she had to be in a relationship with him...
The new chapter is herrreeee! Enjoy your reading :DD
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2013 03:31 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
Also Sean is FINE. Sure he may not be relationship material but a little romp in the hay can't hurt.......
Author's Response:
Oh yes he is!!! LMAO! I knew you would bring up sex sooner or later!
The new chapter is already HERE! Enjoy it :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2013 03:29 pm Title: CHAPTER XII - Players
YAAAAS DON'T HATE THE PLAYER HATE THE GAME!
Wow it's already working. Good on Jean for keeping it cool. No sense wasting energy getting upset over someone who doesn't deserve it. She is going to drive him nuts.
And I don't buy his excuse for one second. If he could text Sadie he could have texted Jean. His finger can still bend it isn't broken. The difference is, Sadie probably texted him first whereas Jean waited for him to make the move. So his head is about to explode because he can't understand why she isn't all over him like a bad rash. I'm sure he's never had to actually make an effort for a woman in his life because he's 'Michael Jackson'. As a result, his skills are weak. In fact, they are laughably bad. Inviting her to stay the night when Sadie is there already? Either he's clueless to the extreme or he's hoping for a threesome and is still clueless to the extreme because he fails to realize that Jean isn't one of his little groupies.
This Sadie chick actually seems sweet and I feel sorry for her. She seems to be really trusting and have the IQ of a turnip. I don't see why Jean/Ava is mad at her or even jealous. Jealousy implies that you envy a person and she shouldn't envy her at all. Michael is going to use her like a kleenex.
Michael of all people should know how it feels to be lied to and used. Sad that he can't seem to treat others how he would like to be treated. Someone needs to learn the golden rule.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! HAHA! Exactly! Michael is already having regrets now that his Twinkle is attracted by Sean! And Sadie.. She is so young and innocent! Let's hope she doesn't give her innocence to Michael! I agree, Michael's excuse was weak but maybe he is not ready to tell Ava the real reason why he didn't have time to text her... I won't say more!!!
Thank you for the review and the rate girl!
Date: Nov 26, 2013 03:23 pm Title: CHAPTER XII - Players
Sean is gorgeous and I'm not buying that lame ass excuse Michael gave. Cut the fuckin bullshit Michael. This fake innocent shit is NOT working. He knows what the fuck he's doing. I say Jean continues to flirt with Sean and asks him to drive her home. Michael is so passive aggressive and it's fucking irritating. Obviously he thought Jean would be falling all over him and sweating him, and when that didn't work, he went and got in this child's Sadie face. Negro please. Jean plays this game much better than he does and she is too damn fine to compete with a child for his attention. Michael is really pissin me the hell off. She needs to continue to pay his ass dust. I say bring on more Sean! He's fine!
Author's Response:
Sean if FIIINNEE! She needs to have a piece of that! But knowing Ava, she won't because as much as she hates Michael right now, she doesn't want to hurt him too bad. She might do some petty things but not bad enough to make him hate her! Thank you for the review! The next chapter is HERE, enjoy :D
Date: Nov 26, 2013 03:16 pm Title: CHAPTER XII - Players
Please, let her stay there!!!!!!! They need to have time together.. please, come back!
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command, the new chapteris here Nellan :D
Date: Nov 26, 2013 10:45 am Title: CHAPTER XI - Competition
Michael thinks he's a P.I.M.P
Author's Response:
YYYAASSS
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2013 10:41 am Title: CHAPTER XI - Competition
Damn I thought Michael was nice in this one. Well I no longer feel bad about Ava/Jean lying to him then and neither should she. He's a liar too! At least it will make her job easier. She shouldn't give it a second thought, after all she isn't doing anything wrong in trying to find out the TRUTH, but I know you won't make it so simple Annie :)
The only way to get a player is to beat him at his own game. It's on and cracking now. If Jean wants to get close to Michael for her story I say it's time for her to turn the tables on his trifling ass. I bet if she subtly tells him to take his bullshit 'friendship' and shove it up his ass, then ignores him it will make him want her more. She has to be careful to go about it the right way but I'm sure she can handle it. Then strategically bring in some other dude to make him jealous. He's used to getting his way so she definitely can't let him have it. He'll be feigning bad for her before he even knows what hit him. Plus, that blonde chick is pretty but has nothing on Ava looks wise.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! I guess you thought wrong lol! But thank God didn't give him her good good in the library! She wouldn't have forgiven herself :/ Than you for the review and as you can see Ava is doing exactly what you said ;)