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Reviewer: Michaelsbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 12:05 pm Title: CHAPTER XVI - Confessions

Lol that was funny continue



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Thank you! New chapter here :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2013 07:10 am Title: CHAPTER XVI - Confessions

Michael sure is a slippery little bugger, one minute he practically whips his dick out in her face and the next he acts pure as snow. Kind of like how Ava alternates between cold/standoffish and flirty. I think he really likes her but is trying not to tip his hand. Both of them seem afraid to let the other in so they put up these walls. I hope that there is no frick-fracking yet. Ava needs to hold off so she doesn't become another Reese, Michael understandably takes a long time to trust people so if she gives him the goodies too early he'll undoubtedly label her as a starstruck toy for his amusement and after a certain point, cut her off. If she waits and they work on their friendship he'll fully open his heart to her, it's already starting.

I know he's going to be beyond mad when he finds out she's a reporter and lied to him, I just hope once he calms down and sees that she has his best interests in mind and is there to help him, he'll forgive her. Just because she lies about her name and job doesn't mean her intentions are bad or her feelings are any less true. 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Camille ;) LMAO! Indeed Michael doesn't really know how to act when he is around Ava! And Ava doesn't know either. They should take their time with the frick fracking and try to get the other better, I agree! It's going to be hard on Michael once he discovers about Ava. let's hope he will understand. Ava never came here in order to trash him and like you said, her feelings for Michael are real! Thank you for the review girl :D

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 10:10 pm Title: CHAPTER XVI - Confessions

love it!!! Thank you!

Please, continue!!!



Author's Response:

No, thank YOU Nellan ;D The new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 09:10 pm Title: CHAPTER XVI - Confessions

Damn.. I know Jean feels bad about what she's doing but she's not doing it to hurt him or stab him in the back. I surely hope he remembers what he said about forgiveness when it comes out that Jean is there undercover basically. I think Michael is growing some real feelings for her and she is too, even though she's tryna hide it. I just hope she can keep that under control. Besides, Michael is still way too playful and hasn't proven himself that he's worthy of really tryna date her. And it's hilarious that he's so jealous of her and Sean. Boomerang is one of my favorite movies and that is hilarious that they watched that!! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :D I feel bad for her! She likes Michael very much, he does too but once he discovers the real reason she is here, he'll be very hurt!  Let's see if he can let love rule like Lenny Kravitz sings lol.

Lmao! I know Ava won't stop flirting with Sean just because Michael gave her a teddy bear lol! Thank you for the review girl :D

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 06:50 pm Title: CHAPTER XV - Call of duty

No frick fracking... Girl please who are you trying to convince?! Lol... Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

LMAO! Let's see if there's some frick fracking or not ;)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 10:50 am Title: CHAPTER XV - Call of duty

The man is soooooo naughty!!! He likes playing games, a LOT!!!

Can't wait for the next encounter front of a ..... movie..!



Author's Response:

Indeed, he is lol! I bet Jean will have a hard time hiding her feelings for him :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 09:04 am Title: CHAPTER XV - Call of duty

He finally beeped her.

Oops she let her jealousy show when she brought up how he beeped newbie and not her. She need more info on him before frick fracking.

But I'm sure that's what he wants. Inviting her to stay? That means he has something up his sleeve. And if he wants to frick frack Ava need to make sure its something serious and not like Reece.



Author's Response:

Yes, lmao! Jean/Ava is unable to hide her jealousy She likes Michael more than she wants to admit it but like you said, no frick fracking! ;) Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 06:57 am Title: CHAPTER XV - Call of duty

Lmfaooo I'm so pathetic for not reviewing but Annie lemme tell ya that this story has now taken the place of 'Hang On To Your Love' on my top ten list lol xD I love this! 

Sadie is cute. But that's it, I doubt Michael likes her like that. I like how Ava or Jean whatever lol stood up for her against Kurt. That was sweet of her. ~

Oh, lmfaooo frick frack 😂 I can't. That was on my mind all day today and I kept laughing. Oh, yeah this is my favorite story ever!

I wonder what Michael is plotting. He probably does want to 'frick frack' Jean! lmfaooo in the main time I'll be waiting over here patiently for the next chapter. Don't mind me lol.

Shinie xx



Author's Response:

Oh no, it's ok girl :)) Well, I don't think Hang On To Your Love will be as dramatic as this story lol! The drama is in this story :D! The next chapter is here, thank you for the review and the rate :))

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2013 05:53 am Title: CHAPTER XV - Call of duty

I wonder what 'slick' maneuver Michael is going to try this time....the old "you have a peice of lint on your ass that I'm using as an excuse to touch it" perhaps? Or "accidentally" tossing popcorn down the front of her shirt? Cause I know he's going to put the moves on her somehow. She'd better not give in this time. I still don't trust him. Though we all know she wants to 'frick-frack' him. 

She SHOULD tease him though by wearing a skimpy outfit and then parading around in it in front of Sean or something.

I see that Sadie is growing on Ava whether she likes it or not...kind of like a cute little fungus lmao. She should befriend her to find out more info about Michael. If they are in fact friends maybe he's told her about Evan? He's been too busy generating sexual tension with Jean and imagining her naked in order to really confide in her yet. 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! I would LOVE to see Michael do that lol!

They both want to frick frack and if it was up to Michael, it would have happened in the library! Jean knows she has to take her time. She should wait for Michael to tell her why he didn't page her when he was away!

Fungus?! LMAOOO!! I am dead! I do agree when you say she needs to keep Sadie close in case of Michael told her things about Evan! Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2013 09:47 pm Title: CHAPTER XV - Call of duty

I can't wait for...... tonight!!!!!



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NEW CHAPTEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRR

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2013 09:30 pm Title: CHAPTER XV - Call of duty

Hmm so Jean is gonna stay over again huh? This shall be interesting. Michael definitely still likes her but he's def gonna have to work for her affection. I still wanna know why the hell he never paged her when he was on tour!!! He's still not forgiven for that. And it seems like Sadie sees Jean like a big sister. I don't see a romantic connection between her and Michael. Sadie strikes me as very child like, naive, and maybe a little immature. Michael sees her as a friend, but I think Jean is the woman he wants. She is WOMAN, 100%. She's gorgeous as hell, tough, and very outspoken. She would present more of a challenge to him than any other woman and I think that's part of why he likes her so much. Anyway, can't wait to see them watch Boomerang. She should totally wear those pajamas again without the robe just to torture his ass!!! That'll teach his ass to ever treat her wrong again. And to add the icing on the cake, still use Sean to make Michael a jealous mess. 



Author's Response:

Hello Kat! Indeed, it will be VERY interesting ;) I agree on everything you said, Michel needs to learn his lesson before they can frick frack lmao/ Don't worry Sean is still here :)) Thank you for the review :)!! New chapter here

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2013 11:20 am Title: CHAPTER XIV - New strategy

Whatever Michael, I don't get why he wasn't able to text Jean if he could text Sadie. I don't care what kind of elaborate excuse he cooks up. Jean had better keep her guard up with him, that teddy bear doesn't fool me for one minute. I bet he made that whole 'Twinkle' story up after the fact. Still don't trust him and I still think all he cares about is vaginal access. Though I can see Ava's motivation in wanting to be 'friends' since it won't benefit her story if they're fighting over petty shit. 

 



Author's Response:

Hello Camille! There is a reason why Michael didn't text Ava... Come on, you know I have something planned lol. Well about that Twinkle thingy, maybe yes... or maybe he did think or her! You don't believe Michael lmao? All I can say is keep reading if you want to know what are Michael's true motives! ;) Thank you for the review and the rate!

Reviewer: SmoothCriminalThrills1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:24 pm Title: CHAPTER XIV - New strategy

Great chapter! Update soon:)



Author's Response:

Thank youu! The new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 01, 2013 05:04 am Title: CHAPTER XIV - New strategy

You killing with your updates!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

I can't wait to read the next part! Please, girl come back soon!!!!!!

They NEED to spend time together, in his room... maybe...

She needs to do a great article about him, and more find proof about Evan  sick allegations, quick!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't forget Michael needs LOOOOOOOOOOOOVES and........... she LOVES him!!!:) No doubt about it!!! Give it some!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)



Author's Response:

Hello Nellan! I am so sorry for the wait, I was trying to update my other story. But I am back. HAHA! I'm sure Michael's needs will be fulfilled sooner or later ;)

Reviewer: Michaelsbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2013 08:04 pm Title: CHAPTER XIV - New strategy

I fucking love this PLEASE PLEASE continue



Author's Response:

Thank yeww! The new chapter is here :D

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