Date: Dec 08, 2013 06:20 pm Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
Im speechless... Update please...
Author's Response:
The new chapter is here ! :)
Date: Dec 08, 2013 05:03 pm Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
The new chapter is here
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2013 01:10 pm Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
Here I was thinking Ava was childish for standing him up but not anymore. What a fucking asshole! I'm jumping on the hate train for Michael and I don't ever see myself getting off now. Part of me keeps hoping that maybe Ava misinterpreted the situation because I don't want to write his character off but I don't have high hopes at this point. She made the right decision standing his trifling ass up although I do think she needs to tell him exactly why she did, that she saw through his bullshit and that she doesn't appreciate being lied to and used and to go fuck himself next time instead of some poor young twit like Sadie. He shouldn't be allowed to treat her like that and get away with it. If Jean were a normal employee I would say time to quit, but since she needs to stay for her story I say MAKE HIM PAY.
Poor Sadie. Feel so bad for her. I still say that Jean should warn her. She needs to be made aware of the date and the fact that he is using her to get back at Jean.
My blood pressure is sky high now. This chapter pissed me off so much.
Author's Response:
Hello Camille. Michael is so damn wrong for what he did. Using Sadie because he was sad :/ Let's hope she doesn't get hurt. Maybe you're right, maybe Ava doesn't know the entire thruth and she needs to find it out ASAP
Let's see if you're getting off that train with the new chapter ^^
Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2013 10:55 am Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
WHAT THE FUCK!!!!!! I HAAAATE MICHAEL!!!! I SHOUDN'T of read this before work. Now I'm gonna be an angry mess! AHHHHHHHHHH I HATE HIM SO MUCH!
My feeling with this chapter was a rollercoaster of rmotions! Feeling bad for Michael. But I know I shouldn't so I stopped but now, PURE HATE! HATE HATE HATE!
Update ASAP please!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry!! The new chapter is here but just a little advice, don't read it before work :D! Thank you for the reviewand the rate :D
Date: Dec 08, 2013 02:18 am Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!! I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
THE NEW CHAPTER IS ONLINE NELLAN :D Go get your fix lol
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2013 01:55 am Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
Just stopping in to let you know, I'm still completely obsessed.
Fack! I literally can't get enough.
I wish I could leave a proper review, but, the fact of the matter is, this story leaves a bitch speechless.
I can't tell you what I think because I don't know what to think.
This story takes me so many places, it's amazing. Please, never stop.
Author's Response:
*whoop whoop*
Well don't hesitate to review the next chapter :D Thank you for the rate and the review :D
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2013 12:18 am Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
wah... i can't, Annie. I can't even think right now. I'm stunned, literally, staring at my screen like
Omg he did it. I think what Ava did was stupid too. I can't even...
Both of them are stupid. Dumb!! So what, she should have fucking marched up to him and tell him that she wanted to know what the fuck he was trying! Stupid!
And Michael?! Are you for fucking real? How could you even do that? He is SUCH a fucking manwhore. That proved it. Ugh if Ava had never gone to Reece!
Great now ill be stuck on this all day. -__- stupidity.
<33
Author's Response:
LMAO! Sorry :S Well, everything is alright because the new chapter is here :D
Date: Dec 07, 2013 11:39 pm Title: CHAPTER XIX - Revenge
I'm so done with Michael and this childish shit. And Jean too honestly. Her idea of revenge is standing him up? That's fucking dumb AND ineffective. Why wouldn't she just tell him that he ain't shit and what she knows? She doesn't need to mention Reece's name at all but these games are fuckin dumb and completely turning me off from both of them at this point. And Sadie so damn dumb and childish, she doesn't even realize she's a pawn in this retarded shit. Chile I'm done. All this is a fucking mess. I hope that little ass girl didn't do anything with Michael but I'm at the point where I'm already saying fuck him. And Jean is on my damn nerves too with her stupid ass. Just dumb dumb dumb. both of them.
Author's Response:
WOW! AN ENTIRE REVIEW IN BOLD AND BIGGEST FONT SIZE LOL!
I understand why you are upset. Michael is wrong, Jean/Ava didn't do the right thing. Sadie shouldn't have slept with Michael. But like the title of my stories says, there is several "shades of truth". Everything can happen ;-)
The new chapter is here! Enjoy ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 10:31 pm Title: CHAPTER XVIII - Truth hurts
Ughhhhh I can't stand Michael. I told you he was a complete douche bag! How DARE he? How could he do that to Ava?
Here I was thinking Ava should of given Mike a chance. But WTF is up with this? Everything he did with Reece he is doing with/to Ava. Who the hell does that?
Sick, dirty mofo. Triffa. So disturbing and wrong!! AHHH I can't stand him.
He can't come back from this one. Unless Reece is an obsessed fake, which I doubt. Oh Ava get him back, give him HELL. Become his worst night mare.
Author's Response:
Hello you :DD
Michael is doing it wrong! Maybe it works with the other but he has to do better with Jean/Ava!! LMAO @ your gif. *steals it*
Date: Dec 07, 2013 01:19 pm Title: CHAPTER XVIII - Truth hurts
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
New chapter online :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 07:44 am Title: CHAPTER XVIII - Truth hurts
I'm getting the sense that maybe Reese is an obsessed stalker. Some of the things she said were red flags. He didn't directly tell her he loved her to her face different than how he said it to other people but she knows he meant it differently? Wtf he either said it or he didnt. They would text all hours of the day and night....call to listen to him breathe......and don't even get me started on the fact that she was supposedly fired after being found naked in his bed. I'm assuming that was without his consent. I'm not saying Ava should trust Michael especially if he was using the exact same nickname that's inexcusable. I still dont trust him either. Though Ava didn't let Reese finish her sentence maybe the name is something different....Tweetie or Twin or Twit or some shit like that. But.....I think if Ava ignores her emotions and thinks rationally she will realize there is something off about Reese. She needs to keep her guard up and make sure Michael isn't playing her but she needs to find out his side of the Reese story before writing him off completely. Maybe Michael started getting close to her and she became obsessed and scared him off. Another thing that I noticed, Reese said Michael would get his driver to take her home. Maybe she actually meant his security would kick her out. Whereas Michael drove Jean home himself even though he hadn't driven in years. I doubt he is that proficient of a player to make that story up to manipulate her. I doubt he's that great of an actor.
I guess my thought are, Ava is either dealing with a master player of all players or there is more to the story than Reese is telling her. Time to put those journalism skills to work and find out the truth.
Author's Response:
Hello Camille!!! Like you said, Ava shouldn't trust completely either of them and just be a reporter and find the truth! It'll be more complicated since she is developping feelings for Michael :/ I won't say more! The next chapter is here :) Thank you for the rate and the review !! :)
Date: Dec 07, 2013 01:24 am Title: CHAPTER XVIII - Truth hurts
wow!!!!!!!!!!! she needs to confront him, NOW!!!!
He has some explanations to do... with girls.......... AND she has too!
She shouldn't cancel her date but try to have a true conversation with him.
Nice and good update, I'm craving for more, girl:)
Author's Response:
Hello Nellan. Indeed, it's getting messy. Ava needs to ask Michael what really happened between him and reece. But if she does, it might suspect something! New chapter online :D
Date: Dec 07, 2013 12:27 am Title: CHAPTER XVIII - Truth hurts
Wtf?! So this is all a game to him huh? Smh never again indeed. Michael clearly doesn't deserve Jean or any other woman. That is completely sickening to play these women like this. Then the bastard doesn't even change the routine! The same exact shit. Even the nickname? Get the fuck outta here. I am officially done with his ass in this story. Completely. I hope Jean rips his ass a new one. She needs to read his ass for complete FILTH!
Author's Response:
Hey Kat. Seems like Michael doesn't take his relationship with Ava very seriously :S. Let's see how it turns out! New chapter here :D
Date: Dec 05, 2013 09:49 pm Title: CHAPTER XVII - Morning
OMG I died at Jean jumping up and down on The Force and making it wake up!!! If he gets his act together and keep it together, she'll be riding his dick for real in no time. No clothes, panties or sweat pants will be involved! Anyway, Michael acts nice when it's just those two around. If only his ass could be consistent. He showed her his giving tree and all. He's definitely getting closer to her. Hopefully he's done some things with her that he hasn't done with other women or those damn maids. Ugh. I hope some stuff is reserved just for her since that pager shit was a damn bust! And oooh I hope he is asking her on a date!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Kat ;) LMAO! Ava turned The Force ON! Michael is cute and Ava likes him more and more. Like you said, it might turn into something more than a friendship :)! The new chapter is here and just a little advice; brace yourself!
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2013 04:46 pm Title: CHAPTER XVI - Confessions
You can not deny the chemistry between both. The feelings are strong. But I agree Ava needs to hold off cuz we dont know Michaels real intentions with here. I'm still ova here thinking and tripping over Reece. I'm sure they had something going on, but what? He sweet, loving, got her gifts and all of that but there is more digging to be done.
You...” he says rubbing his thumb against my knuckles “You are precious” Awww that part made me cry. That was so sweet of him.
Author's Response:
Hello you! Indeed, their feelings are growing! But it's gettin dangerous for Ava because of her real job. If Michael falls in love with her, it's going to be harder when he discovers she is an undercover reporter :/ Don't worry, we'll know more about Michael and Reece relationship ;) Thank you for the review and the rate ;D