Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2013 09:56 pm Title: CHAPTER XXII - One more chance

I officially don't like Michael. At all. He's completely disgusting and it's sickening. All I can say at this point is whatever. Jean needs to do her work from afar. Even though she's about to rejoin the circus known as Neverland, she needs to keep her distance from Michael and just focus on her article. I'm completely done with him at this point. I don't think he had sex with Sadie but he is definitely emotionally using her and that's a damn shame. The girl is clearly young and dense and she can't see that. And Michael is gonna drop her cuz he thinks Jean is about to come back and things will go back to how they were. Hell no. She better stick to this article so she can leave his ass for GOOD. I can't and will not with Michael. All I can hope for at this point is that Sadie realizes she's been used and I hope she goes the fuck off on Michael. I wouldn't be surprised if all he talked about was Jean with her and has been using her for his own emotional needs. I hope Sadie completely snaps, kicks him in the balls, and quits. I don't want Jean involved with his ass at all. I'm sick of the games, lies, and bullshit. She should just stick to flirting with Sean and find another guy to get her rocks off with to take the edge off. 

Author's Response:

Hey Kat! Jean needs to focus on her article because all Michael is doing is playing with Sadie and trying to her Jean. Let's see if what you predicted, happens ;) new chapter online

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2013 07:15 am Title: CHAPTER XXI - 30

Wow Sadie is so sweet and nice. This makes me feel even worse for her. I hope Michael didn't actually have sex with her because if he did, I think I might shed a tear. His little 'conversate' comment from the end of the last chapter tells me he is well aware how stupid she is and is using it to his advantage. Ugh hate him so much right now. 

Sadie isn't the most perceptive person around. I hope she tries to hook Ava up with Sean RIGHT IN FRONT OF MICHAEL'S FACE.

And in response to your reply to my last post: YES I WANT MICHAEL TO BEG! On his knees.

Author's Response:

Hello Camille :) Indeed, Sadie is a sweetheart... Michael is wrong for using her but who knows how far he went with her just to get back at Jean! LMAO! Maybe Michael will beg... You'll se :)! New chapter online :D

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2013 01:27 am Title: CHAPTER XXI - 30

Hmpf ima need to know what happens in this party!!!! Pronto! Sadie is trying her best to be nice to Jean. But if she is really Mike's girl that is jsut gonna mess the whole thing up. I really hope Sadie and Mike are NOT getting it on. Or even flirting, I hope she is JUST A FRIEND and NOTHING more.

Author's Response:

Hello Moonwalker! You'll know more about Michael and Sadie's relationship in the following chapters. But until then, the new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: jaydj Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 10:56 pm Title: CHAPTER XX - Broken

Trying to wrap my head around everything that's happened, and the possible outcomes.

I'm hoping to learn Reece's relationship with Michael is just one big misunderstanding and is nothing more than friendship, but that's seeming more and more unlikely.

All I know is Reece is crazy as fuck, Sadie is stupid as fuck, Michael is rude as fuck, and Ava is angry as fuck. 

For some reason I'm getting the feeling that this is just the calm before the storm. I'm thinking shit is about to blow up, and hot damn, I'm ready for it. 

I need more, can't wait for the update! 

 

 

 

 

 

~I'll just be over here, patiently waiting. 

Author's Response:

Hello Jaydj !! :) "All I know is Reece is crazy as fuck, Sadie is stupid as fuck, Michael is rude as fuck, and Ava is angry as fuck." my chapter in one sentence LOL! I gues syou'll have to wait for the next chapter to know :) It's already online, enjoy :D Thank you for reviewing :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 07:18 am Title: CHAPTER XX - Broken

Ha! I knew that Reece was coo-coo for cocoa puffs. Just knew it. And her plastic surgery makeover? That's some twisted shit right there!

I feel slightly bad for Michael. But I'm still comfortably seated in first class on the Michael hate train. I'm having a continental breakfast, reading the newspaper, and don't plan on leaving anytime soon. Whether or not I disembark depends on whether he actually had sex with Sadie. If he did, I volunteer to become the damn conductor. If he didn't, his behavior is still inexcusable. Just because he's sold a lot of albums doesn't mean he gets to play with people's feelings. At the very best he deliberately invited Sadie for a sleepover and flirted with her to make Jean jealous as revenge. He has no right to use Sadie like that. What if she really has feelings for him? He of all people should know how shitty it feels to be used, and for him to go and do it to someone else is disgusting! What, does it make him feel better if he takes the hurt from his past and spreads it around? Sickening! And lets not mention the fact that he seemed to be using Ava to re-create his relationship with Reece, down to some of the same wording. Maybe he was sincere in asking her out on a date but it's possible his interest in her was sparked by the fact that she somehow reminded him of a much hotter version of his ex. Way to make a girl feel special Michael. No no no, I have no sympathy for him. He deserved every single word of that read even though Ava was mistaken about some of the details. And if he did have sex with Sadie, he deserves a kick it the balls too. 

I hope Ava finds a way to get her job back without having to apologize to him. Cause he doesn't deserve it. 

 

Author's Response:

Hello Camille! YES, you were right!! Congrats!!

LMAOOOOOO. I guess nobody is getting out of that train just yet! Michael likes Jean very much and it made him upset when she stood him up and so he did something stupid to make her feel how he felt. But what he forgot was that when he didn't page her, she felt like this. They are even lol. He should have had a conversation with her instead of acting like a manwhore. But I don't think Michael is trying to recreate what he had with Reece. I think it's the only way he knows how to hit on a girl :S

Let's see what Ava does now ;) Thank you for the review and the rate :D

 

Reviewer: mjtheking Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 07:00 am Title: CHAPTER XX - Broken

Omg, that was surprising . Continue asap please! 

Author's Response:

thank you for the review and the rate, the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2013 12:50 am Title: CHAPTER XX - Broken

Naww I still don't feel bad for Michael. He still did what he did even if Reece is a crazy mess. He...grrrrrrrr lol He is now with Sadie, giggling and being cute with her. Then fine take her. Douche bag for that! I can't have this one so jump to the next one?

I was soo happy when she walked away from him YAY!

“Got some explaining to do” WTF?! hell no she does not, your ass was quick to bounce to Sadie, that SAME NIGHT Jean left you standing. So she has NOTHING to explain! 

And you had some place to be last night too?” he asks turning to me “I paged you for hours! You couldn’t text back? Or call? Say something? No?! Was it too hard for you?”   Ohhh Mr. Jackson YOU tell ME how it feels. Cuz she felt that same way when you didn't beep her after you tried to sleep with her!! Doesn't feel good right?!

No matter what, Ava was in all he right, she didn't really lie to him. She told him how it was and everything was true. Michael wanted to use her. No matter what he had the same idea he had with Reece, even if him and Reece dated. He was using the same technique to get with Ava. Still dirty and wrong. What Reece had planned and did doesn't really change Michael and his ways. Ava doesn't need to feel bad for him or what she did. She was in all her right. In the end, He played her no matter what.

Michael hires a maid, then wants her. He has already done it 3 times that we know off. No Feeling for him.

Author's Response:

Hello you :D!! Michael is not dealing with the situation the right way.  But yes, now he knows how it feel to be ignored!! Jean was right to walk away and not argue. Now that he fired her, they can both take some time to think about their behavior and think about what they can do now!

The new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2013 09:40 pm Title: CHAPTER XX - Broken

I'm sorry but Jean doesn't need to feel bad. Michael is still a fucking pig. What Reece did was wrong as hell but it still doesn't excuse his behavior with her and how he keeps playing with her feelings. I'm actually glad she got fired because she needs to be away from him at this point. The situation is too damn messy already. And since he did fire her, she should've read his ass even more. I'm really disliking him at this point because he's like a fuckin Jekyll and Hyde. One minute I think he actually likes her, then the next he's in Sadie's face. It's like when he can't get what he wants from one woman, he doesn't hesitate to move and use the next one. Fuck Michael. And I definitely hope she doesn't apologize to him at all. She's the one who has gotten her feelings hurt and being treated like a damn pawn. Right along with that little ass girl Sadie. I still don't think he had sex with her but either way I want Ava to be done with Michael and these childish ass games. Sadie is fuckin dumb and Michael is a weak ass pig.

 

Author's Response:

Hey Kat :)) I guess Michael doesn't know another way to show a girl he likes her. But I agree when you say he is playing with her feelings, he shouldn't use Sadie just to make Jeana suffer. He needs to tell her how he feels because it comes across as very childish and as a dog! Now she finally can take a break and think about what she can do next! Thnk you for the review :)