Date: Dec 17, 2013 09:25 am Title: CHAPTER XXIV - Guilt
How Ava/Jean should be feeling right now:
That's right, it's an ass in a hole. Hell, I feel like an asshole for riding the Michael hate train as long as I did. Needless to say, I just jumped off and it was a rough landing.
This is what happens when you don't communicate properly. If they had one open, clear conversation none of this would have happened. Both Michael and Jean are at fault for this. What did Michael expect when you make out with a girl, then go three weeks without speaking to her? Of course she's going to assume the worst of you. Although I don't blame him for getting angry and yelling at Jean because she didn't even try to get his side of the story. Hopefully once he calms down he will see his fault in the whole mess and realize that she acted so crazy because she has feelings for him. And Jean owes him an apology for misjudging him so readily.
Author's Response:
OOMMMGG! I laugh so hard @ the picture hahahahhaha. I bet Jean feels like it too :/ I am glad you left that damned train lmao! I hope Michael won't do something that will make you want to go back in! You are right; they need to talk and they both need to apologize! The new chapter is here :)
Date: Dec 17, 2013 08:21 am Title: CHAPTER XXIV - Guilt
Update soon!!! I love this story so much :)
Author's Response:
Hello, you new reader ;)) I'm glad you like it! The new chapter is here :)
Date: Dec 16, 2013 09:59 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIV - Guilt
great update girl! I was waiting for this one!
Jean should think twice sometimes before conclusion... and well, she kniws now....
she knows that je likes her, love her...? so, what does she gonna do... ?
Author's Response:
Hey Nellan :) Thank you! You are absolutely right! After the Reece thing, Jean should learn to listen to Michael's side of the sotry FIRST before ovvereacting like she did! The new chapter is here :)
Date: Dec 16, 2013 08:25 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIV - Guilt
Lmao at him cussing at Jean!! It shouldn't have taken all this for the truth to come out! This is insane! Jean was only reacting a way any woman could. Even though nothing is going on with Sadie, he still let the situation looks ambiguous to Jean and that is not right! He claims to like her but his actions to show that are bullshit. He's been doing nothing but playing games and the shit is tiring already. Maybe Jean owes him a slight apology, but dammit he owes her a BIG one. He's been bullshitting, playin and everything else this whole time. If he really liked Jean, he wouldn't have been letting her think that he was playing her with Sadie and with that whole Reece situation. He's been too damn quintet about everything and this is what happens! Annoyance and assumptions. I'm so worn out from both of them at this point, especially Michael. Enough is enough. This is so childish now. Smh
Author's Response:
Hello Kat :) I agree, Michael should have told her the truth and be real with her. They are both childish. One of them needs to grow up and apologize :/!
Date: Dec 16, 2013 07:10 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIV - Guilt
Continue please
Author's Response:
new chapter online
Date: Dec 12, 2013 10:40 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIII - New day
Ehhhh Michael was trying to talk to Ava, I'll give him that. But I still don't whats his deal with Sadie is. And its pissing me off. How can he think he can play with both of them. How can he think that "fuck if i cant have Jean I'll have Sadie. NOOOO. His little game is what has me on the HATE train.
Sadie is a good kid, a bit dumb but good at heart...or so we think.
Ava with her, "this is for the article" isn't fooling anyone!
I loved the part where she tells Sean they should all go together lol Niiice move and it should of stayed there.
Whyyyy, oh why did she have to go into Michael's room to pull Sadie out? Desperate much? That was going wayyy to far.take advantage??? Let them be just dont get involved. Michael isn't Ava's nor EVER was. All she does is be acting like a jealous ex/gf. Which Michael can laugh at her for that. WOMAN UP!!! We don't even know if they are really hooking up. Or if they like like each other or are just friends. Going into Michaels room was way too much. Back off girl, it ain't your place.
She might feel like an older sis but she isn't. Watch that last part be a dream/nightmare lol
Author's Response:
Hey girl! lmao, yes! Michael is still trying to talk to Jean. He is sprung. But I think he might change his mind after what Jean did... The new chapter is here :)
Date: Dec 12, 2013 01:24 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIII - New day
Jean should have taken the time to clear the air with Michael and have an actual conversation when he approached her instead of pretending that she didn't care. He was trying. It's clear that he really does have feelings for Jean. But there are a lot of questions he still needs to answer....even if she doesn't want anything to do with him personally, at least it would have brought closure to the situation. She was dumb to leave it where she did. And it's pointless to be marching in and yelling at him about Sadie before at least hearing him out. If he used Sadie again AFTER Jean and him put everything to rest it would be a different story. Though he is clearly in the wrong for agreeing to ditch her so easily. That's not how you treat your friends/lovers/whatever the hell Sadie is. Smdh.
Can't believe that Michael just started ignoring Sadie, then had the nerve to tell Jean he wasn't ignoring Sadie. I don't know what to think of him at this point. I'm interested to see how Sadie reacts when Jean warns her. Which she should have done sooner to be honest.
Author's Response:
Hello Camille :) Yes, Jean overreacted. They need to talk because it's geting confusing. But I think you'll have answers to you question in the next chapter :)
Date: Dec 12, 2013 12:55 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIII - New day
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love th eupdate, girl!!!!!!!!! I'm sure nothing happened and Jean must see that he likes HER.... not Sadie...am I right ?
Michael must try the next level... if you know what I mean to convince her...
Author's Response:
Thank youuu :) Well, you'll know if you read the next chapter :D
Date: Dec 12, 2013 12:29 pm Title: CHAPTER XXIII - New day
Continue please
Author's Response:
new chapter online
Date: Dec 12, 2013 10:11 am Title: CHAPTER XXIII - New day
Oh for fuckin crying out loud. The same tired ass games. I am so damn annoyed. He bounces back from Jean to Sadie and it's fucking old and pathetic at this point. He's talking about it's not what she thinks, then what the hell is it?! He is using that girl and I'm fuckin tired of it. Jean needs to tell Sadie the truth. Tell her about what he was doing with her and with Reece. This shit needs to stop already. I don't think sex is involved cuz I REALLY would dislike him from here on out, but regardless he's still emotionally using that girl and she's too damn dumb to see it. Does she not know how he feels about Jean? Or at least pretends to? It's so sickening to me how he can pretend to be so hurt that Jean doesn't wanna go out with him, yet turn around and use Sadie again. Hell we know he's not adopting her. Does she not have a family? What the hell is it? If it's so not what we think then somebody needs to start fuckin talking NOW!
Author's Response:
Indeed, someone needs to talk before it get too confusing! The nex chapter is here :)
Date: Dec 11, 2013 03:50 pm Title: CHAPTER XXII - One more chance
I agree with camilleianPYT!
I'm glad he had a talk with Ava buuuut it wasn't enough. It was a cheap apology Michsel thinks he csn get away with. Ava should of said no and had a REAL adult conversation with him on what happened. All that begging for me wasn't and enough of an apology.
Author's Response:
Hello moonwalker :) I agree when you say they need to talk! Too much misunderstanding!
Date: Dec 11, 2013 03:26 pm Title: CHAPTER XXII - One more chance
Michael be a little Casanova in this story lol! All these ladies he had were just sprung on his ass!!!
Author's Response:
lmao! IKR!!
Date: Dec 11, 2013 11:17 am Title: CHAPTER XXII - One more chance
Continue please
Author's Response:
new chapter online
Date: Dec 11, 2013 07:40 am Title: CHAPTER XXII - One more chance
Well well well looks like someone finally swallowed their pride. Glad that Michael was man enough to apologize. When I read that I started packing up my stuff to get off the hate train, but was stopped dead in my tracks by his blatant lack of giving a shit about disgarding Sadie like a used condom in the trash. For him to so quickly agree leaves a really bad taste in my mouth.
Jean really needs to tell Sadie what happened with Michael and in the process both warn her and find out the truth about the whole Sadie/Michael relationship. Sadie has been nothing but kind to Jean AND Michael, and she deserves to know. Maybe she isn't as stupid as she seems and figured out something already. Plus there are still a lot of unanswered questions and Michael fell short of giving Jean a full explanation. If Sadie and Michael are truly only friends I hope he understands that Jean meant "stop using Sadie as a pawn" rather than "ditch Sadie as a friend completely." And if he did have sex with her, he needs to tell her the truth and apologize. Cause if he suddenly cuts her off cold without explanation he's going to hurt her even worse. Ava needs to watch how he handles this situation very closely to determine if he deserves another chance as her friend. This is a test for him.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :) Aww, I almost made you change your mind about Michael. Maybe it will happen in another chapter ;) You're right, Sadie doesn't need to be used by Michael. Jean needs to warn her. Thank you for the rate and the review :) The new chapter is here :D
Date: Dec 10, 2013 10:03 pm Title: CHAPTER XXII - One more chance
Wow, she's a little bit rough with him... If she will come back it's because she loves him; no more lies girl!!!!!! You love him, Jean!!!!!!!!!
Please, keep going, I'm glas she's coming back, but if Michael is begging for her, she must understand now that he loves her too...
No more hurts, lies but love and passion, girl!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hello Nellan :) I think it's too early to call it love but like you said, if she didn't have feeling for Michael, she wouldn't have came back so easily!! ;) New chapter online