Date: Jan 06, 2014 10:44 am Title: CHAPTER XXXVII - Monaco pt. II
I love how Michael is teasing her. Jean needs to be real with herself here. She's an adult, her and Michael both. If she wants to have sex, then she needs to be real about it! The sexual tension and frustration is a mess! Don't get mad when he teases you because you know you want it. I wish she'd stop faking the funk, it's getting old chile. Anyway, I also wonder who he's been talkin to. It better not be another damn woman.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat ;) Yes! Michael is teasing her and Jean can't take it. Poor girl might combust lol! More info about the mysterious woman in the following chapters! But first, I'll let you read the brand new chapter :)
Date: Jan 05, 2014 12:15 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXVI - Monaco pt. I
OMG so much happened in this story while I was away. Yay they are together! I still can't help but feel bad for Michael though, Ava is going to break his heart and he is the sweetest man ever :( And June is such a bitch! Maybe she is in love with Michael or something, why else would she be so pressed?
Curious to find out who this mystery woman is that has a hold on Michael. My money is also on Diana Ross. I don't like the fact that he wouldn't tell Jean when was the last time he slept with the woman, it probably means it was recent. He had better not cheat on Jean if he does you have to promise to make a character called Camille in the story and have her cause permanent damage to his penis. And who does Michael keep talking to on the phone? Is it the mystery woman?
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! I'm glad you're back! Indeed, many things happened, the plot thickens and, Ava will have to tell Michael the truth soon too :/ He is so sweet with her, let's hope he will understand... June is a bitch, nothing new here lol! I can't wait to write the part about the mystery woman!!!
Thank you for the review and the rate :)
Date: Jan 05, 2014 10:42 am Title: CHAPTER XXXVI - Monaco pt. I
Awww!! And I know June needs to gone somewhere and her cat is about to take Michael lmao. She is going to rape him in his sleep lol! Love the update!
Author's Response:
Hey April!! LMAO! Yeah! Everybody wants Michael ahha! thank you for the rate and the review girl:D
Date: Jan 05, 2014 08:52 am Title: CHAPTER XXXVI - Monaco pt. I
I seriously cannot wait until the next chapter ;) Please tell me it'll be out sometime soon!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Hello you! I'm glad you're eager because I just posted the new chapter :)Thank you for the review and the rate!
Date: Jan 05, 2014 02:10 am Title: CHAPTER XXXVI - Monaco pt. I
Excellent!!!!!! So funny!
Author's Response:
Thank you Nellan :) The new chapter is here :D
Date: Jan 04, 2014 12:59 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXV - Departure
Oh no ava! Don't go all kung fu on June lol. You can kill her later!?!?
Author's Response:
Hey April :) LOOOL! Ava needs to calm down! You're right she can do that later!
Date: Jan 04, 2014 03:32 am Title: CHAPTER XXXV - Departure
great chapter!!!!!!! ican't wait for their trip in monaco!
Author's Response:
Hello Nellan ;) Been a logn time :D I'm glad you're back and yes, I can't wait for monaco too :D
Date: Jan 03, 2014 09:34 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXV - Departure
I know that's right Michael!!! Clock their asses! Let everybody know Jean is your woman. And June gon get her ass read for filth, I just know it. I'm sick of her stank ass attitude and coming at Jean sideways. I really hope Jean checks that bitch and let her know she is NOTHING. Michael is a friend to her child, NOT her funky nobody ass and damn sure not her flop ass wannabe famous husband!
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO! I'm so proud of Michael lol! June thinks she is smart but something is telling me that Michael won't put up with her BS! But you know what? Jean doesn't have to because Michael is showing June, Jean is his woman and there is nothing he can do about it! Love that ! ;)
Date: Jan 02, 2014 10:52 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXIV - Daybreak
Ohhh a teaser is the WORST! Lol and this is the truth that I get tortured like ava but I stop the torture and make his day a little..... When harder XD
Author's Response:
LOOOL! Let's how long Michael can go teasing Ava ;) thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Jan 02, 2014 09:51 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXIV - Daybreak
Poor Jean. She wants to hump that man so bad. She needs to do something to take the edge off, or she is not going to last! And it's not helping that Sean is so damn fine!!! Sheesh. How cute that Michael wants to feed her and give her breakfast in bed. That's so sweet. I think it's Diana Ross too, btw but I don't think Michael will cheat on Jean. Especially since he knows what that does to a relationship and seen it firsthand with Joseph and his mother. Plus look how long he's wanted Jean, and how hard he had to work to get her. He'd be a fool to mess that up. Anyway, Jean is gonna end up sexing him. Lol she's not gonna last.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! LOOL, indeed she wants Michael!! And it's not helping that he is acting like the perfect boyfriend! I don't think he will cheat on Jean too but you'll never know how persuavive that woman can be! ;-)) Thank you for the review and the rate! The new chapter is here :D
Date: Jan 02, 2014 07:50 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXIV - Daybreak
Awww that was cute, continue please
Author's Response:
Thank you! New chapter online
Date: Jan 02, 2014 02:20 am Title: CHAPTER XXXIII - Get wet
Awww that was cute, continue please
Author's Response:
Thank you very much ;) the new chapter is here :)
Date: Jan 01, 2014 09:12 am Title: CHAPTER XXXIII - Get wet
Awww well mike got an eye full but seriously who is the woman? Cause she really does sound familiar. Like I am really curious now lol. Happy New Years too you also deary! Btw thank you for actually taking out the time to respond to our reviews. Not many do that at all. You respond to ever single one lol. You are such a sweet heart for that. Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!! Byyyeeeee!!!! Okay I'm done lol. I know I'm weird. <3
Author's Response:
Hello April :D Indeed, that woman sounds familiar to me too!
Thank you so much! I wish you the best for 2014! And for the response, it's ok lol. I noticed that not every author does it and it bothers me! Reviewers are nice enough to take time, leave a review and give feebdack. Responding is the least we can do ;-)
Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Jan 01, 2014 12:04 am Title: CHAPTER XXXIII - Get wet
Michael better not ever cheat on Jean or I will personally hop through this screen and chop his dick off. You can't talk about valuing love and sex but then do trifling shit. It does not work both ways, so Michael knows better than to cheat on Jean. Diana better keep her bushy ass weave and yellow teeth wherever the hell she's at. But I know that's not gonna happen cuz from what I remember, her ass was at that Monaco awards show.. Wait.. That was much later. I'm tripping cuz this is dangerous era right? That didn't happen til years later. Well either way, Michael better have common sense and discernment to not do anything dumb or I will never forgive him! Anyways, now Janet knows they are together. I don't think it'll be too big of a deal if the rest of the employees find out since they've all had to sign confidentiality agreements anyway. Jean needs to chill! She acts like she doesn't want anyone to know they're together, girl please they are gonna find out anyway.
Author's Response:
Hello Kat!!! LMAO! If he does, I'll let you in the story to smack some sense in his head LOL! You're right, Diana was at the WMS during the History/BOTDF era and she even sat on Michael's lap too lol. But you don't know, it's a fiction, everything can happen... ;-) Thank you so much for the review girl :D Love ya!
Date: Dec 31, 2013 03:34 am Title: CHAPTER XXXII - New step
Awww that was cute, continue please
Author's Response:
THANK YOU?, the new chapter is here :)