[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2014 08:43 am Title: CHAPTER XL - Monaco pt. V
HAHAHA! Meet me in the suite its going doooowwnnn. Meet me in the club its going ddooowwwnnnn. Meet me any where and guarantee its going down! XD sorry anna I had to sing it lmao. <3 Ava was right.... Michael did INDEED notice her. June bask in her ambiance bitch! The mystery woman is coming soon also!?! This is going to be a huge weight of my mind trying to figure it out lol. Great update hun!!!!!
Author's Response:
LMAO! I had no idea what that song was before I googled it lol! Indeed, it's going down after the ceremonyyyy!!
Date: Jan 09, 2014 05:24 am Title: CHAPTER XXXVIII - Monaco pt. III
dont make me make a mj holigram for personal use you sex maniac.
i will do it. Respect MJ Legacy!!
Author's Response:
Why are you acting like I forced you to read my story LOL
Date: Jan 08, 2014 10:37 pm Title: CHAPTER XL - Monaco pt. V
Would somebody please kill June already? Damn. She's really on my nerves. Bitch is inviting herself to their suite? Too much. Like that's really excessive and it's really annoying that Michael just lets that shit happen. No way it could be me. And June's failed ass shade is pathetic. The chicken will go to her butt? That's supposed to be a bad thing? Lol Michael loves ass! And he loves Jean's ass more importantly. He loves all her body for that matter, including her kitty. So Jean can have a seat with her bland hating ass. Anyway, I know I'm about to be in full fight mode in these next few chapters cuz i know they're gonna contain Diana Ross' ol yellow, lipstick teeth ass! Chile don't get me started!!!! I know Imma have to slap Michael too. He better remember who his woman is dammit!! Ava/Jean is there with him and she is a goddess! Bish is looking flawless in this dress and can literally walk off with any man there if she wants. Michael better not fuckin piss me off. Diana don't want him and is only interested in what she can get from him emotionally and physically. I will hop through this screen and beat some ass! Ava better not get hurt amidst this fuckery. Especially considering what she's doing for him. Chile...
Author's Response:
June is so damn annoying and indeed, it's time for her to go. Well, it won't be long until she does....But you'll see on the following chapters ;-) Thank you for the review, the next chapter is here :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2014 10:14 pm Title: CHAPTER XL - Monaco pt. V
*gasp* Michael, you naughty boy!! ;)
Author's Response:
Yesss! nasty naught boy!
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2014 05:09 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXIX - Monaco pt. IV
I think June is in love with Michael lol. Omg! I wonder if he caught the way bill was being towards her or idk but usually it is because bill has something to tell Mike. Any who June is a bitch and Jordie is a little freak XD jk lol.
Author's Response:
Hey April! I guess we have to wait a little bit more to know more aboutJune's feelings for Michael! And you'll defintely know why Bill is so cold toward Jean soon :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2014 02:35 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXVIII - Monaco pt. III
Rosemary's baby is the creepiest movie in the world, don't see how the hell either of them could get 'in the mood' after watching that. But it worked.....next movie night Jean is going to choose The Exorcist I'm sure.
I was suprised that Michael chose that moment to eat her out. I think he's just playing with Jean now, trying to see how long he can make her wait and then catching her offguard in order to maximize temptation. Either that or he can't take it anymore.....either way now that he's had a taste it's only a matter of time until he feeds her the whole banana.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! IKR! When I saw the movie I was so confused :o! But I guess it takes more for Michael to not be turned on by Jean LOL! LMAOOO! I mena, if she wants the banana she does need to choose the Exorcist! Thank you for the funny review and the rate <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 08, 2014 02:29 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXIX - Monaco pt. IV
I think another fight is about to jump off between Ava and June. At the rate the tension is escalating, somebody is going to be leaving Monaco with a black eye.
What crawled up Bill's ass and died? He's probably being overprotective of Michael but he really needs to redirect his efforts towards the Chandlers.
Author's Response:
HEY! June needs to check her attitude if she doesn't want to get hurt! And we all know Michael won't protect June because he sees how mean she is towards Awa! We'll see why Bill is suspicious in the following chapters :DThank you for the rate and the review!
Date: Jan 08, 2014 06:05 am Title: CHAPTER XXXIX - Monaco pt. IV
I vote for more phone sex between Ava and Michael!! *raises hand* ;) And for June to get a life!! Geez, she needs to stop.
Author's Response:
LOOOOL! You wish is my command, I'll try to do more phone sex lol! And June needs to go!!
Date: Jan 08, 2014 05:49 am Title: CHAPTER XXXIX - Monaco pt. IV
good update!
Author's Response:
Thank you Nellan! The new chapter is here :D
Date: Jan 08, 2014 12:40 am Title: CHAPTER XXXIX - Monaco pt. IV
June's funky ass is looking for a paycheck. She's not in love with Michael, she doesn't give a damn about him. She is looking for a come up! She knows children are Michael's joy and she's using her son as a means to get what she wants. She's a thirsty, gold digging ho, and I could not be Jean cuz I would have been checked that bitch. If her son was lookin up my skirt and she said that to me, I would've replied "instead of being a trifling bitch chasing behind a possible paycheck, you need to be teaching your damn child some manners, hateful jealous bitch!" And in that order!!! Jean looks amazing though! She's gorgeous and has a great body. I see why that bitch is mad. Not to mention that the more attention Michael pays to Jean, the less attention goes to her tired ass and her son. June is trash for using her child to basically prey on Michael. This is so damn aggravating, I can't stand it anymore. Ugh smh!
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! Yes June is pathetic and Ava needs to hurry up with the article before June hurts Michael even more. June is jealous because like you said, Michael doesn't pay her as much as attention as he did before Ava came. and we can't blame Michael, Ava is foineeee! The new chapter is here :)
Date: Jan 06, 2014 10:00 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXVIII - Monaco pt. III
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was.... HOT!!!!!!! naughty Michael!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Nellan! Yes, very hot lol :) The new chapter is here :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2014 09:39 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXVIII - Monaco pt. III
*squeals* Is it just me or did I get reaalllly hot in here?! Loved it :) You NEVER disappoint, love.
Author's Response:
HAHA! Nope, it's not just you ;) Thank you very much ;) The new chapter is here, I hope you'll like it! And thank you for the rate and the review ;)
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2014 07:46 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXVIII - Monaco pt. III
Ohhhhhh ahaha!!!! Well this was bound to happen and ava your a lucky chick I swear!!! I jelly lol. Now I need a cold shower! Thanks Anna for the steamy night XD. <3
Author's Response:
Hey April! Indeed, that was hot lol! Jean is very lucky to have a a man like Michael. Now let's see how they act the day after :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Jan 06, 2014 07:40 pm Title: CHAPTER XXXVIII - Monaco pt. III
Lawwdddddd damn!!!!!!!!!! Michael done put her to sleep with his tongue!! Imagine what will happen once she gets the dick. That was some masterful head he just gave her chile! He licked the kitty real good. I know Jean was not expecting that. I wonder will she feel like returning the favor soon. Lol. I definitely wasn't expecting that. Mikey ate the kitty all the way up!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey Kat ;D LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!! I laughed so hard when I read your review lmao! Let's see if she returns the favor ;) the new chapter is here :D
Date: Jan 06, 2014 10:45 am Title: CHAPTER XXXVII - Monaco pt. II
so excellent!!!!!!!!!!!! want more!!
Author's Response:
Hello Nellan :)! Thank you! The new chapter is already here, enjoy :D