[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2014 04:08 am Title: CHAPTER XLII - Monaco VII
Ok, time for my dollar's worth. I started reading this late last night, ended up halfway through the night before hubby dragged me off to sleep. I finally caught up this morning, and I have to say I'm LOVING this. I never guessed LMP until she showed up at the awards, then I put two and two together.
June is a nasty piece of work, but then she is in real life too. Her and her fucked up family. I can see a whole lot of excrement hitting the air conditioning when "Jean" finally reveals her identity - I have to say I can't wait for that chapter. Judging by the way you've written up until now, I'm betting I'll be in tears reading it. I only hope you don't keep us waiting too long!
Author's Response:
Hello, you new reader :D Thank you very much for reading my story and commenting. I'm glad you like it and I hope you're ready because I have more in stores for the story! But don't worry, nothing to keep you awake all night long lol! I'll try to update more often ;-)) Thank you very much for the lovely review and the rate! !!
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 12:16 pm Title: CHAPTER XLII - Monaco VII
Wow Michael. Ava has no right to judge like she said, but she is human and she fell hard for this guy. Plus she is his girl now, so of course she is gonna get jealous and speak up on it. Its human nature to get some feelings towards it.
But now things are going to get ugly. Oh God I hope Ava writes one hell of an amazing article. But that she is still there for Michael 100%. He needs her now more than ever.
Author's Response:
HEY! Michael needs support right now, Ava's support. She has to write her article and be here for Michael. Let's hope she'll be able to do both :D The new chapter is here !
[Report This]Date: Jan 14, 2014 07:21 am Title: CHAPTER XLII - Monaco VII
Omg! June is a sick human being too think Michael did that to Jordie. Ugh! I hate when people call him that! It is so infuriating! I wish I could kick June's ass then get her husband. Now that Ava is going to finish her article I think Michael will not be as mad because she is only trying to help and expose them jerks. -_- Bitches........ Any who I love the chapter and can't wait for the next so ava can bust their asses!
Ps. Hiiii Anna!!! I adore your books! I am reading Cheaters now and OMG! Its steaming and soooo interesting that I stayed up all night trying to finish lol. Byyeeee
- Love April :) <3
Author's Response:
Hello April! I think everybody wants to kick June ass, including me! Hopefully, Ava will lol!
I'm so happy you are reading my other story!!! :D I hope you like it! Thank you for the review and the rate ;D
Date: Jan 14, 2014 12:49 am Title: CHAPTER XLII - Monaco VII
And June needs to be stopped! I didn't even wanna comment on her ass and what she's about to do because it's gonna raise my blood pressure. Jean needs to get to work NOW
Author's Response:
Yes, Ava has to go come to get over with this article already
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2014 11:47 pm Title: CHAPTER XLII - Monaco VII
Oh no. . . . :/ I have a feeling these coming chapters are gonna be really sad :( But this was a good chapter, nevertheless ;)
Author's Response:
What I can tell you is that the following chapter will be eventful! Fasten your belt! thank you for the rate and the review :D
Date: Jan 13, 2014 09:40 pm Title: CHAPTER XLII - Monaco VII
I still can't with Michael. And it's kind of sad. He would be that desperate for love to settle with Elvis Marie and the scraps she gave him. She is only interested in his dick. She will never leave her husband for him and he needs to never want to deal with her ass again! That's what Ava is there for. She's all the woman Michael should want and desire. I truly hope Elvis face will not be a recurring character in this story, I won't be able to stomach it.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! Michael loved Lisa very much and she loved him back. He believed one day they would be together again and that's why he held on for so long :s
Date: Jan 13, 2014 07:03 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
I love this story!!!!!! You are a wonderful writer. It's weird that Lisa Marie is the other woman; Michael was sleeping with her while she was married? That's fucked up!!! I'm anxious about Michael finding out about Ava's secret though; I mean she's writing the acticle with good intentions, not to bash him; hopefully he won't be too pissed. Anyway this story is great, and please keep updating. God Bless. I will try to review more.
Author's Response:
Hello Neece :) Thak you so much!
I'm glad you like the story :). I have so many things in store for this story. So get ready to get your mind blown!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2014 09:49 am Title: CHAPTER XLI - Monaco pt. VI
I forgot to add, Michael had better not be talking to that bitch on the phone. Jean needs not only to get the whole story from him but also to find out who he's been chatting to and if it's that trifling slut, she needs to give him an ultimatum. Either cut Lisa out of his life completely or no more Twinkle. End of Story. If he truly cares for Jean he will choose her. But she needs to put her foot down, on his balls if need be. You can't remain platonic friends with someone who you cared that deeply for in the past, and you are fooling yourself to think otherwise.
I have been in this situation before, where an ex-girlfriend would not stop calling my then-boyfriend. It was about a month of two after we started dating and he had dated her for four years before I met him. Basically he didn't talk to her for over six months and as soon as she found out he had a new girlfriend she was all pressed. To his credit he would always tell me when she called and he never initiated it (to my knowledge), but it still pissed me off. I let it go for a couple of weeks but I knew what the bitch was trying to do. I told him if I had to hear about one more of their conversations, he would be single and free to get back together with her. Needless to say he told her not to contact him again and changed his number the next day. Dude even changed his email address. If he'd refused I would have dumped him and he knew I was dead serious. Anyways, the point of this story is that Michael may need a bit of an incentive. If he refuses, Ava needs to stop wasting her time with him because he obviously values Lisa more than her.
Author's Response:
I almost forgot Michael was always on the phone! Don't worry, there will be a part about it on the next chapter :) Let's hope Michael will be as smart as your husband!! I mean, if I had to choose between LMP and Ava... I think it's obvious! Thank you for the review and the rate. The new chapter is here :DD
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2014 07:52 am Title: CHAPTER XLI - Monaco pt. VI
Not another story with Elvis Marie! Ugh, just no. As soon as I saw her name I cringed. Let me guess, when Michael finds out about Jean he's going to dump her and marry Lisa....and I am going to puke. Lisa has been in every story on here lately and I'm sick of her ass. I'm a hypocrite I know, since she's in my story too. But he'll never marry her in my story (spoiler alert). I just can't stand to see one more original girl suffering while he's married to Lisa and wasting his time brushing her blue suede shoes. Not to mention the fact that they always take him back after he ditches them for that trashbag ho who looks like she's a day away from sprouting sideburns to match her famous father's. Anyways, the point of this rant is that I really hope this appearance was a cameo and that she doesn't have a feature role in this series. My blood pressure can't handle it.
Lisa was not completely unlikeable in this chapter, until she got to the part where she just casually mentioned cheating on her husband like it was nothing. I bet she's cheated with more men than just Michael in the past. And she seems to view it as a 'good time' ugh, why Michael would be hung up on her ass at all just blows my mind. A woman like that is not worth it. All she's going to do to any man she's with is cheat. Good fucking bye bitch.
As for Michael sleeping with a married woman, I don't even know what to say about that. If I were Jean I would question his ability to respect relationship boundaries at all, which could be a major problem in the future. If he didn't care that Lisa was married with kids, maybe he won't care later on when he is either. You either respect marriage or you don't. Nobody is that unable to control where they place their genitals.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is here too. Sorry :/ But don't worry, she won't be a recurrent character! She might not come back.
"Let me guess, when Michael finds out about Jean he's going to dump her and marry Lisa....and I am going to puke"
I don't knoooooow :) It's a fanfiction, i'm sure there is other choice when it comes to Michael love interest! But indeed, I did my best to not make her look as a total bitch lol. And if it wasn't for her relationship with Michael, maybe she would have been friend with Jean!
BTW, I can't wait for the new chapter of your story!!
Date: Jan 12, 2014 05:32 am Title: CHAPTER XLI - Monaco pt. VI
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
The new chapter is online :)
Date: Jan 12, 2014 05:04 am Title: CHAPTER XL - Monaco pt. V
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2014 11:43 pm Title: CHAPTER XLI - Monaco pt. VI
Lisa!?! Omg I freaking knew it was her ass! Any way great chapter Annie <3
Author's Response:
Hello April :) Yes, it's Lisa!! Thank you for the review and the rate. The new chapter is here :D
Date: Jan 11, 2014 06:55 pm Title: CHAPTER XLI - Monaco pt. VI
Chile BYE!!! Damn, Elvis in a wig shows up in every damn story! Smh!!!!! I just can't. And I really can't with Jean fangirling over her average lookin ass. Chile please. So she's the woman and not Diana? Or maybe she's in addition to Diana. Cuz we all know she was in the mix too. I'm so disgusted and disappointed in Michael. Having an affair with that big chinned, Elvis double. Ugh. I know Jean is gonna have some questions and I don't blame her. Michael needs to start talking NOW. And he's definitely not gettin no ass behind this. Elvis in a wig is trifling as hell to be cheating on her husband, and Michael is just as trifling for being a willing participant to the fuckery. If he still wants anything to do with her after being with a fine ass woman like Jean, she needs to dump his ass immediately!!!! And the nerve of the ho to feel some type of way to see Michael with another woman... Hello?! Nasty skank you have a husband and children! I really can't with this chapter. Smh. Every time I try to like Michael, he disgusts me all over again.
Author's Response:
Hey Kat! I bet you didn't see it coming with Lisa lol. I don't know if Diana will make an appearance. Well maybe but probably not as a manipulative jeaous ex lover like Lisa is in this story. Let's hope Michael will have an explanation and let's see if Ava can forgive him! The new chapter is here :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2014 11:20 am Title: CHAPTER XL - Monaco pt. V
Wow Ava looks gorgeous! No man in his right mind would choose Diana crusty ass Ross over that woman so if that is indeed who Michael is talking about I don't think Ava has to worry. That's like declining the finest cut of prime rib for week old trout. And Ava is right, avoiding the woman is not going to help Michael needs to see her so he can realize he no longer gives a shit because he has someone better. This woman has only used Michael because kept letting it happen, time for him to turn the tables and purge her existence from his life once and for all. And if he gets out of line all Ava has to do is flirt with another man because you know every Y chromosome in that room is going to be drooling at her and Michael won't be able to handle it. Just remember what I said about the character called Camille, so I can virtually kick his ass if he slips up.
When it's all said and done, if Michael is a good boy they need to 'seal the deal' in bed. The sexual tension is getting ridiculous.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :) Indeed, Ava looks fine and Michael wouldbe a fool to let her go for Diana, well if it's Diana... And don't worry, if Michael misbehaves, I'll have Claida Schiffer/Camille in the story to check him :)! Thank you for the rate and the review :)
Date: Jan 09, 2014 11:17 am Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
This jruby bish is bat shit crazy. I'm gonna start reporting her. It's so rude to be leaving her comments on people's stories. Idiots around here smh
Author's Response:
I SWEAR! I had to laugh at it. She is crazy! Can't believe she read 33 chapter and then decided to leave a review smh