Date: Jan 19, 2014 05:15 am Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
new chapter online
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2014 12:29 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
Awww my poor baby! Ava needs to be the strength he needs right now. I hope she can heal him, make him strong enough even for when she breaks the news to him.
Not gonna lie, things got steamy there for a moment lol
Author's Response:
Exactly, Ava has to be strong for Michael!
"Not gonna lie, things got steamy there for a moment lol"
LMAOOO! I heard you :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2014 03:26 am Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
I can feel Michael's pain here, not the pain from his hand but the emotional pain, the mental anguish and the heartbreak. I'm so wishing that Jean was real and not Ava - this is going to break his heart even more when the truth comes out. Wer've already seen the little snippet of his feelings at the beginning of your first chapter - I'm desperate to see how that unfolds and what happens afterwards!
They say good overcomes evil so I'm hoping they'll be able to sort things out and live happily ever after, as what Ava's done isn't evil as such - she's trying to do it for his own benefit. I don't think she cares about the story as an assignment anymore, it's all about proving Michael's innocence for her now. Oh my gawd...I'm climbing up on the furniture here...
**Get down, Tiger**
Author's Response:
Hello Tiger :D! Michael went through so much painful things, we can't blame him fo constantly being scared and unfortunately, we know what's going to happen and it won't help Michael :/ But Ava is doing her best to make Michael see she does that for him and only him.
Thank you for the review and the rate :)
Date: Jan 18, 2014 02:58 am Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
love it, girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please, keep going!
Author's Response:
thank you Nellan! The new chapter is online :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 08:21 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
There you go Ava. Give in and love him. I hate to see him cry. That is the worst! But I love the update Annie! :) keep it coming lol
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the support April. The new chapter is online ;D
Date: Jan 17, 2014 07:34 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
Poor Michael. Jean def needs to stay there with him. He needs her right now. If she can prove that she's in his corner and real support to him, he will definitely fall in love with her and trust her even more. He's so vulnerable. I'm so glad she's there with him. They need to relax for a few days and maybe then she can talk him into going back to LA. Hmm.. Maybe a lil sexual activity won't hurt.
Author's Response:
I agree, this is what Ava needs to do. Michael might be upset once he finds out the truth but we can still hope he'll understand why she did that!
"Maybe a lil sexual activity won't hurt."
Date: Jan 17, 2014 07:04 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
Poor Mikey J. :( This is a messed up situation that Ava is in; the closer she gets to MJ, the more guilter she feels about her sercret and hurting him, and he is in this horrible situation with the Chandlers, HOT DAMN!!!!! You just keep the drama goin, don't ya? hahaha. Anyway, please continue, the story gets better and better.
Author's Response:
Hello Neece! Indeed, Ava is in too deep! But right now she is doing everything in her power to support Michael. The article is not her priority. Thank you for the review, the new chapter is online :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 02:47 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIII - Work in progress
Also, I don't trust June AT ALL. Ava had better sleep with one eye open. I think she is foolish to count on that bitch for anything, though I suppose she doesn't have much choice.
Author's Response:
Well, like I told Kat and like you said, she doesn't have the choice :/
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 02:44 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIII - Work in progress
This is SO sad! I can't think of a good reason why he ran off to Ireland though, is he in rehab?
He's going to be heartbroken by Ava and it sucks because I don't think he can get any more heartbroken than he already is! I sure hope that once he calms down it doesn't take him too long to see how much Jean/Ava cares and wants to help him. I know she will keep her promise never to leave him, if he lets her.
His trust issues are understandably so bad that he can't even see real love anymore. I think he pathetically held on to what he had with Lisa for so long because it was likely one of the only real human interactions he's ever experienced. She didn't truly love him though, if she did she wouldn't have been so hung up on going public at the expense of their relationship.
I wish I could teleport into the story and hug him!
Author's Response:
Hello Camille :D Oh no, don't worry! Michael left to take his mind off his problems. Like you said, Michael will be upset when he knows what Ava is doing but if he takes time to think about all the things she did for him, I'm sure he'll find the strentgh in him to forgive her. But it might take time...
"I wish I could teleport into the story and hug him!" same ;(
Date: Jan 17, 2014 03:43 am Title: CHAPTER XLIII - Work in progress
Excellent chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you very much Nellan :)
Date: Jan 17, 2014 03:36 am Title: CHAPTER XLIII - Work in progress
Oh no...he's hurting really bad. Why didn't she stay with him??? I know, she had to get her story written to try and clear his name...shit, talk about being between a rock and a hard place. This has to sort itself out - please don't let Michael suffer the way he did in real life. Let him have some peace and contentment, even if it is only in our world of make-believe.
Author's Response:
Hey! Exactly, Ava has choices to makeand even if Michael doesn't understand yet, he will know at some point she does it for him!
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2014 09:33 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIII - Work in progress
Oh geesh! He ran to Ireland! Like Michael took a serious good bye. I just know ava will succeed in making her article for the best! Please listen Michael.... BTW I love the update lol!
Author's Response:
Hello April :) Yes, he left the continent to escape his problems. Let's hope Ava will make him change his mind :)
Date: Jan 16, 2014 07:47 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIII - Work in progress
Wow continue please
Author's Response:
new chapter online :)
Date: Jan 16, 2014 04:29 pm Title: CHAPTER XLIII - Work in progress
I sure hope June's sorry ass can be trusted! Jean has to work fast. She needs to talk to Michael and she must get this article done so the truth can come out before Michael's reputation is ruined, and before that poor man's heart gets broken. I just can't.
Author's Response:
At this point, all Ava can do is hope June won't betray her! :s The faster she persuades Michael to go back to Los Angeles, the quicker she can finish her article!
Date: Jan 16, 2014 02:20 pm Title: CHAPTER XLII - Monaco VII
Continue please
Author's Response:
new chapter online