[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2014 04:46 am Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III
Need oxygen...can't breathe...CPR...gasp...
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Date: Jan 22, 2014 09:58 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III
DDAAAMMNNN!!!! DRAMA, DRAMA DRAMA, everywhere!!!!! When is it gonna get better from this hell they are going through? Ohhhh Annie.....gurl, you are too much. You are so good and so bad. You keep bringing more obstacles into their relationship. Gurl, I applaud your creativity; you should be a published writer, with all the conflics and twists you put into your stories. I read some of your others, and they are amazing. I wonder how this Rael character is gonna play out; I know we ain't seen the last of him.
Please keep updating, your stories are captivating, I just read Twenty Foreplay, and I love it. Keep updating on that one too.
Author's Response:
Would it be too easy if everything was alright? I love drama, yes :D Thank you for the lovely review, I really appreciate it! You're so sweet!
The new chapter is online :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2014 01:57 pm Title: CHAPTER I - Ambition
just started reading this and i'm on chapter 20 and boy she sure does love jumping to conclusions...
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LOOOOOL! She does ;) thank you for the review Alexa :D
Date: Jan 22, 2014 01:34 pm Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III
oooooooooh man!!!!!!!! Michael doesn't need this ...4
What is gonna happen now..?.
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You'll know if you read the next chapter ;))
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2014 11:36 am Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III
I just sprayed coffee all over my keyboard from laughing at "She does that thing with her teeth, I don't like that." Bahahahaha Madonna totally would. Right before she tears off the penis and devours it.
Once again you picked a super hotty as 'the other man.' I swear Annie I don't know where you find these guys but Michael's competitors in your stories are some of the finest male specimens on earth. I could definitely break me off a peice of Rael.
So Ava was married and her marriage broke up because she wanted to move away for a job? Tough shit to Rael then, he can go choke on a dick. I'm sure with his good looks he would have men lining up around the block. Seriously though when you're married you make decisions together, and if her job was so important to her you'd think he would make an effort to move with her. Could they not find jobs together in the same city? I completely understand why she dumped him. If he wasn't willing to compromise, he can't expect her to keep compromising herself and her principles. It sounds like they got married too young and should have held off.
Can't wait to see what happens when they return to LA........although I'm dreading any more chapters where Michael is suffering so much.
Author's Response:
HAHAHAHA! I'm sure Madonna is on some crazy stuff too lol! And yes, Ava's ex husband had to be super hot! I mean, Michael is the finest man so I had to choose someone as good looking as him :)!
"he can go choke on a dick. I'm sure with his good looks he would have men lining up around the block"
Ava did what she had to do for her career and her happiness. Too bad Rael didn't follow! And yes, they were young too :/
The new chapter is online!
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2014 11:25 am Title: CHAPTER XLV - Ireland pt. II
YAY!!!!!!!! Michael finally took it ALL the way to Funkytown. Now Jean's going to be feening for the Mikewurst every waking moment of the day. Girl had better stock up on sauerkraut and beer.
I'm on pins and needles to see what happens next. I already know that Michael's going to be REALLY pissed thanks to the prologue which is making me cringe through some of these romantic chapters. It's like being strapped to a train track, hearing the whistle, and knowing you won't be able to free yourself on time. I sympathize with Wiley E. Coyote. I just hope that Ava isn't turned into a flattened pancake at the end of all this and that Michael will forgive her. Because she loves him so much! They belong together.
Author's Response:
HAHAH YESSS! They finally did it and Ava already need more!
"I already know that Michael's going to be REALLY pissed thanks to the prologue which is making me cringe through some of these romantic chapters" I know :( he is going to be dissapointed but you don't know what happens next! Maybe he'll give her a chance to explain herself once he calms down!
Date: Jan 22, 2014 11:24 am Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III
Ooh now it's getting good!!! Rael is gorgeous! I know that's not the last we will see of him either. And chile what?! Lemme find out Michael got head from that succubus Madonna! Ewwwwww! And omg, Jean gave him head? Lmao. They make a cute couple I swear. Even though there are bigger fish to fry, I do feel like they need to have a convo about Michael's sexual history. Cuz there seems to be a lot she doesn't know and she should, especially since they're having sex without condoms. Anyway, I know it's wrong but I wanna see more Rael. Michael is gonna be jealous.
Author's Response:
I can guarantee you it's not the last time you hear of Rael ^^! LMAO! I think who gave head to Michael is last thing on Ava's priorities! The new chapter is online :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2014 10:58 am Title: CHAPTER XLV - Ireland pt. II
Oh. My. Gooooooooooood!!!!!!! *squeals* That was so great :,) I loved it!! I've been so busy and I finally got to catch up on my reading, and when I saw the note for this chapter, I seriously almost stopped breathing ;) It was beautiful :)
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Thank youuu :) I'm glad you enjoy the story ;D
Date: Jan 22, 2014 04:24 am Title: CHAPTER XLVI - Ireland pt. III
Continue please
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the new chapter is online
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2014 09:32 am Title: CHAPTER XLV - Ireland pt. II
They they they they.... OMG THEY DID IT O__________O
Woah they don't use a condom. Does that mean Ava will have a baby with Michael? Things will get real messy then.
Author's Response:
YYES THEY DID IT LOL :))) And yes, Michael forgot about the condom.... Drama or nah? You'll know if you read the following chapter :D Thank you for the review and the rate !!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2014 08:41 am Title: CHAPTER XLV - Ireland pt. II
Lol! About time! That was hot....thanks Annie....I need a cold shower....AGAIN.
Author's Response:
LOOOOL!! Enjoy your cold shower! You mind need to take several because the story is far from over ;) Thank you for the review and the rate April :D
Date: Jan 21, 2014 12:47 am Title: CHAPTER XLV - Ireland pt. II
Wow continue please
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new chapter online
Date: Jan 20, 2014 08:28 pm Title: CHAPTER XLV - Ireland pt. II
Yassssss!!!!!!! They finally did it! All the sexual tension was killing me. Looks like she's ready for seconds too. Lol I am not mad at all. I would want more too. Shit her man is Michael Jackson, who wouldn't want more of that? I think Michael was trying to tell her he loves her too. I think he's falling in love. Awww, how cute. Jean needs to know how to put context clues together! What kinda journalist can't figure that out? Lol smh. Anyways hopefully it comes up again and she will reciprocate his feelings. Michael is so vulnerable right now and I hope he doesn't get hurt. I really hope when everything comes to light, he will see that Jean is the one who has believed in him and supported him all along. And he will love her even more.
Author's Response:
HAHA! Indeed, it was about damn time and Ava can't get enough of Michael lol! I think Ava didn't understand because she didn't want to. She doesn't want Michael to fall for her because it'll be too hard when he'll learn the truth. I'm sure Michael will try harder next time ! The new chapter is here, thank you for the review :D
Date: Jan 20, 2014 07:54 pm Title: CHAPTER VII - One night pt. II
HEHE!!! Sharon Stone's vagina?? *giggling* That's fantastic! Love this so far. Have a few chapters to catch up on but it's awesome. <3
Author's Response:
omfg! I am currently reading "Kind of Like Faith" lmaooo! wow, talk about a coincidence!
Date: Jan 20, 2014 03:49 am Title: CHAPTER XLIV - Ireland pt. I
Oh my God I'm going off my head here waiting for an update...
Author's Response:
sorry for the wait Tiger, the next chapter is here:D