[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 12:09 am Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
That was really hot! Diana is surely a beautiful monster! Hope Micheal can handle it!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 12:09 am Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
That was really hot! Diana is surely a beautiful monster! Hope Micheal can handle it!!
Author's Response:
Lol, we will see if he can!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2013 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
Woah! That scence was hella smexy!!!!! The dance, the freak nasty!! Everything!! It gave me all kinds of life!....I loved that chapter. Poor Annie though...she does not deserve that at all...BUT Diana is all kinds of bad!!!! Love it!
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm glad you liked it:)
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2013 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
Woah! That scence was hella smexy!!!!! The dance, the freak nasty!! Everything!! It gave me all kinds of life!....I loved that chapter. Poor Annie though...she does not deserve that at all...BUT Diana is all kinds of bad!!!! Love it!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
And great visuals for chapter!!!!! Michael even had me fooled!!!!! I felt all kinds of hot and bothered after reading this! No wonder he broke out in a sweat. Diana sneaky ass was all giggle after, something is not right with that girl! Okay, I'm done with my rant lol!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl:)I'm glad you thought it was smexy lol!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
What is wrong with Michael?!!! I used to blame Frank, but Frank ain't got nothing to do with this?! Now I can't defend him anymore...he is on his own for that one!! Silly goose...HELLOOOOOO you have a damn girlfriend at home?!! If this is ONLY a dream I am getting really scared to see what can transpires later on. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
What is wrong with Michael?!!! I used to blame Frank, but Frank ain't got nothing to do with this?! Now I can't defend him anymore...he is on his own for that one!! Silly goose...HELLOOOOOO you have a damn girlfriend at home?!! If this is ONLY a dream I am getting really scared to see what can transpires later on. Update soon!
Author's Response:
Michael is trippin girl!! Well, if I were you, I would be scared you too?!!! With a mind like Diana, anything can happen?!! Lol....somebody needs to remind Michael that he has a damn girlfriend!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
I literally need a hot shower!!!!!! Diana is literally the bitch!!! Now I do not know how I feel about Michael, up here having freaking wet dreams about a chick that is not his?? Annie is too sweet for all that. Why do I feel like there is danger around the corner?! I need an update ASAP! Like tomorrow lol...I would have convulsions if I had to wait three days! Update soon my dear:)
Author's Response:
You feel danger is around the corner, then maybe it is:) I will update soon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
That dream had me fooled.
Still Team Diana all the way. It definitely says good things about your writing that I'm rooting for the 'other' woman. Diana is so cunning, strong and determined, I would admire her if she wasn't so unethical. Annie just seems whiny, bossy and insecure. Even though Michael is clearly in the wrong and Annie has every reason to act the way she does I still don't like her.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!!! I appreciate the writing compliment:) yes, it's very interesting to see how people react to Annie and Diana. Diana is pretty badass. That was the plan with the chapter. It was meant throw readers for a loop. But thanks for reading and giving feedback!
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
I'm speechless. Cause all I can say is...
THANK GOD THAT WAS A DREAM!
Cause If that was real, I would've been pissed off!
Wow, it was all a fucking dream! Michael, you better not fall for that snicky bitch Diana! You better NOT.
Anyways, girl this chapter was mind blowing! :) Mind Blowing!
Wow! :O
Author's Response:
That's girl! I had put a lot into this chapter so I hope it was mind blowing!!! Yea the strangeness in the chapter hinted it was all in his mind! I am glad you are not pissed off lol. Michael just let his thoughts get the best of him lol!!
Date: Dec 02, 2013 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
Annie is far too good for him. He doesn't deserve her. I hope that bitch gives his ass an STD. Smh
Author's Response:
Hey there:) and yea Annie tries to be the good girlfriend and it is not easy being the girlfriend of MJ ! And you something else! Lol, I love your reviews, you just bold with everything lol.
Date: Dec 02, 2013 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 31- Only After Dark (Snake Dance)
omg he is an animal hehe
Author's Response:
Yea, he pretty much was in this chapter lol...
[Report This]Date: Dec 02, 2013 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Are You Going to Behave?
I hope it's not 'snuff' place and I didn't know neck has a sex, lol. Sometimes I have the impression like 2 different persons is writing this fan- fic. Now, if everything was so sweet and peachy with Michael and Annie we wouldn't have this nice ? , exciting story, so stop winging wingier. Still Diana team, lol.
Author's Response:
Lol, no it's all me lol. But it is like having two different sides. Diana shows one side and Annie shows a different side. And your are right, we need Diana to bring in the spark! The story is all about her!!!! And I see, you still love some Diana lol...
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Are You Going to Behave?
This whole chapter seems odd. Like what is going?! Michael is so silly, he shouldn't have gone!!!!!!! But I guess men think with their other brain smh...great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next:)
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2013 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Are You Going to Behave?
This whole chapter seems odd. Like what is going?! Michael is so silly, he shouldn't have gone!!!!!!! But I guess men think with their other brain smh...great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next:)