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Date: Apr 07, 2014 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 15 - The Trap Revealed

Michael's slick "rehearse our first kiss" yeah right!

I'm sure he would like to rehearse sex as well. 

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Date: Apr 07, 2014 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Signs of Fear

I know what I would like to happen next, Michael kidnaps Natalya and Katia and runs away with them to L.A. 



Author's Response:

Uhhhh....it's not so simple...You don't just run away from Russia, you know....You gotta wait ans see :)

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 07, 2014 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 15 - The Trap Revealed

OOOOOOOOOMG!!! I hope Michael's plan works!! I don't want anything to break up Michael and Naty. They're so cute with their flirtations and I love seeing Michael with kids!! Can't wait for more! Great chapter!

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Date: Mar 04, 2014 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Divided Loyalties?

This can't be good.

When I picture Igor I vizualize Vladimir Putin even though I know you're using Viggo Mortenson. 



Author's Response:

i didn't want to get the kgb on my tails, otherwise i would have used Vlady as well....

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Date: Feb 04, 2014 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 12 - The Lunch part 1

The picture is making me hungry. What is that yellow stuff in the back, is it a curry?

I think it's time for dinner.



Author's Response:

Russians don't use Oriental spices in their food. It's actually corn-based.

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Date: Jan 08, 2014 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Battle of Wills

Great chapter. Michael and Natalya keep getting cuter. Can't wait to see how their lunch date goes.

And Igor needs to back off! Why do I get the feeling he isn't going to?



Author's Response:

Because he isn't....

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2014 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 11 - A Battle of Wills

Igor is absolutely horrible and I can't imagine all the horrible things he has in store for Michael & Natalya. Though I do love the idea of Michael introducing her to James Brown the stuff that inspired him and such!!! I can't wait to read more.

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Date: Nov 11, 2013 09:24 am Title: Chapter 8 - A Budding Feeling

I laughed so hard at Michael squealing in the car. I can just see it......this chapter was very cute! I can't wait to see what happens next with these two :)

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2013 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the Characters

Katya is adorable! I loved how she was telling Michael stories!!! I can't wait to see them interact more! Michael with kids is always adorable and sweet!!! I can't wait to see where you take Natalya and Michael!!!!



Author's Response:

Well, it is a complex plot taking place in the backstage so to say. Some people have certain plans....

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2013 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 7 - A Mother's Tale

Aww, Katya is adorable. More please :)



Author's Response:

There will be more, of course!

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Date: Oct 29, 2013 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 7 - A Mother's Tale

Awwwww this chapter was really cute. I can see that Natalya is really afraid of Igor. I could tell something was wrong with him right off the bat.

Can't help but think of the beautiful caramel babies these two will produce with their combined features and skin tones. But I'm getting WAAAY ahead of myself aren't I?



Author's Response:

Yes, you are. This is not the Indy 500, you know :D

Reviewer: SpiceGirls4Ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2013 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Breaking The Ice

Oh gosh I can't wait to read more. I'm so glad that Natalya has a daughter in this story because I love stories with Michael and kids because he was so good with them!! I really am starting to dislike Igor after this chapter. I hope nothing bad happens to Michael and Natalya they are really cute together. :) I can't wait to see where this story goes!!



Author's Response:

Oh, I am afraid Igor is playing a very important part in this story....but that's all I'm giving away!

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Date: Oct 22, 2013 06:41 am Title: Chapter 6 - Breaking The Ice

I can't believe she's so bent out of shape at the prospect of going back to Michael's hotel room. I mean, take a look at the guy and stop complaining. Even if he was an asshole, she'd like it. 

I LOVE this story. I think they'll make an adorable couple.

 



Author's Response:

There are some things about Natalya's life that we still don't know...

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Date: Oct 09, 2013 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 5 - First Dinner

Words can't describe how much I'm loving this story so far. Please update again soon!

 

 

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2013 10:41 am Title: Chapter 4 - Welcome!

Please update!!! 😊

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