Date: Dec 20, 2014 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 45
Wooooooow I didn't see any of this comming! Poor baby!! She was soooo stressed, that's why she lost it. Michael needs to listen before he reacts. He never listens! Now they're mourning death :,(((( imma cry!!!!! I'm glad they did a little talking. Drew needs to go. It's nice that he's trying to help..but his presence is making things worse. And she's right if he would've kept it in his pants none of this would've happend! Buuuuut things happen for a reason
Date: Dec 20, 2014 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 45
Wooooooow I didn't see any of this comming! Poor baby!! She was soooo stressed, that's why she lost it. Michael needs to listen before he reacts. He never listens! Now they're mourning death :,(((( imma cry!!!!! I'm glad they did a little talking. Drew needs to go. It's nice that he's trying to help..but his presence is making things worse. And she's right if he would've kept it in his pants none of this would've happend! Buuuuut things happen for a reason
Author's Response:
Avery was under a lot of pressure, indeed :/ It's sad she didn't stay with Michael to get better.
LOOOOL, Drew wants to do good but I guess it's too late
Date: Nov 18, 2014 04:27 am Title: Chapter 44
Please update soon. Love the story
Author's Response:
The new chapter is online :)
Date: Nov 17, 2014 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 44
OMG, I've finally made it to the updated chapter....WHAT IF SHE LOST THE BABY OR SOMETHING? Annie why do you toy with my emotions!?
Author's Response:
Sorry AppleAlice :((( the new chapter is here,you can read it
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2014 11:16 am Title: Chapter 44
This is some major bullshit. First off, Michael is completely overreacting. Not talking for a month to the future mother of your child? Unacceptable! He needs to remember that Avery is not India. He is not being fair to her at all. And if something was really going on would Drew invite Michael inside to talk to her? Dude needs to use his head. He is treating her just as poorly as Drew did when they were married.
As for Avery, she knows damn well she should have told him about Drew ahead of time. Michaels overreaction given his history is not surprising. Disappointing yes, but instead of sitting at home pouting and having Drew over at her place she should have done something about it.
I'm hoping that for once Drew does the right thing and gives her some good advice. Or goes to Michael's and explains the truth so that Michael realizes what an ass he is being an apologizes.
I realize that Avery was originally at fault for not telling the truth upfront but she didn't actually do anything wrong. If I was in her position I'm not too sure I would accept his apology too easily if at all after he threw me out of his house and a month of him ignoring me while I'm pregnant. I mean he didn't even give her a chance to explain! He is taking his issues with India out on her and it's not cool.
Author's Response:
Michael and Avery should have used their head that day because this issue is just widening the gap between them! Let's hope Drew hopes he deserves to be forgiven now. This is the least he can do after all!
Thank you for the review, the new chapter is here :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 17, 2014 03:55 am Title: Chapter 44
Well, it is messy when you get exes involved, even for good deeds. Sometimes trying too hard to help makes it worse. Avery should have told Michael her idea before acting like that. I wonder why people nowadays have so much trouble just being open and talking to each other....I hope Michael finds the power to forgive Avery, but I can understand his anger and feeling of betrayal now...
Author's Response:
You're right, Avery should have talked to Michael. It's the lack of communication that led Drew to seek affection in India. We don't want the same thing to happen with Mavery!
Date: Nov 16, 2014 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 44
Oh gosh what is happening?! A fucking month wtf is wrong with those two?! And why is Drew in her damn house?! Uggghhhh!!! Please update soon
Author's Response:
I know, they are annoying >.< the new chapter is here :)
Date: Nov 16, 2014 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 44
Nooooooooooooo wth!?!!! I didn't even see all this comming! I'm going to cry too :,((((( why was drew there? Everything was so cute and perfect! Aww man can Avery and Michael please talk. I'm rambling because I'm upset :,( giirrrrrrl update as soon as u can! Lol <33333
Author's Response:
The new chapter is here :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2014 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 43
Avery has no right to be mad at Michael. She should have just told him the truth. Duh.
Cute how Michael threatened Drew. I'm surprised he didn't punch him he has every reason.
Man Avery was being a dumbass in this chapter. She needs to stop being so dense.
Author's Response:
You're right! She is stupid if she thought she could hide it to Michael :/
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2014 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 43
First - Thank YOU for making time to update another story <3
Maybe we should just change the word to: DramA(nnie)? You seem to master it quite well in your stories.
Damn, Michael could make me late to work, any day.
Yeah, I partially blame Avery for Michael's actions. She knows how he gets, so she should have let him in on her plans and framed it as an attempt to help him with the custody battle. Secrets like that (especially to do with exes!) are trouble.
Author's Response:
Hey Redone! Thank YOU for this review ;) Sorry to come back one month later :x
IKR! Michael would definitely make me want to quit my job!
Date: Oct 12, 2014 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 43
Michael? That's papi!! He plays no games at all when it comes to his! Lmaoooo drew gunna tell Avrey to "check her man" know damn well he was shakin in his shoes lmaooo I can't stand drew's ass!!! But we need him -___-
Author's Response:
LOOOL! We know Drew was scared as hell lool!
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2014 04:44 am Title: Chapter 42
Lol Mavery! Mavery! Mavery! Mavery, again, FTW! Especially after that fantastic(as usual from the master AnnieXD) love-making scene. Avery's gotta make sure she tells Michael about the Drew thing though, or it'll come back to bite her and fast. Especially since it wouldn't be hard for India to concoct a whole "Avery back with her ex? Where's Michael?" story. Anyways, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you very much ;-) You're right, Avery has to let Michael know. We don't want him to worry or act crazy! Ugh, I know! India is evil!
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2014 04:37 am Title: Chapter 41
Nice chapter! Lol India's gonna get what's coming to her, and I can't wait! On to the next chapter! XD
Author's Response:
Yesss! Get ready for Avery's vengeance
Date: Sep 27, 2014 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 42
Awwww u said "Mavery" that is so cute!!!
Author's Response:
This nickname is so cute ;))
[Report This]Date: Sep 27, 2014 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 42
Wait, drama?
Oh right. She needs to tell Michael about the planned meetup (please!) and he needs to get the bed frame down there before she becomes *very* pregnant and the low bed isn't so cute anymore.
Author's Response:
Hello Redone! Yes, DRAMAAA!
Avery needs to tell Michael because we know how crazy Michael can react! Thank you for the review and the rate love :D