Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 53
Bye to Naomi and bye to that bitch India. Depression or not, she's still a trifling bitch and an unfit mother. Wynter is a child who needs a mothers love. Not an accessory and photo op, which is all India sees her as. I wish Avery could tell her ass off and throw Naomi's thirsty ass in it too. She wanted Michael's dick and newsflash: like the en vogue song, never gonna get it! Idk why she's even there tbh. This whole thing is becoming more and more annoying. India does not deserve to have custody of a dog, much less a little girl! Enough is enough. Michael needs full custody and that's all there is to it.
Author's Response:
LOOOOL! I AM LAUGHING SO HARD AT THE EN VOGUE REFERENCE lmaoooo!
Thank you so much for the laugh, the new chapter is online :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm liking this story a lot
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
Mike needs to kick drew 's ass and Averyneed to do the same thing to India. But I like Kidada's idea * rubs hands together gleefully* lol
Author's Response:
LOOOOL, they should!
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
I honestly don't undrestand cheaters like if your going to cheat, then just break upor get a divorce. Why put the person that you supposedly love in anguish and sadness? Just leave simple. But it doesn't work that work as ppl are selfish. Going to read more :)
Author's Response:
These two want their cake and eat it too. They want the husband/wife at home waiting for them after a long day at work and their mistress/lover for the fun! It's selfish, you're right
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait t see wat happens at this meeting
Author's Response:
You won't be disappointed ;-)
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was really messed up. How india do that to Mike. Poor Avery it look her day has been shot to hell
Author's Response:
Hey Jade, I'm happy you're reading this story :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:53 am Title: Chapter 53
Forgot to mention, NiaHomi can go choke on a dick. And it will never be Michaels so HA.
Seriously though, this whole thing is NONE of her business. Why she would try so hard to insert herself into the mess is beyond me. Michael doesnt want you bitch. Deal with it.
Now that she's aired India's business, India will be done with her too. And I can't say as I will blame her tbh.
Can Avery punch Niaomi in the throat at least once before the story ends, please?
I just saw a review asking for India and Michael to reunite. Bahahahahaha. Hell NO.
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOO! I almost thought you would let Naomi get away with it. I guess I was wrong x) It took her some time to realize she is just a pawn in India's game!
I'm as surprised as you, I didn't expect anybody to ship Michael and India lmao
Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:31 am Title: Chapter 53
Ps I don't know why but I'm leaning towards Michael and India being together again that would be a crazy twist because hopefully he sees that she's not all bad and any love and be rekindled
Author's Response:
Date: Sep 08, 2015 09:04 am Title: Chapter 53
- wow I just hope they realize that this is very petty and get joint custody it sounds like India was scared to be a mother it's not like she didn't care she was afraid of hurting wynter , just don't take a daughter away and I hope Michael has a change of heart and sees that India isn't bad
Author's Response:
Joint custody seems like what would be the best in this situaion if India decides to change
thank you for the review :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 08, 2015 08:53 am Title: Chapter 53
PPD or not, India is still a horrible person. Doesn't change my opinion which is that Wynter should primarily stay with Michael. India and her lifestyle are both too unstable for a small child. Kids need stability, routine and structure not being randomly flown around the world with strange nannies whenever India has the urge to see her. This doesn't negate the fact that India has a right to see her daughter and be in her life, but I hope she takes a look in the mirror after this and does what is best for Wynter, for once, and stop thinking of herself. What would truly be best for Wynter is to stay with Michael while India gets her shit together and finally makes her daughter a priority over her career.
Author's Response:
Hopefully, Naomi spilling the beans makes India change and start with the woman in the mirror (intended)
Thank you for the review and the rate :)) The new chapter is online :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2015 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 52
Finally they are close to being back together! Now Avery just needs to not run, Michael needs to not be a jerk, Wynter needs to stay with Michael, and India needs to 
<3 your updates
Author's Response:
LMAOOOOO @ this gif!!! I am crying legit tears loooool!
The new chapter is here, enjoy :D
Date: Aug 12, 2015 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 52
- they are so cute he honestly but Michael can't replace her as wynter mother , wynter would need her actually mother you know , hopefully is some kind of joint custody in my opinion but good writing
Author's Response:
I hear you Brianna. Actually, I already know how the story was supposed to end but your review made me change my mind. So thank you for your input, that really helped!
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 51
Isn’t he the reason she has a roof under her head
^ Just to break up the Fallon gifs.
I love this chapter. I'm glad Avery did well on the stand..and when you described Michael's tears? I think I started to get some, myself. I want to hear Michael and Avery's convo, now. Please? <3
Author's Response:
Isn’t he the reason she has a roof under her head
You caught me, again! I had to laugh at my typo too, what the hell was I thinking lmao!
Awww, don't cry Redone sweetheart :) I think that's the most hopeful Michael has been since he started the custody battle. He has Avery on his side ;-)
The new chapter with the conversation between Michael and Avery is here ;) Sorry for the wait, my internship is taking all my time :/
ENJOY !
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 11:47 am Title: Chapter 51
Awww he brought quesidillas!
This is what they need, to start over again from scratch and take it slow. Have a "first date" after the trial is over and go from there. This way Michael can show Avery that he gets it and won't keep repeating the same mistakes. She should make him sweat a bit but no need for either of them to suffer any more than they already both have by staying away from each other completely. If anything I think the time apart has shown how much they need each other.
Even though Michael has not treated her how he should have, he is still a sweetheart. She just needs to train him properly =)
Author's Response:
Yay! Michael remembered how much she loves quesadillas :) They definitely should start from scratch and give themselves a chance at love. They are so cute together;
TRAIN HIM? LMAOOOO
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2015 10:51 am Title: Chapter 51
Oh boy! They are hopeless, but for the sake of the custordy case, they'd better keep their hands to themselves until the case is closed. And I also hope no one is spying Avery's house and taking photos...
Author's Response:
They need to focus on Wynter! None of them would want her to end up with India because they were too horny :/
Thank you for the rate, the new chapter is here :D