Date: Aug 19, 2013 09:28 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm curious to see what will happen between them...being alone at his house at night and all... ;p
Author's Response:
Who knows?
Date: Aug 18, 2013 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
"Michael doesn’t feel guilty for eye fucking her. He is a man, she is a woman. She is wearing clothes that hug her curves perfectly and he has eyes"
Quote of the day!!! QUOTE OF THE FREAKIN DAY!! LOLXD Anywhi freakin Brandi is getting on my nerves, freakin doggone skank I wanna smack her bad like
Seriously though she freakin bothers the heck outta me. Aaaaanywho, awesome chapter girl! :-)
Author's Response:
Hey you :)
LMAO @ the gif! I think everybody wants Avery to do it to Brandi haha!
Date: Aug 15, 2013 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
She should hop right on his dick and ride him into the sunset. Or oblivion. Whichever comes first. She needs to divorce her cheating ass husband and Michael needs to do the same to his wife, but they may as well enjoy themselves in the process. I say bring on the sex! But don't I always LOL?
I'm liking this story so far Annie. I'm adding it to my must-read list.
Author's Response:
"She should hop right on his dick and ride him into the sunset. Or oblivion. Whichever comes first"
I was about to say it. Yes! You're solution is always sex lmao. Or maybe I always write story where the solution is sex lol?
Thank you so much for the review and the rate! I'l try not to disapoint you with this story ;)
Date: Aug 14, 2013 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Shit she should go! Lord knows I would! India is beautiful but Avery is very pretty too! Just started reading this story today and I love it Annie girl! :)
Author's Response:
Well if Michel Jackson invited me over, I would FLY to his home lmao. Thank you for reading :)
Date: Aug 13, 2013 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Avery would have punched India so hard that her own mother wouldn't have recognized her.
Hahahah XD
But oh gosh I hate Drew.
Even if he was going to leave Avery and then had second thoughts, the bottom line is he still cheated! And as you said in the chapter; there is simply no excuse for it so Avery should not blame herself!
I can't wait for Drew to get hurt lol
Can't wait for more. XD , <33
Author's Response:
HAHA! You like it when Avery gets violent lmao?
I know you hate drew but unfortunately, there will be more scene with him in the next chapter !
You are sadistic!! And this Mr. Bruns picture lmao! The most evil man on TV!
Thank you for the review and the rate
Date: Aug 13, 2013 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm liking this story! I can't wait for India and Drew to get what's coming to them!
Author's Response:
Me toooo!! :)
Thank you for the review and the rate!
Date: Aug 13, 2013 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
I hate Drew, how could he cheat on a woman like Avery? She obviously needs someone like Michael. And India is a bitch. And Brandi too lol. Avery needs to see Michael and apologize asap.
I love this story, keep it up!
Author's Response:
You're reasing this story ?!
I'm happy you're reading this story! I don't think I will update as much as the other stories, but I'll try! You didn't see how bitchy Brandi can get lol. And India, you will know lol :D. Someone like Michael? Well they don't seem to get along.... yet
Date: Aug 13, 2013 06:16 am Title: Chapter 4
GO AVERY GO!! Show this "Drew" that you don't need his cheating lying butt. Then he's gonna take their money out then put it back like s little punk so she wouldn't notice.
She better apologise to Mikey because her rudeness was not cool at all. Its not too alluring when your yelling at your future loverXD Great chapter though Miss Annie. :-))).
Author's Response:
"when your yelling at your future lover" I see what you are trying to do here!!!!
Future lover? Idk...
Date: Aug 12, 2013 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow Avery smh
Well girl, if you're gon be like that, next time Michael won't warn you about your husbands cheating ass!
Her actions are kind of understandable though; it must be a lot to take in for her, but don't take it out on poor Michael. XD He's as much victim as you are Avery lol
I can't wait for more.
:)))
Author's Response:
That gif of Tyler Oakley >>>>>>>>>>>>>
I think we can all agree Ashley is one rude woman haha! But like you said, it's understandable; she didn't have the job she wanted, someone call her to tell her her husband cheated. Let's see if Michael is able to keep his cool around her rude ass lol!
Thank you for th review bb :)
Date: Aug 12, 2013 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Avery is so rude! Lol so much drama!!!! Continue!!!
Author's Response:
Lmao! Indeed, she is rude!
Date: Aug 12, 2013 06:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Oooh! Drama alert, drama alert! Avery and Mikey's first meeting, so cute (weird how I find this cute ain't it?XD) soon they shall be in looooooove! Poor Avery though, all in denial that her husband's a skank. Hopefully she doesn't try to hurt herself or anything. Anyways, great chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey you :) I can smell the drama too lol! Lol, Avery was very rude I think that was a major turn off for Michael lol! Next chapter up :)
Date: Aug 11, 2013 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aw shit! We all know who gave Drew that black eye, Bruce.
JK ;3 It was Michael huh?
I can't wait for more Annie, this is gon be good. XD
Love ya! , <33
Author's Response:
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Tht's why I love you
Date: Aug 11, 2013 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Seriously Annie? For real.
I just.... I just have one question for you.
How fertile is your damn imagination?????
LMAOOO!!!
I leave the site for three days, and when I come back, you have like 9 new stories out!
Damn girl!!!
hahahahaha! :-D
I love you AnnieBoo! You da ISH!
I'm gonna check this story out too... I have SOOOOO many to catch up on. It's crazy. And I'm writing 2 fanfics of my own now (The Aerialist & Inside Out)
But I can't even mess with you chile. LOL!
Author's Response:
My imagination has no limit lol! CANT WAIT FOR THE AERIALIST UPDATE!!!!
Love you Sunni :)
Date: Aug 11, 2013 06:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Drew is such a lying little so and so I mean come on! The black eye probably from Michael's " you slept with my wife so now I gott do damage to your face" beatdown. And then the suitcase??
Anywho great chapter! I eagerly await more! XD :-)))
Author's Response:
Maybeeeee :)! HAHA?, love this gif
Date: Aug 11, 2013 05:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Damn drew you one of heartless DIQ :(
Author's Response:
I swear!