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Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2013 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 25

Aw dang, Avery's got a bad case of "Love" she can deny it all she wants, her and Mikey are gonna get married, have 12 children, and love eachother forever. It's only a matter of time, I tell you! XD But seriously, they have escalated from. "Awwwww!" Level to "D'awwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!" I love it though! And I swear India is asking to get kicked by my spiked boots, bringing Naomi into this. Naomi's a really nice girlie, who realised Mike's property of Avy so she's moved on to just being his friend and a good role model to Wynter. India needs to go sit in a hole full of scorpions. Anywhooo, great chapter Annie!



Author's Response:

Hey girl :)! HAHA, yes. Avery is developing feelings for Michael! Isn't it sweet? India is a crazt if she thinks she has the right to interfere in Michael's love life like this! Thank you for the review and the rate ;D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2013 09:16 am Title: Chapter 24

So India is using Naomi to spy on Michael? That's straight fucked up! India is such a horrible person. She better mind her own business. The only thing that should concern her is her daughter.

I wonder is Naomi in on it or an unwitting accomplice?

Avery should be straight up with Michael about the IVF once she finds out the results if they are positive. Never a good idea to start a relationship with dishonesty. He needs to know that another man isn't involved and it would be hypocritical of Avery to lead him to believe there is after all the shit she gave him about Naomi. And he has a kid with another woman who is an evil bitch, so he has no grounds on which to be put out by Avery's pregnancy. Plus he loves kids.



Author's Response:

Hey giiirrlll :D India is pathetic and using Wynter too?! Let's see if Naomi flal in her trap!

That would be horrible to hide her pregnancy to Michael and like you said, he needs to know that it was an IVF. Not Avery sleeping around and getting pregnant. I know Michael will be surprised but he will love those kids like his own :)

Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2013 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 24

Excellent chapter!! Wynter is my new favorite, she's so cute!!! I love her!!

"But before she could leave with India, Wynter turns around and blow a kiss to Michael. Michael chuckles and pretends to catch it and bring it to his heart." She's adorable!!! I adore her, honestly, such a sweetie.

I love MJ and Avery so much!!! Mike may not be on "He's my boo thang!!!" level, but he's getting there! I'm  telling you, all he needs is Avery's intials on his monster and BAM! the Girl is Michael's XDXDXD. Or some sort of gesture of that nature. XD India better not wanna be startin somethin, or I'll have to beat her XD seriously, I have a red shirt that looks like a red jacket  and I'm not afraid to use it!

MJ Beat It gifs

XDXDXD Awesome chapter though Annie!:-))



Author's Response:

Hey you :D Thank youuuuuuu! Wynter is adorable!! SHe is a little daddy's girl ;)

LMAO @ the gif!!! I LAUGHED SO HARD. Come one, BEAT HER ASS!!

Thank you for the review and the rate :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2013 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 24

Grrr!!! I hope she's pregnant! Avery deserves to be a mommy so I really hope she gets it. Plus she will have the most gorgeous baby. And lemme just say a bitch please to India's trifling, absentee mother ass! This bitch only wants Wynter cuz it'll look good for her image. She could care less about being a mom, and even more so wtf does it matter about who Michael is talkin to or seeing? She scared that another woman will be more of a mother figure than her raggedy lying stank ho ass?! I do not like this bitch. At all. Point blank period. I'm actually hoping she gets hit by a bus and dies. She's trifling as hell. Then she's trying to use this child and manipulate her into getting into Michael's business. That's a damn shame and I'm actually quite disgusted. Let Wynter be a kid and keep her out of the messy shit. It is none of her damn business who Avery is and what her relationship is to Michael. He don't want her punk ass so what does it matter about what woman he's seeing? She needs to stop the fake outrage like she gives damn about Wynter's well being or who she's around. I hate this ho, I am sorry. Anyway, I just hope Avery finally gets to have her baby. Whatever to everything else. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! I hope she is too, with Corey's genes this baby will be a perfect! I can't wait to see Michael's reaction lmao

India is pathetic and now she is trying to know more about Michael's girlfriend. I think she is still pissed at the way Michael broke up with her (even if she cheated) and trying to seek revenge!

Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 09:19 am Title: Chapter 23

Awwww Michael is sooo cute. I hope he really does what it take to win her back. He needs to get his act together if he truly wants to be with Avery. It takes more than flowers but for this time it was nothing big so its okay. Flowers are perfect for this occasion. Especially since he is out of the country! 



Author's Response:

Hey Moonwalker :D Michael is so cute! He is really trying hard to prove Avery that he wants it to work! You're right, the flowers were ok since he can see her. But he needs to continu with the little attention.

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 08:04 am Title: Chapter 23

Also, why in the H-E-Double Hockey Sticks is Naomi with him in Europe? 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO!!! You'll know in a following chapter (maybe not the one I just posted tho)

Reviewer: femalien Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 12:42 am Title: Chapter 23

I still find Avery's method of getting pregnant questionable. Picking a dad from a catalog like a dress doesn't sit well with me, Oh well, maybe it's a miss and she doesn't get pregnant - at least I hope so.



Author's Response:

Avery really wanted a children and she didn't want to go through the trroubles of getting in a new relationship again. Especially after what happened than Drew. And like this, the child is hers and only hers. She doesn't have to face the kind of problems Michael is facing with India. But now that Michael is here... ^^

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 23

Lol cute!!! But he needs to know that gifts and flowers won't solely win Avery over. He still needs to put in work. He's not off my shit list just yet. Furthermore, what's up with the passive aggressive shit? He needs to tell Naomi's homely ass that he is NOT interested!!! It's not hard to do. All this subtle shit is not working. He needs to be FIRM and upfront. There is nothing between them, nor will there be. Especially if he wants Avery. Michael better get his shit together and keep it together. He honestly doesn't need to work with Naomi anymore. It seems very awkward now and she clearly wants him to be interested in her. And Imma need for Wynter to stay her lil butt in a child's place. Lol and lastly, Imma need for Avery to get preggers already. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! I'm happy you found what Michael did cute. I know you're still not sure Michael is ready for Avery, but he is trying :) LMAO! You know Michael is too nice to dump Naomi like this. And she is nice with Wynter... Which is probably why he tolerates her.

"And Imma need for Wynter to stay her lil butt in a child's place." HAHA! This will not the last time Wynter does something like this... I won't say more ;)

Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 23

I can't believe this Naomi trick. That's some EPIC thirst showing up at Mike's place with "flowers from another man." Is this bitch for real?  First of all, it should have been a cactus not flowers that woman cannot afford to spare one drop of water. Second, we all know she picked those up herself on the way they probably still say "Walmart" somewhere on the packaging and Michael's too gaga over Avery's fine ass to notice. What she really should have done is picked up a 2 large bottles of gatorade, guzzled one immediately, then saved the other one to drink right before she rang the doorbell. SMDH. This girl needs to grow some damn self-respect. If he ditches your ass for another woman immediately after fooling around with you in a closet it means he sees you as nothing but an available hole and you need to MOVE THE FUCK ON.

Now she's brainwashed that poor child Wynter into thinking she's her mother or something, all because India doesn't give a shit about her and she's desperate for a female role model. Michael better hurry his damn ass up and lock down Avery before his daughter grows up with some major issues. The way Naomi acts is not an example that should be set for a young child.

Michael sending those flowers was adorable though. And calling her Moonflower? I actually cooed out loud. Glad to see that Avery is training him and he's learning!

 



Author's Response:

I AM DEAD! I don't know if I died at "First of all, it should have been a cactus not flowers that woman cannot afford to spare one drop of water." or "Second, we all know she picked those up herself on the way they probably still say "Walmart" somewhere on the packaging"! Probably at "What she really should have done is picked up a 2 large bottles of gatorade, guzzled one immediately, then saved the other one to drink right before she rang the doorbell." LMAO! You're hilarious!

Naomi comes look really desperate for Michael's attention and by now, she should know that it's on someone's else... She should move on now!

I think she really cares about Wynter and she might have used it to get closer to Michael too... Guess it wasn't enough!

IKR! Michael is so sweet and the new nickname he has for Avery is beyond cute!

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 23

EEEEE!!!! My fangirl level is over 100,000,000!!!! XDXD Mikey is so sweet and cute!!!! And Avy's acting like a cute little school girl, I love it!! They're are slowly getting back to being my super couple, so yay! Poor Naomi, she seems to really haved liked MJ *le sigh* . Alway's nexttime though! Or next man for that matter, this man's been claimed, Avy's name is on hime somewhere, just gotta get brandedXD. Great chapter Annie!!:-)))))))))



Author's Response:

THEY ARE SO CUTE, I LOVE THEM TOO :DDDD You're right, Naomi should move on. Michael doesn't want her and the only reason why she is around is becaus ethey work together and Wynter likes her... She is gorgeous, I'm sure she can find someone else :/ Michael should ge tattoed on his body "property of Avery" lol! Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2013 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 22

Heheheh! That was nice! Falling asleep on the phone! Damn, I think I'd stay awake all night with the phone to my ear just to listen to Michael snoring...sigh!



Author's Response:

Hey Femalien :D!

"Damn, I think I'd stay awake all night with the phone to my ear just to listen to Michael snoring...sigh!"

http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/28300000/sexy-mikey-on-phone-michael-jackson-28357778-500-445.jpg

ME TOOOOO

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2013 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 22

Michael is a damn mess. He gon learn to keep those man whore jokes to himself. It's not cute and Avery will NOT be with him. He still needs to work to win her any damn way, and it doesn't need to be easy. I hope Avery gets pregnant and I hope she doesn't tell Michael how it happened. It's not his business. This is something Avery needs to do for her. Avery deserves to have a child. It's so wack to hear Michael talking about Wynter when her mother is a slut. Ugh. Michael still should've gotten a DNA test. Whatever. Anyway, I hope Avery makes Michael work. And work hard. He's still on my shit list right now. He needs to remember that Avery is not India, so he needs to rearrange his entire thought process in pursuing her. I just hope Avery gets pregnant! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) Lol, that was a bad move Michael. She already told him she didn't like that, he should have known! I'm still debating if Avery should tell Michael how it happened or not... He will know eventually!

He is raising Wynter so it doesn't really matter if she is his biological child or not, but she is lol :)

Thank you for the review girl :)

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2013 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 22

Awwwwwww!!! So cute!!

Awww!

This is so cute!! Mikry and Avery are like a lovey dovey Disney couple! It's so adorable!!! :-)))))) :-DDD Just awww! They were all talking on the phone and I'm just here like

Swoom gifs

I love it! Brandi's a bit iffy to me. Seems like she'll be reporting gossip to Darth India. <_< >_>… Hopefully not though. Awesome chapter Annie dear! :-)))

 



Author's Response:

Hey! Aww, your gifs are so cute lol! That's exactly how I felt when I wrote the last part of this :) They are cuuuute!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2013 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 22

Awww that phone call was cute especially with Michael snoring at the end. I can see they still both have major trust issues from their cheating ex-spouses. They're both scared to get hurt again which is understandable. Michael puts on this cocky ass routine to prevent himself from seeming too smitten and Avery took his tactless joke about pretty girls WAY too seriously. It was NOT a smart thing for him to say but it was harmless. My husband bugs me about picking up girls all the time but I know he would never do it so I just laugh, or threaten to castrate him. I'll call him up and ask him what he's doing and his response is usually along the lines of something like "hookers and blow" or "my girlfriend." In my experience and from the experiences of my friends, it's generally the ones who DON'T joke about that stuff that you need to watch. I bet Drew never said anything like that, he just went ahead and did it.

Checking out and flirting with other women is a different story. Then is becomes time to sharpen the curved blade.



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :) I agree, they are so cute! But like you said, they both have trust issues. They will have to work on it before getting in that relationship.

"My husband bugs me about picking up girls all the time but I know he would never do it so I just laugh, or threaten to castrate him. I'll call him up and ask him what he's doing and his response is usually along the lines of something like "hookers and blow" or "my girlfriend.""

LMAOOO! You and your husband are everything!

 

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2013 08:46 am Title: Chapter 21

AWWWWW FREAKIN YEAH!!! Mike and Avery for ever!! Their offically back together, I'm declaring it 100%. Mike can flirt all he wants, their in love deeply, they're two halves of a whole, they're body partiers, they are livers and always will be! And no skank (Jennifer), lustful boss(Naomi) or evil ex-wife (India) shall stand in their way! Great chalter Annie! :-))))



Author's Response:

Hey girl! Yeah, they are meant to be lol :D Thank you for the review and the rate :))

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