[Report This]Date: Nov 12, 2013 05:48 am Title: Chapter 27
How in the hell is India able to just waltz right in like that? Shouldn't she have to knock or ring the doorbell or call to let him know she's on the way? Girl you need to explain how she was able to let herself in because I know Michael isn't dumb enough to give her ass a key! Smdh she has absolutely no respect for him or his privacy. In turn, he shouldn't have any respect for her either. He needs to cover Wynter's ears, then tell India to GET THE FUCK OUT. But not before telling her that Avery is 1000X better in bed then she ever was.
As for Michael not introducing Avery to Wynter, well I don't blame him for not doing it yet they JUST started dating. You need to make sure the relationship is viable before involving kids otherwise they'll just be confused by the revolving door of people in their lives. I'm sure Michael doesn't want Wynter telling her little friends "My Daddy is a manwhore" LOL.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille :) Everything is explained on the next chapter lol. Don't worry :) Michael needs to do something about India because she thinks she has a word to say on who Michael sees!
Yes, Michael needs to wait a little bit more before introducing Wynter to Avery. But after what happened, it might happen sooner than later!
Thank you for the review :D
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2013 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 27
Fuck India! As if she knew and did it on purpose...
Author's Response:
I bet she did :/
Date: Nov 11, 2013 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay I see
This Bitch just need to get slap. Not even slap but murder. Let me dial the number 1-800- kill that hoe.
I mean that's what she is a hoe. Yo ass married and you gonna be a fucking homewrecker to another marrige. Wow that show's how classy you are. NOT!!!
Call me cruel but Winne is burn up for a mother I mean hodia (Hoe-Dia) can't pass shit down to Winne. What she gonna do give her an pre-k through college turtorial of how to cheat on your man while your married just to destroy another marrige.
Michael..Michael..Michael. He aint getting away with shit either. This nigga right here aint gonna put India out her place. Come on now. Babymama or not. Put that hoe out of her motherfucking place. Be a fucking man. He can let Naomi thirsty man ass know Winne but he cant man up and tell Winne about Avery.
I mean at the end of the day you know India got shit against Avery. I mean I bet Avery pussy is better than hers, her voice, her loving to him, come on now even the babies would be better than what she produce. Im not saying Winne is not a beautiful creation cause she is. My point is India better get her life cause it's only a matter of time till Drew cheating in denial ass come back in the picture.
As for Avery YOU GO GIRL..RIDE THAT DICK INTO THE FUCKING SUNSET FOR I CARE. She need to be careful though. For some reason I see her on maury. Trying to see if Michael or the sperm donor is the baby father. I hope she is pregnant. I think even though Michael may be mad at this. It will be payback. This nigga had Winne now it's Avery turn to have a child that will be only hers.
Bye Annie
Love ya.
Author's Response:
HEY GIIIIRLL :)
India is not a good example for Wynter, I agree. And Michael needs to do something before it annoys Avery and break their relationship!
LMAOOO! Thank you for that funny review :D
Date: Nov 11, 2013 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 27
Thats funny but then its not. Lol
Author's Response:
Yes, lol!
Date: Nov 11, 2013 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 27
SMH is all I can do at this point. I hope Avery doesn't get pregnant by Michael. And if Avery is his woman, when is she going to be introduced to his child? If she's that important to him and the supposed lady in his life, shouldn't his child at least know who she is? Hell she knows who Naomi is. I'm not a big fan of Michael in this right now. And that bitch India better move too. She's due for an ass whooping quite frankly. I wish she'd die already. Ugh.
Author's Response:
Michael is waiting for the right time to introduce Wynter to Avery. But India provoked it :/ it's time for Michael to check India
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2013 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 27
AWKS MY SOCKS HOLY CROCS WITH POCKS!!!!!!!!WOAH!!!!!! 0-0 Dang, this'll be hard to explain to dear Wynter. Hopefully they'll be able to without scaring her or somethin.
What a sour way to end their perfect date! I mean, gosh, they finally reached their lovemaking state, which took 27 long amazing chapters, and are officially a superpower couple, then BAM! Darth India shows up. She has the audacity to waltz back in to Mike's house with Wynter like she owns the place. But she is suuuurely mistaken. Who's pics sitting in Mike's studio? AVY'S! Who's got copyright on MJ's bod? AVY DOES! Who's gonna give birth to MJ's many babies? AVY WILL! Who's Mikey's girl of his dreams and future eternal wife? AVY IS! Because that, dears, is the way love goes. Honestly, India, shoo! Go find some other heart to crush and stop tryna be in Mike's business because you surely were not caring about where the heck he was when you and Drew were being cheating slimeballs. So either go off and cheat on someone else or move far far away to somewhere as cold as your soul. Try Antartica, or Siberia, or Russia. Whichever one's farther from Mike and Avy. GREAT CHAPTER ANNIE!:-))))))))
Author's Response:
Hey you :) Indeed, the night was almost perfect :/ India ruined it. Darth India LMAO!
"Who's pics sitting in Mike's studio? AVY'S! Who's got copyright on MJ's bod? AVY DOES! Who's gonna give birth to MJ's many babies? AVY WILL! Who's Mikey's girl of his dreams and future eternal wife? AVY IS!"
[Report This]Date: Nov 11, 2013 09:19 am Title: Chapter 26
Michael is being SO SWEET. He's just the cutest thing ever. Avery had better be honest with him and SOON. He's obviously crazy about her.
Author's Response:
Hey girl ;) YYYEESS, he is so cute! And everything for Avery! It's time to reward him lol! Thank you for the review and the rate :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 10:13 am Title: Chapter 26
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw!!!!?????!? Adorabley cute and romantic!!! I love how hard MJ's trying, its solid proof he's wild about her, or else he wouldn't havegone to so much trouble. Hopefully nobody ruins it (INDIA! GO NEAR THEM AND I KILL YOU!) They're so cute together!,Oooooh, somebody's gonna get frisky tonight! XDXD That'll be interesting,just like ole times! Great chapter Annie!
Author's Response:
Everything Michael did was so cute! if Avery still had doubts, I'm sure they are gone by now :D Indeed, they might get their freak on tonight haha! Thank you so mch for the lovely review and the rate :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 07:43 am Title: Chapter 26
I am sooo digging this new Michael! I wanna go on a date with him xD I need to find me one like this♥
I'm telling ya, she needs to hurry up and tell him. I hope she tells him tonight cuz if they sleep together. Things will get messy!
Author's Response:
Me too! He is sweet and trying hard to make Avery happy;. She needs to tell him about the IVF but only if she gets pregnant
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2013 02:07 am Title: Chapter 26
Yes, Avery, you are making the right choice. I mean, all this effort deserves a reward....
Author's Response:
LMAO! Michael deserves a little something ;)) Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Nov 07, 2013 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 26
Avery doesn't need to have sex with him!! At least not now. I don't want anything to interfere with her getting pregnant. Michael better control his damn twitching penis! The setting is gorgeous though, that is a truly romantic dinner. But I don't think she needs to let her guard down yet. Michael still needs to prove himself and one dinner isn't sufficient. Especially if he goes to goo the second she alludes to sex. Cool it Michael.
Author's Response:
"Michael better control his damn twitching penis!"
LMAO! I think you're the only one who doesn't want a sex scene haha! Michael made a lot of efforts to prove Avery he wants her and I'm sure it won't stop even if he gets some. I think he'll 100x sweeter once he get it on lol! Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2013 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 25
Michael is being nice, he is trying to make it work. Avery is gonna fuck things up if she keep hiding this from him and ends up preggo. She needs to sit him down and let him know about it.
Author's Response:
Oops, double review lol
[Report This]Date: Nov 06, 2013 08:52 am Title: Chapter 25
Michael is being nice, he is trying to make it work. Avery is gonna fuck things up if she keep hiding this from him and ends up preggo. She needs to sit him down and let him know about it.
Author's Response:
Avery needs to tell him the truth but like she said, if she isn't pregnant, maybe she shouldn't tell him about the IVF. She needs to wait for the results first. Thank you for the review and the rate :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 05, 2013 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 25
Awww, they are so cute with each other! But I don't like that India bitch messing around. She finds it OK to have as much man traffic as the Panama canal between her legs, but when Michael tries to get his life back on track, she interferes.
Author's Response:
I love me some Michael and Avery too :) India needs to take a seat. She had Michael once but didn't treat him right. She should let him move on and be happy. They shouldn't even talk if it isn't about Wynter! Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: Nov 05, 2013 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 25
So India is mad because not only did Michael move on, but he moved on with the woman who's husband she was fucking. Lmao that is laughable. This bitch better stay her trifling ass in her lane. Seriously. You have no right to say anything about Avery or what Michael is doing. Fuck your ego India. You thought you could just fuck Drew and do what you wanted to do and that was gonna be it? And Michael was supposed to continue to be her fuckin lap dog? I don't think so. Avery is gorgeous, independent, will be a great mother, she's not a stank ho, and lastly and importantly, Michael is completely smitten with her. He still has some work to do, but he'd never in a million years look in India's trifling, absentee mother ass direction. I surely hope India is pregnant. I am so ready for these results. I guess she'll have to tell Michael once she gets confirmation. And I'm secretly hoping she'll meet Corey one day and he'll give Michael some competition.
Author's Response: Hello Kat :)India is delusional lo! She ruined her mariage and now she wants to ruin Michael's lovelife. What goes around comes back around. It's her time to suffer and see everybody around her happy. I hope Avery is pregnant too, she deserves to be happy and let's hope Michael will support her during her pregnancy :) I'm still debating about this Corey-Avery meeting lol