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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 02, 2013 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 31

Best typo ever:

"Oh Come on Winnie" Naomi says gently "I met Avery, you know? And she is very nice, she is very beautiful, and she likes our Daddy."

ROFLMAO. In your dreams Naomi.

Seriously though I am glad to see she has the common sense that Michael obviously lacks.

Can't wait for Avery to meet the demon child. She'd better bring some holy water.



Author's Response:

OOOOMMMMMGGGGGGG! I can't believe I made that typo lmao! But indeed, it's hilarious! HAHAHHA. Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2013 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 31

Meh. Whatever. Michael needs to stop letting that child hang with Naomi. At least as much as she does. Furthermore he needs to delete her ass as an emergency contact from her school. It's inappropriate as hell. Stop the passive aggressive shit and get on his damn job. Ugh. I don't like him. Oh well. 



Author's Response:

I agree. Wynter needs to stay away from Naomi for a bit, at least until she gets used to Avery and understand she is Michael's girlfriend!  The new chapter is (finally) here :)

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 29, 2013 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 31

Wynter is like the epitome of spoiled Lol I'm sorry but Mikey's got a spoiled little girl, even by the way she looks is spoiled! Hopefully being around some actual female guidance (Darth India's more like one  third he-woman, one third demon, and one third bigfoot part 3. And Naomi's good but she's more of a somewhat close Aunt than a momma). Avy can fix her up though, she's good like that. Oooh geez, meeting the in-laws is a struggle. XDXd I love how Avy's the hormonal pregnant woman and she's completely calm while Mikey's perfectly healthy and more stressed than a klutz at a skating competition. XD Her parents will like him though, they'll be a bit disappointed with him having a child already, one not from Avy, but hey, I think they'll like him. Great chapter! :-)))



Author's Response:

HEYY! Lmao! You're right, Wynter is spoiled and that's probably because Michael is unable to say "no"! Well, he gotta learn because at some point it will hurt Avery :/ DEAD @ Darth India lmaooo!! The new chapter is here, sorry for the wait :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 25, 2013 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 30

That child is going to become the female version of Damien (the Antichrist in child form from The Omen) if Michael keeps spoiling her like that. She gets into a fight at school and is rewarded with ice cream and a 'surprise'!?! Wtf. And don't even get me started in Naomi tagging along. Michael needs to tell her that Avery's name is tattooed on his dick. Avery would not be impressed with how he's handling things I hope she runs into them and tears his ass a new one. He needs to keep in mind WWAD. Come on Michael take out your balls and stand your ground. Wynter needs to learn the meaning of the word NO or she will be a spoiled little brat. 

And for Gods sake man remove Naomi as an emergency contact. Completely inappropriate. He's got Avery, 3 sisters and let's not forget Darth India.



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO!!! I think Wynter is being a little bit selfish because she doesn't want to share her father with Avery. She had that little fantasy in her head about Michael and Naomi being together and Michael needs to make her understand it won't happen!! Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2013 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 30

Awww geez.....this is awkward. Suuuper awkward. So no meeting of Wynter and Avy? Cuz Naomi definitely can't come along for that. lol I still have no problem with her, she's cool in my eyes, its just she was in the wrong place at the wrong time with the wrong guy. If Mike was in another life, one without Avy they could be. But they cannot, alas! They should talk though, so Michael can explicitly tell Naomi that they are not a couple, but good friends, and that he loves somebody else, an amazingly awesomeprettycoolsarcastic girl, but that they could still be friends. She's wayyyy different from India so she'll understand. Also, Wynter's gotta meet Avy, so they canhave a less...judgeable meeting XDXD 

LOLOLOL Mike is the best baby daddy ever XDXDXD I love how he's just bombarding Avy with questions. The minute she starts showing he'll be waiting on her hand and foot. And ahhhh, nothing like movies, mexican food, and the making of love to bring in a happy day. lolol Great chapter Annie!:-)))) More pleaseeeeeeee!



Author's Response:

Hey you!! Yes, awkward! I'm glad you're cool with Naomi. She is always beween Michael and Avery but not because she wants to! I know she'll do the right thing and walk away :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 24, 2013 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 30

Like I said, that bratty demon child Wynter needs to realize Naomi is NOT Michael's girlfriend nor will she be. This is exactly why I don't like Michael or want him with Avery. He's fucking up already. He can't do everything to pacify that bratty child of his because it's gonna hurt Avery in the process! There is no reason why Wyntet should be that close with a woman that he's not even seeing or intimately involved with. The shit is just annoying now. Every time he calls himself taking some steps forward, he gets knocked back several more steps than he took. Smh it's ridiculous now. I don't like that he always leaves or she leaves after sex too. That's all I'm seeing of their relationship at this point. They may as well be fuck buddies then because I honestly don't see true chemistry with them. I really hope Avery's baby daddy shows up cuz Michael is working my nerves with his bullshit. He needs to have Wynter's spoiled ass ALONE, with just him and explain to her that she needs to stop calling and interacting with Naomi so much. She's not his girlfriend! This shit is ridiculous. This bitch is an emergency contact person? Really? Does Michael not have siblings who can be in that position? Just dumb. More and more reasons why I don't want Avery with Michael. 



Author's Response:

LMAO @ demon child! I'm dead! Wynter is being selfish! Ohhh, Give Mike a chance . It's hard with Wynter making sure Michael and Naomi are always together, Evil India and not wanting to hurt people's feelings. I do agree when you said he will end up hurting Avery. He has to do something now! Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2013 11:53 am Title: Chapter 29

Yes!!!!!! :-))))))))) Things worked out vey excellently!!  I  wonder how things are gonna go from here? I'm guessing Mikey's gonna properly introduce Avy and Wynter, they're gonna hopefully get along. Wynter needs a sit down and talking to, that ahe'll be Mikr's number 1 girl no matter what, but that she needs to be able to share. Avy's here to say, no changing it. Great chaptef!



Author's Response:

Hey :) Everything is perfect! But Michael still needs to introduce Avery to Wynter :) And like you said, Wynter shouldn't be jealous because Michael isn't thinking of replacing her with Avery! Thank you for the review  and the rate!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 22, 2013 07:24 am Title: Chapter 29

A huge Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww @ Michael. He's in luuurve. If that "our baby" comment doesn't prove how much he cares for her I don't know what will. Avery better not get mad at him or I will teleport into the story and bitch slap her. How many men are willing to say that so quickly? Oh that's right, NONE. He's a good one. At the same time they still have lots to work out and they shouldn't rush the relationship for the sake of the baby. Thhings should unfold naturally.

Unfortunately due to India's stupid ass they do need to speed up the process with Wynter. She needs to start getting used to Avery ASAP so she doesn't act like the kid from Orphan and burn the house down once the baby comes.

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Author's Response:

YEEESS, Michael is crazy about Avery! And don't worry she is not letting that man go. But like you say, they need to take it slow. Especially with Wynter in the middle...

I DIED @ THE PICTURE!!!

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Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2013 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 29

Michael took the right decision. No child should grow knowing that his father is a catalog item...



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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2013 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 29

Umm Imma need Michael to have several fucking seats! This is Avery's baby! Not his. Just like that demon child Wynter isn't hers, this baby isn't his. I'm actually hoping Corey will somehow be incorporated into the story. Since Corey is gorgeous and looks highly photogenic, I think he should somehow meet Avery at RUNWAY. Michael is annoying in this to me anyway so I would thoroughly enjoy another man coming in and trying to woo Avery. That would be some funny ass competition right there. Besides, Avery chose his genes for a reason. Corey should by fate meet Avery and find out that she's having his child and mix it up from there. Michael must be crazy as hell if he thinks that he woulda had the chance to explain to her what really was going on between him as Naomi that she woulda just took his word and became pregnant by him. Talkin bout that baby coulda had his genes. Get the fuck outta here and over yourself Michael!!!! Avery doesn't need to have any kids by you, especially since your "own" child doesn't like her and you aren't even trying to fix that. He's fucking annoying. I hope Avery will correct his ass and tell him that is NOT his child. 



Author's Response:

BUT HE LOVES HEEEEEERRRRRRR! LMAO! I LAUGHED SO HARD @ "demon child Wynter" and I know I shouldn't have lmao!! I'm still debating if Corey should be part of the story or not! ;à thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2013 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1

Also forgot to mention I'm glad Avery is telling Michael about the IVF! I hope his reaction is a positive one.



Author's Response:

I hope too!!! :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2013 07:47 am Title: Chapter 28

So glad that Michael grew a pair and booted India's trifling ass from his home. He's changed a lot since the start of the story and has obviously become a stronger person. Who cares if she's the mother of his child, she's not deserving of the title anyways. Anyone can shoot out a kid it's hardly an accomplishment. She has no more business in his life unless it has to do with Wynter and she has no right to stroll into his home like she owns the place.

"Michael was wrong for bringing Naomi with them to Copenhagen." Well duh Michael, you think? I know what he's doing. He's trying to avoid hurting her feelings but instead is making everything worse. He had better apply his freshly grown ballsack to this situation as well instead of just retracting it back up into his abdomen. I know he has to work with Thirstyomi but Wynter's attitude now is totally his fault and he needs to fix it. First he needs to tell Naomi once and for all he is with Avery and isn't interested in her desert dry vagina. Hopefully she will stop trying to be Wynter's mother. India made things worse by forcing their awkward introduction but he shouldn't have let a woman who isn't a family member and who he isn't in a serious relationship with or interested in a relationship with serve as a surrogate mother for his daughter in the first place. Now it's just going to be all kinds of awkward and the person who will be the most hurt and confused is Wynter. And Avery is not going to be too thrilled if she can't have the opportunity to build a relationship wtih Wynter because Naomi is always in the way. 

I get the feeling India is just going to cause problems. It would be better if she just got hit by a car or something at this point. It's harsh I know but something needs to be done. She's a horrible influence on Wynter and isn't above brainwashing her against her father or Avery. She's just going to screw her daughter up and unless India has a personality transplant I think Wynter is almost better off without her in her life.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :)

I'm happy Michael finally checked India! She needed someone to tell her where she belonged, out, with the trash. About Naomi, I think Michael is understands he was dead wrong lol! Naomi likes Michael very much but I don't think she is the kind of girl who will make a scene if he doesn't love her back. She'll move on, eventually.

Wynter doesn't even want to meet Avery ;(( She'll get over it! Michael is crazy about Avery and I'm sure Wynter will love Avery if she gets to know her.

New chapter online :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2013 09:11 am Title: Chapter 28

About time!!!!! Avery is pregnant and finally Michael will know it. Furthermore, I'm glad he finally got off his ass and put India's trifling ass in her place. I don't believe Wynter is his biological child either, but he still sees her as his daughter. Anyway, I'm wondering how he will react to Avery's pregnancy. He surely has no right to feel jealous, although I'm suspecting he will feel that way a little bit. Avery is pregnant by a beautiful stranger, she just hasn't met him.. Yet. Lol. I'm happy for her though because she deserves to be a mother and she's a good woman. Wynter is gonna have to get over it and meet Avery because she's going to be around. Nobody has time for bratty ass kids! Lol she's gonna have to accept that Avery is the woman Michael wants. Period. And her being a spoiled brat isn't going to change that. Not to mention, Avery probably has better maternal instincts than her own slutty ass mama. Avery could be a good influence on her, something she needs. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :D

YYYEES, Avery is pregnant and the truth came out :) And it was about time he ckecked India's nasty attitude!

LOL! I'm telling you, Wynter is his bio child. That would be awful if Michael was raising the child India had with Drew. Let's give Michael a break!

About Avery's pregnancy, that would be shocking of Michael to be mad since he had a child with India! Avery will make a great mother, whether Michael sticks with her or not. And if they stay together, she'll be a good example for Wynter. Maybe when she gets to know Avery, she'll stop her bratty act lol

Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2013 08:48 am Title: Chapter 28

I hope it works out...I mean, I hope Michael accepts a child who isn't his in a relationship that it's quite new and uncertain..



Author's Response:

Michael and Avery are in a relationship now. So if he wanted Avery to accept Wynter, he'll have to accept her pregnancy too. Let's see what happen :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 17, 2013 08:19 am Title: Chapter 28

Yes!!! This chapter ended very satisfyingly!!! Mike finally put Darth Vader.... ahem my bad India into her place. Hopefully she's gone 1000% for good. And Avy's preggers! Yay! MJ will understand completely about the whole IVF thing, I mean its not like she cheated while with him plus they'll be even children wise. Hopefully Wynter will give Avy a chance! Once they meet I know they'll be like Dora and Boots. :-))) XD Great chapter Annie!:-)))



Author's Response:

Haha I'm glad you liked this chapter :) I can't tell if India will be good for good. We'll see ... :) Avery needs to give Michael an explanation about her pregnancy. Let's hope Michael doesn't leave !!

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