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Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2014 05:32 pm Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE II

You're writing is llikes gift from heaven! Marvelous, truly marvelous work. I wish I was half as good a writer as you.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2014 10:55 pm Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE III

Hope it's coming soon girly! 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2014 07:38 pm Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE III

Can't wait til the update! Feenin like Jodeci lol 



Author's Response:

Sorry! It's coming later today. :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 12:42 pm Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE III

Just read this story and great job so far! I'm really enjoying it. 

I have a hell of a hard time feeling bad for Cerise though. What did she expect to result from getting involved with another woman's man? She knew Michael had a girlfriend and she slept with him anyways. Well, when you act like a ho you get treated like one aka a side peice. I'm glad she walked away when she did though and ended the bullshit. Good for her, time to find herself a real man cause Michael is a selfish little boy. As annoying as Tatiana is I actually feel sorry for her. Michael is trifling as hell cheating on her and parading his side chick around in front of her, and now she is bound to him forever because she's pregnant. No woman should put up with that and I hope she dumps him too.

 



Author's Response:

welcome to the story and thanks so much for your comments. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 12:26 pm Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE III

she played that foo lmao i wonder how michael feels about it tho? ._.



Author's Response:

Lol @ foo. We'll see how mike felt about it in the next add. Thankies for the review. :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 10:30 am Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE III

Yassss to Usher coming back!!! Somehow I'm not surprised they were gonna have sex. But I am glad Cerise basically used him for a couple orgasms then sent his ass on his way. She's right, he must've been a damn fool to think having sex with her would make her stay?! She would be in the exact same position she's always been in, the damn side chick! And she deserves more. She knows she was wrong for playing this position but at least she was smart enough to get out of it. I don't care how much Michael claims he loves her. Niggrum please. You've been in a relationship this whole time. If he's not in love with the bony ho, he should've broke up with her a long time ago. I just can't with Michael, I really can't. He sickens me. I hope cerise with find happiness with another man (aka Usher) and I hope Michael's ass will be seething from the sidelines while he's stuck with that damn toothpick and weave! 

 

 

Cant ant wait for the next update. I'm just glad she's done with Michael's trifling ass. Time for him to suffer alone. And I am going to die laughing if that bitch isn't really pregnant. 



Author's Response:

*hugs* tati's 'pregnancy' will be addressed soon. she may or may not be

Reviewer: coostorydad Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2014 06:48 am Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE III

Lol I thought she gave in. I wonder what Mike's going to do next.:3

Girl, you must update as soon as possible, I love this so much!^-^



Author's Response:

thanks so much, we'll see what mike has up his sleeve

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 08, 2014 01:23 am Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE II

Chile Michael needs to give it up. He's really working my damn nerves now. Damn can the girl get some damn peace?! She is eventually going to get over him. Time heals all wounds. I can't help but shake my head that she gave her virginity to his trifling ass. Smh that's sad. Why is he at her damn room, how does he even know where she is, and why is he not with his bony ass baby mama? He needs to stop torturing Cerise. I will admit she got herself in this bullshit knowing this would be the outcome, but unlike most side chicks, she removed herself from the situation and is moving on with her life. So I can applaud her for that. Michael needs to respect her wishes and leave her the hell alone. She's a single woman, he's an UNsingle man. With an alleged child on the way. He needs to take his narrow ass on. I'm so glad you updated this but PLEASE bring Usher back!!! Lol. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2014 08:16 pm Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE I

I'm missing this! Hope you're updating soon!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2014 09:17 pm Title: BITTERSWEET GOODBYE I

Chile Michael TRIED it! Niggrum please! How very Michael Jackson-esque to include that shit in the show, he ain't slick and Reese still left that ass. Thank the lawd! I am so glad she's gone. I'm proud of her. Now she can truly move on with her life. I'm happy for her. She's a gorgeous young woman, talented, and the world is at her feet for the taking. And did you say Usher is on his way back? Yas GAWD! Lol. I can't wait til those two blossom into a relationship. They are gonna be gorgeous and they'd make gorgeous babies too. Lol just saying. Y'all saw the My Boo video! You cannot fake that kinda chemistry. And I've seen quite a few pics of Usher and Ms. Keys where they're grinning and skinning in each other's faces.. And the live performances? Chile please. Lol. I can't wait. Team Usher and Cerise! Michael can shove it. Him and that bony ho he's with. Lol at Cerise saying she hopes the baby comes out lookin like ET. That baby will come out wih a big ass head and a big curly weave laid like a bird's nest. Anyway, can't wait til the next update girl! I love this. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 22, 2014 10:32 pm Title: M.I.A.

I know how it is with school, I finished undergrad last year. Hang in there girly! Looking forward to the next update. This story is one of my favorites. 

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2014 10:41 am Title: M.I.A.

Hope this is updated soon!!! I need some new chapters! And Ursher baby. Lol 



Author's Response:

working on it. school is kicking my butt right now. but I do have half of the next chapter done. just gotta knock out the 2nd part and some of the following chapter as well.

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2014 11:05 pm Title: EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER/I WANT OUT

i love this story! cant wait to read more :) im totally rooting for them



Author's Response:

thanks! I'm rooting for them too. lol we shall see what happens

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2014 11:29 pm Title: M.I.A.

I don't blame her for quitting. He needed to just fire her. That's most likely why she missed the show anyway, with hopes to get fired. I'm beyond sick of Michael's sorry ass! And I'm so glad Reese is finally leaving this hell hole of a tour. Fuck Michael and the horse he rode in on. And why the hell is everybody so afraid to read Tatiana's bony ass for filth?! Everybody bites their tongue around that raggedy bitch. Are they afraid to be fired too? I really can't. But thank the lawd I'm so glad Reese is leaving!!! Usher, where art thou baby? Bring yo fine ass on and come pick Cerise up!!! Michael's cowardly ass can suffer alone. I'm so ready for the next chapter, this story gives me life. Fuck outta here with this "I can't fire you and don't want to", well your sorry ass doesn't have a choice now. How dare he refuse to fire her and keep her there while she's unhappy and suffering?! Fuck him. So glad she's leaving. She can deal with the lawsuits or whatever, she deserves peace of mind and to get the fuck away from Michael and his ho before she physically assaults them both. 



Author's Response:

*hugs* thankies. tati's time will come I promise. lol.  yeah michael is being selfish. he didn't want to fire her because that means he'll no longer be around her if that makes since. he doesnt want to let her go.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2014 10:45 am Title: FREE FALLIN'

And el eaux el and her throwing in "future husband". Bitch he's not gonna marry you, especially when his sorry ass is only with you cuz you're allegedly pregnant with this make believe ass baby. Smh lawd. Bring Usher back. Lol 



Author's Response:

Mr. Usher will back in a few chapters. lmao @ make believe baby. we shall see if tati is really pregnant

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