[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2019 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
This whole chapter got my dying or laughter.
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2019 10:42 am Title: Chapter 32
what a bullshit ending
[Report This]Date: Mar 09, 2019 10:42 am Title: Chapter 32
what a bullshit ending
Date: Sep 25, 2016 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 22
This story is so cute! Kaya is very realistic
Date: Mar 22, 2016 11:35 pm Title: PART 1
Michael was ruining a good thing.
Date: Aug 16, 2015 12:08 am Title: Chapter 32
Aww what a cute ending! Jill is happy, has a good man and pretty babies. I'm sure Michael kicks himself everyday for his fuck ups and he should. Jill is quite the catch. Glad to see Godfrey is the man for her and treating her well.
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2015 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 32
It's so rare that Michael doesn't end up with the girl. I don't know whether I like this twist or I am saddened by it. I think a bit of both. I hope the same doesn't happen in LWL, though....eeek!
[Report This]Date: Jul 26, 2015 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 31
Last chapter?! Ack. I'm not prepared.
I love the final image of Michael, Jill, and Kaya hugging
Author's Response:
Hey Redone <3 It's here, the very last chapter of Jill and Michael (and Godfrey)'s story :(((
That was cute, uh? The most important is that it ends on a positive note :)
Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2015 08:41 am Title: Chapter 30
I don't get how she could stay with Godfrey. There is no chemistry in their conversation or interactions. And why do all the guys want her? She started off as nothing special, but now she's desired by all....I hope she goes back to who she was in the beginning and starts to let Michael in. It's clear where she wants to be, fear is just keeping her away.
Author's Response:
"And why do all the guys want her? She started off as nothing special, but now she's desired by all...."
DEAD
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2015 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 30
Glad to see an update!
This story is the only one of your stories where I don't want Michael and the female protagonist together. I hope she marries Godfrey, has plenty of kids and happiness all while Michael is miserable and alone and pining for Jill. OK so maybe he doesn't have to be alone forever but at least for as long as he stayed married yo that stupid bitch Lisa after he met Jill. He deserves no less.
Something does still bug me about Godfrey though......it doesn't seem as though Jill's feelings for him are that intense. But I'm glad she's giving him a chance.
Author's Response:
Double review :)
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2015 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 30
Glad to see an update!
This story is the only one of your stories where I don't want Michael and the female protagonist together. I hope she marries Godfrey, has plenty of kids and happiness all while Michael is miserable and alone and pining for Jill. OK so maybe he doesn't have to be alone forever but at least for as long as he stayed married yo that stupid bitch Lisa after he met Jill. He deserves no less.
Something does still bug me about Godfrey though......it doesn't seem as though Jill's feelings for him are that intense. But I'm glad she's giving him a chance.
Author's Response:
Hey Camille! I'm happy to be writing this story too! I really need to finish it before I go through another writer's block and you guys have to wait another year for an update :/
LMAOOOOO! I think I can write the story in a way to make every character happy lol!
Maybe Jill's feelings aren't as intense because she was waiting for him to fucked up and break up with him. Now that she sees that he loves him, she might open her heart to him :)
Thank you for the review and the rate :D
Date: May 06, 2015 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 30
Chile I forgot about this story it's been so long! Shame on you! Lol. Im glad to see its updated tho. And thank the lawd, Jill has a backbone and starting to make smart decisions for a change! Hallelujah! Alex has been put out to pasture and Michael is put in his place. He has to be insane to think that with all that has happened and what he put that woman through, she can just forget it and throw caution to the wind with him and fall in his arms--NO! I'm actually glad she's giving Godfrey a chance. She does deserve happiness, and if he can give it to her, I'm all for that. Please don't let it be 2016 before you update this again chile lol
Author's Response:
Sorryyyyyyy! I have been busy with school, life and my other stories! Like Jill I was going through a writer's block :O But I'm back with new idea :)
About time Jill take a decision and stop people take them from her. I'm all for Jillto be happy too ;)
"Please don't let it be 2016 before you update this again chile lol"
It only took me two months to update this story!! #Progress
Date: May 06, 2015 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 30
I hate Godfrey. Continue soon please!!!
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO! Sorry, but he is in the new chapter
Date: May 06, 2015 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 30
I have misssssssssed this story!
Author's Response:
I have missed writing it toooooo