Date: Aug 21, 2013 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow, didn't see that coming!
Author's Response:
New chapter up :)
Date: Aug 21, 2013 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 13
Annie baby I miss you !!!!! I've been reading but not reviewing Im so busy now..As for Lisa telling Michael about I think see's not gonna say anything to Michael but the truth will set itself free. So that's a good thing. I think When Michael find out about Kaya he would be pissed or more than pissed because he missed so much in her life. That man is sexy as fuck too me and what make him hot to me is that he saved her life. I see somethings going on..You see where im going with this. I have no word's for Michael he like pissed me off big time but hey that typical Michael for you.
~Nera
Author's Response:
HEY BB! I missed you too! Aww, don't worry it's ok honey ;) Michael will be pissed but he'll be happy to have a baby at the end ;) And yes Gofrey is so fine!
Date: Aug 21, 2013 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 13
Godfrey is handsome! Now we see how he comes into the picture. He and Jill will start dating. Anyway, Elvis in a wig thinks by not telling Michael he won't find out he has a child? That shit WILL backfire and blow up in her face. Not only will he find out about Kaya but he will be even more pissed her lying ugly ass knew about it and kept it from him. Regardless, it still stands that Kaya is his first and ONLY child and Jill is the woman that made it happen and ain't shit that Elvis drag queen can do about it. Michael needs to know about his child. Him and Jill don't have to be together but he should know about his baby. Period. Anyway, I hope Jill and this Godfrey guy date. I'm done.
Author's Response:
GODFREY IS FOINE!!!
I agree when you said it's a bad move not to tell Michael. Because as much as Jill thinks she can go on without telling Kaya about her father, at some point she will have to. And he will know about Lisa's lie :/
[Report This]Date: Aug 15, 2013 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit balls!!! o_0 Ladies and gentlemen....we have drama!!! Err.......more drama...
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Date: Aug 15, 2013 11:42 am Title: Chapter 12
OHMYGOD!
Does Michael and Jill have a child????
=O
Author's Response:
Maybe ...
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2013 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
I am aussming the child is Michael's and that Jill choose not to tell him because she know all their business will be in the tabloids. Now Lisa has a reason to worry cause Jill did what she denied Michael and gave him a child. Which he is going to be happy but angry about because he already missed two years of her life and he still loves Jill. Knowing Lisa she's not going to say anything to Michael about Jill but I know he'll find out about it in some round about way. As for Jill will now she knows who Gloria's celebrity couple is now and that Michael still loves her.
Shit just got real for this threesome! I can smell the drama starting soon, smh.
Author's Response:
Hello! Sorry for the late answer babe :)
Indeed, Kaya is Jill and Michael's offspring! I agree when you said Michael will be sad because he missed so many moment with his child but I bet he will forget about it as soon as he mets little Kaya! That is a mess lol. And more drama to come! :D
Date: Aug 14, 2013 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww how cute! So Jill is a mommy. And I bet we can all guess who the daddy is.. If this ain't a hot ass, six degrees of separation mess. The nerve of Lisa to think Jill is in any shape or form cheap, when her husband still wants her and gave her a bracelet he clearly didn't want that one of your kids made. He clearly thought enough of her to give her that bracelet instead of keeping it. Elvis in a wig needs to have several seats. Yes Michael not only slept with Jill but he still wants her. Read it and weep ho. Anyway, how crazy is it that Gloria is Jill's cousin and Michael and Elvis drag's marriage counselor? The irony is completely sickening! Lol. I hope Jill has a man in her life. And I hope Elvis face puts two and two together about Jill's daughter being Michael's daughter too. It's sad that he doesn't know he has a child out there and is missing some golden moments, but it's the bed that he made so he has to lay his narrow lying ass in it. I'm sure Kaya has a father figure anyway though.
Author's Response:
Hey! Sorry for the late answer :S
That's what happen when you have unprotected sex lol! A little blond haired baby :) The word is small indeed, that would be funny is Michael ever bump in Jill and Kaya too... Just sayin ;)
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2013 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh They have a child. :). We definitely know its Michael's.She is so cute.Poor Lisa, Michael finally got what he wanted even though he doesn't know. Looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Hey new reader! I hope you like the story. It will definitely be more dramatic on the following chapters :) Thank you for the rate and review :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2013 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
Just go away, Lisa! Just. Go. The Fuck. AWAY!!! GRRRRR!!!!!!!! >;(
Author's Response:
LOL! Maybe she will... Thank you for the review and the rate! :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2013 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 11
I CAN"T BELIEVE HE"S STILL MARRIED TO THAT HO.
Now that's out of my system.
Michael is SOOOOOOO stupid in this story.
Author's Response:
LOL! Indeed...
Thank you for the review and the rate :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2013 08:38 am Title: Chapter 11
My Dr Phil is channeling through...
I need to be frank with you here. I think Gloria's opinion is a little off base when she talks about LIsa.
Lisa is no angel, but I don't see her only giving a fuck about the fame, as indicated in Lisa's POV at the end of the chapter. Lisa and Michael, to me, married for the wrong reasons. I think if they had taken their time with each other, their love would have been stronger. But Gloria got something right; Michael married Lisa because she was there for him and because she promised children at once.
It was unrealistic, it was based on stressful times, and both of them should have slowed the hell down. maybe then they could have made it work.
I know that this will end with Mike and Jill, but I also hope that Lisa and Michael realize that this isn't a case of one person being the culprit and the other the victim; BOTH OF THEM are victims and culprits of this marraige.
You read that in Dr Phil's voice.
lmao
Author's Response:
I wished I lived in the US because I have no idea how Dr Phil sound lmao! When I saw your name, I got very excited! You always have some interesting points on my stories. And I hope you will add a new short story soon :D
Michael and Lisa are together for the wrong reasons but it doesn't mean they can't make it work... And who says Jill and Michael will end up together?
[Report This]Date: Aug 12, 2013 02:01 am Title: Chapter 11
How can a couple spend 2 years in together in therapy and just not figure out that they don't belong together? They could have moved on and been so much happier without each other instead of suffering. And Lisa Marie still ain't gave him no damn kids, smh. I noticed that she missed taking the pill the other day but did the have sex that day? Eww, anyway all it takes is just one time and nine months later here comes baby. I'm surprised she didn't confront Michael about Jill but then again I don't think she cared enough or she was cocky because Michael choose her over Jill.
Can't wait to hear more about Jill in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
They want to believe it can work. Especially Michael. He won't give up on their marriage. Maybe Lisa never confronted Michael about Jill because she isn't a threat at the moment. Let's see if things change! ;)
Thank you for the review and the rate
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2013 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
I thought things would get better between Michael and Lisa HAHAHAHahahahahaha........
*laugh slowly fades* *clears throat*
Anyway Annie, I noticed something in your previous chapter that makes me smiling.
"Harper doesn’t know if she should accept this gift. Yes, it is only a bracelet; the kind of one you get for 2$."
Oh, dear.
Author's Response:
NAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Thank you for letting me know girl :)
Date: Aug 11, 2013 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Smh I don't even have the energy chile.. We all knew this. Elvis in drag ain't shit and will never be shit. Even the therapist sees it. She likes the fame. She don't want Michael or his kids. He's so fuckin stupid if he can't see that. Why has he not divorced her? I hope she cheats on his dumb ass again. Ugh.
Author's Response:
Hey girl! This is just the beginning lol! Maybe Michael needs someone to help him! News from Jill in the next chapter :)
Date: Aug 11, 2013 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG! i more chapters moooooore D: plz
Author's Response:
Next chapter soon :)