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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2013 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 16

Lawd.. The drama is about to be on from here on out. Michael knows about Kaya and I hope he figures out Lisa knew too. But the most epic thing of all is he will finally divorce Lisa, build a relationship with his daughter, and Jill has a relationship with Godfrey. That's all I want at this point. Michael doesn't deserve Jill and I am not here for his bullshit and lame ass sob stories about how much he claims he loves her, misses her, wtf. FUCK his feelings. I don't care if he's single forever once he leaves Lisa. I just want Jill to have some happiness. I want her and Godfrey to become a couple and be happy. It's sad that she hasn't had a real relationship. Michael doesn't count at all because his lying ass was married. The best thing he's done for her is give her a child. I hope Godfrey can be the one she falls in love with and shows her what a real, HONEST love and relationship is like. She doesn't need to answer any of Michael's questions about Godfrey either! She needs to say "none of your damn business! The only thing you need to be concerned with is your daughter." In that ORDER! 



Author's Response:

This is just the beginning of the drama lol! Get ready! I think It'll take time for Michael to figure it out. All he has in mind is how lucky and happy he is to have a daughter. He doesn't care about Jill hiding it to him for so long, so I don't think he will investigate to know who knew before him. Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 15

awwww Michael will meet his daughter! :3



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Yeeees :)

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 15

AWWW!! I'm so honored that you chose to use my idea! Especially in a story that I absolutely adore! <3

Can't wait to read about this, what is sure to be awkward, encounter....especially when Michael sees Kaya! Gigi's gonna have some explaining to do! ;)

I know it's silly to jump to conclusions just because Godfrey seems to have a lot of money, but I can't help but wonder if he might be into something illegal..hmm.

And I love the gif from the Mtv 10th Anniversary special. So handsome! :)



Author's Response:

Hey Kendra! Thank you again! I had no idea what to write for the next chapter! :) I love this gif too :D!!

I won't say anything about Godfrey lol. You'll have to keep reading to find out if he is into something illegal or not!

Thank you for the review and the rate :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 15

I had a feeling this would happen. I hope he sees Kaya and realizes that she's his child! The truth needs to come out now! And I hope he finds out Lisa's ugly big chinned ass lied. That's the answer to his question. Drowning in love my ass. More like drowning in a web of lies, bullshit, fuckery, and deceit! Lawd I can't wait. I just can't. I just hope she and Godfrey have a good time. It's time for Jill to have a man! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) YEAH! Let's hope his fatherly instinct help him figure out Kaya is his daughter! I agree when you say Jill should have a man and preferably Godfrey....

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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 03:27 pm Title: PART 1

I hope Michael recognizes Kaya as his the moment he lays eyes on her......I mean, he's bound to notice not only her age but the fact she's half black (even if she's blonde haired) and Godfrey isn't! Let Michael's trifling ass be presented with the image of another man raising his daughter. He doesn't have to know that Jill and Godfrey just met. And Michael should hear Kaya call Alex 'Daddy' just to twist the knife further. That's what his ass gets for using Jill and then still choosing to stay with that stupid hag.Then, once Lisa Marie is removed like the cancer that she is, Michael can watch as Jill doesn't give him the time of day and marries Godfrey instead.

Revenge is definitely a dish best served cold.  

And FYI I still don't see how Jill could EVER forgive Michael for what he did. Sure, he should be in Kaya's life but that's it. 

 



Author's Response:

LMAO! I think Michael will have an heart attack once he hear Kaya call Alex 'Daddy' and Jill having another man. All the things he could have been for Jill and Kaya...

Oh, just because it's MJFiction, doesn't mean they have to be together at the end...

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Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 03, 2013 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 15

Ooooh!! I can't until Michael finds out about Kaya!

 

 

p.s. What's the name of the model that stars as Kalliope in Your Love Is King...



Author's Response:

Her name's Tsanna Latouche :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2013 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

I can't wait for Lisa's lies to blow up in her face. Counting down the chapers until Michael ditches her ass. I hate her in this story.

Glad that Jill met the sexy ass Godfrey. She needs a man to treat her right. 



Author's Response:

Lisa is wrong for what she did and one day karma will hit her! :/ I am here for Godfrey and Jill too! Thank you for the review and the rate :)

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2013 05:40 am Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, Lisa....a dinner and sex will make up for hiding the fact that Michael has a daughter out there.. *eye roll*

Jill deserves a date with a nice guy(and he is fine, too!). Maybe Michael should just happen to be at the same restaurant at the same time and get jealous. Not to mention, see Kaya...once he sees her, he'll just know she's his! ;)



Author's Response:

Lisa thinks she can get away with it :/ Thank you for the idea, I used it for the new chapter :)

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 14

I say Jill should go for it. Have a date with Godfrey, get to know him and have a good time. Michael choose to stay with Lisa Marie and make his marriage work so she has nothing holding her back. I hope Godfrey is a great guy and they have chemistry. 

Michael knows Lisa Marie well it's just too bad that he didn't follow his instants and question her "romantic dinner". I swear Lisa Marie is just digging the hole she's in bigger and bigger. 



Author's Response:

Jill is deffo going on a date with sexy ass Godfrey! Don't worry, I don't think Michael will stop investigation yet! :) Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 11:31 am Title: Chapter 14

D: 

next chapter please !!!



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New chapter up :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 01, 2013 09:36 am Title: Chapter 14

Good! I like this Godfrey guy already, he is straight forward and to the point. Yassss. And ugh at Elvis Marie. I'm really sick of this phony bitch. Michael needs to know about his daughter. Just because her ass is jealous and mad that Jill gave him something that she can't and won't, she thinks it's ok to hide that from him. Well tough titty for her because the second Michael finds out that not only does he have a child but that this ugly bitch KNEW about it AND deliberately lied and kept it from him, he will leave her trifling ass. So she's diggin her own sorry ass grave. Michael will find out about Kaya and know that she's his, and Elvis face can't do a damn thing about it besides seethe with jealousy. Michael and Jill made a baby and he deserves to know that. His own flesh and blood trumps anything Elvis Marie could give to him. I don't care how many nasty ass dinners she cooks for him. Once he finds out he has a child, her punk ass will immediately be bumped to number 2 in his life, if that. I can't wait til he leaves her lying ass. Smh can't believe she's only being nice because she's jealous and scared cuz she knows Michael is gonna leave her ass. Pathetic and I am absolutely disgusted. I feel badly for Kaya because that little girl deserves to know her real dad. Damn shame. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :)

Godfrey knows what he wants and this is great. Jill needs to have fun with him :) Lisa is crazy! Once Michael finds out, he will be pissed! Jill needs to tell him about Kaya. Maybe something will happn and force her to tell him :)

Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: rahelicious Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 11:19 am Title: Chapter 13

please continue!!!!!! xD

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New chapter up :)

Reviewer: ashleyberry200 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2013 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 13

Godfrey  is delicious!!



Author's Response:

YYYYAAASSSS

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Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2013 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 13

Lisa Marie is such a selfish person and her whole personality is just undesirable. The things she does to Michael are so unfair and hurtful, smh. I seriously hope Michael will never forgive her for messing with his life like this cause its a thin line between love and hate and trust me Lisa Marie just crossed it. Whatever she's planning can't be good for her marriage or Jill. 

Alexander is truely a bestfriend for standing by Jill through out her pregnancy and helping out with Kaya. But Jill is right he needs to find his own love and not try to push Jill into a relationship because Kaya needs a dad. Often marriages like that that don't last and do more harm to the children than good.

Now Godfrey is one prime piece of male specimen! And he saved Jill's life, bonus! I hope we get to see more of him in the story because he is one piece of hot eye candy! I just hope he has nothing to do with Lisa Marie.

 



Author's Response:

Hello Vicki :)

Once Michael finds out about Kaya, he is about to pissed! And bye bye Lisa :) Alex is so cute but yeah, he has to find his own love and not settle just because he cares for Jill. Godfrey is sexy, wooow, Jill needs to tap that!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2013 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 13

I can't believe Lisa isn't going to tell him, what a fucking bitch! Irregardless of what happened he has a right to be in his child's life. Jill is wrong for hiding it from him also but at least her intentions aren't selfish.

I am so mad that they are still married, seriously Michael what are you doing? They are supposed to be working on their marriage and there is absolutely no effort on her part. First she cheats, lies to him about wanting his kids, and then hides his REAL kid from him. Why on earth is Michael still wasting his time with this trash? He's not even in love with her. Ugh, what a dumbass he is. I hope he finds out that Lisa is keeping this from him because I don't see him ever forgiving her. She needs to go away!

Godfrey is sexy. Jill should go for him. Or Alex. Anyone but Michael at this point. Although I do hope he gets to be in Kaya's life she needs a Daddy and we all know Michael would make an excellent one.



Author's Response:

He girl :D :)

Lisa is wrong and as soon as Michael knows about ther lie, she will regret :/ Oh you know Michael likes to think there is still a chance. Godfrey is foine, yes! Jill needs a piece of that ass and forget about Michael.

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